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163 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 15, 2025
“Shall we?” Pepper asked, gesturing toward the doors. “There’s a lot you need to know if you’re going to navigate this place without...” They hesitated, choosing their words carefully. “Without drawing the wrong kind of attention.”
“No one survives here alone. We all have to learn, adapt, and sometimes pretend to fail when success might draw the wrong kind of attention. [...] My first week, I accidentally enchanted all my underwear to sing whenever I got aroused. Or at least, that’s the story everyone knows.”
Pepper’s eyes gleamed with something sharper than mischief. “Let’s just say it’s better to be seen as charmingly incompetent than dangerously talented, especially at first. [...] but not before I’d established my reputation as talented but chaotic.”
By tomorrow, nobody would dare call me all flash and no substance. I'd ensure it.
They continue like that for the rest of the novella, with not a single thought or reference to being anything other than loveable, airheaded chaos. That wouldn't bother me at all, had Pepper not been introduced differently.
I have a lot more in my reading journal, but at this point I've spent more time on a review than I did reading. Some quick notes, both good and bad, split down the middle.
* Smut (please note, this series is labelled as erotica) is short, I suppose it's sweet sometimes, but is bare on details and doesn't feel impactful, emotionally. Not hot, no feels, why am I here?
* Absolute teasing with no follow through, in multiple places by the author. Hellhound Lube is a thing, and its ability is hyped up. What we actually get out of the story? It's poured on an appendage, and is not mentioned again. Not a single time, not even during the sex scene that it's involved in.
* "You don't know know what you do to me." "Show me." FADE TO BLACK, EXCUSE ME? At the end of the story there's a link to download the scene, an apology from the author that they couldn't fit it in. I'm bewildered and annoyed. Is that the good erotica, detailed and written out, that I expected? Maybe. I'm not downloading it to find out.
* There's a magical, mandatory, emotional bonding experience and it's very sweet! The author hits the perfect line between detailing and summarizing, without cheapening it. We get some cool backstory from various characters.
* The chapter titles continue to be amazing. They're somehow exactly what they say on the tin, and still so witty and hilarious.
* I paused reading the book for ten whole days, and remembered exactly what was happening as I left off, which is almost unheard of for me. The story is so unique, and the plot is so clear, I read the last 5 sentences of the previous chapter and was good to go. (My usual is re-reading half a chapter to two full chapters.)
For my fellow trans folks: I didn't feel that this ended up a queernormative world. Even when viewing through Pepper's eyes, it fell short for me. There was one thing that felt like a sledgehammer to the hip.
Pepper casually refers to themself as a girlfriend and it's only noteworthy to the other character because of the title, not the... Traditionally gendered term? I would like to give the benefit of the doubt to the author, but I'm not. People can use whatever labels/titles/words they'd like about themselves, including mixing and matching - I do it. It was the final nail in the coffin for my feeling that Pepper's identity was tossed onto them as an afterthought, regardless. I didn't get a single vibe of transness out of Pepper, nor anything around them, outside of their very first introduction in Book 1.