This book was chosen for my book club. I read the premise and was very excited to dive in. The first couple of chapters with James and Hassan hooked me.
Then, we dive in to Asher and Miriam’s story. It was good. Interesting. I liked where it was going. Then, their story abruptly stopped.
Next, we move to Lucien and Cassius. Then, Lucien and Edmund. Again, the story abruptly stops.
Lastly, we move back to James’ story. However, even though there were many chapters dedicated to his story, and his story did progress quite a bit, his story abruptly stops as well, and in the end, I don’t feel like any of the main characters’ story arcs in this book were fully fleshed out or even partially resolved.
I understand that this is to be a series, and I love that. But I have way too many questions and not nearly enough answers. Not to mention, I felt like the timeline was so convoluted during Lucien’s story that I had a hard time keeping up with it. At one point, I was assuming the story flashed a couple of years in the future but then there was a comment where her mother had been gone for centuries (plural)??! Perhaps that is my lack of reading comprehension showing, but I often found myself confused and wandering blindly through the story’s timeline.
Lastly, the prose includes over-usage of language devices for my taste. I concede that this is inherently subjective and picky of me, but there were so many sentences using “as if,” and “as though,” that I started underlining them as I went. That, and the use of the phrase “as though the ____ [room, forest, etc.] were holding its breath.” Again, I know this is nitpicking, but I also underlined those because they happened so often.
All of this to say that I didn’t hate this book. I think the idea is really clever. I am still confused about the organic material left behind, and the way that blood is consumed. And I wish this would have gone through another 1-2 rounds of editing. However, this story is interesting and has the potential to be something really good. I hoped for more answers this book, but I suppose I will have to return for book 2 for those!