Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed this but there are some issues with this that probably could have been helped with some further editing.
- There is so many characters and I got lost on who was what, and what their motivations were. Normally in a why choose I can quickly remember who is who and what point they are at with the FMC but with this I just immediately got so lost and it took a bit to remember anything about them. It doesn't help that it jumps between their name and their rodeo name, and they use these interchangeably.
- Each chapter the plot resets and it jumps around and there is nothing really to keep you to where you are and what is happening. I understand that you want to jump from rodeo competition to competition but a lot of the things come out of nowhere. If there was someone to read this in advance and just leave little threads or references to what is coming next it would make sense to jump around.
- The ending also didn't make sense with what has happened earlier. These MMC's know that her ex husband was a fuck head and abused her, and fucked around on her constantly. Hell, even one of the MMC's was actively there for one of her abuse sessions (if i understand the video tape scene correctly), but they all agree to his 'deal' for the money despite actively all hating him except for one guy? I'm sorry but that isnt love.
Will I read the next book in the series? Maybe, but man was I hoping for this to be better than it was.