⭐️⭐️ // A beautifully written concept that ultimately fell flat
I hate giving this two stars, but I have to be honest. This book had so much potential, and in some ways, it really shines—but unfortunately, the overall execution didn’t land for me.
Let’s start with what did work: the writing itself. The prose is strong, polished, and clearly comes from someone with a professional background in storytelling. It didn’t read like a debut in terms of grammar or sentence structure—this author has talent, and I’d absolutely read something else from them in the future. The premise, too, was compelling—a Beauty and the Beast-style curse in a mysterious kingdom? That’s exactly the kind of setup I’m drawn to.
But the rest… was kind of a mess.
The pacing was painfully slow—possibly the slowest book I’ve read this year. It felt like so much of the content was filler, with long stretches of internal thought or repetition that didn’t push the plot forward. The world itself, while intriguing on the surface, didn’t make a lot of sense once you looked closer. The rules of the curse were inconsistent, the shifting into animal forms had no real narrative purpose, and the overall magical system lacked clarity or depth.
I wanted to love the female main character, but I couldn’t connect with her choices—particularly the decision to stay queen in a cursed kingdom, keeping dozens (or hundreds?) of people trapped with her for eight years. There was no real explanation for why anyone remained loyal to her other than “she’s royal,” which wasn’t enough for me.
And unfortunately, the romance—the heart of what I thought would be a swoony, yearning love story—just didn’t land. There was no tension, no spark, and barely any interaction between the two leads before they were suddenly a thing. I kept waiting for chemistry that never arrived.
The ending teased a shift into a completely new world for book two, but after struggling to invest in this one, I’m not motivated to continue the series.
All in all, it’s a solid debut in terms of style, and the author clearly has potential. But this book needed tighter pacing, more character development, a clearer world-building foundation, and a romance that actually made me feel something. Sadly, it missed the mark for me—but I’ll be keeping an eye on what this author does next.