Another good section of this series. This one is much steamier, so definitely up to a mature audiences only rating. As I had guessed, Ms. Ward does very well writing the erotic scenes, but there were a couple of things that threw me a bit off even during those. I continue to adore Jace, and for the most part I am liking Andrea a bit more. I realized by part 2 that she reminded me quite a bit of Rory Gilmore, and the mention of pro/con lists early in this one solidified that. Now, Gilmore Girls is one of my all time favorite tv shows, but Rory was always the weakest link for me. Kinda applies to this series as well - it's a very decent storyline, but Andrea continues to be the weakest link.
And it still needs some editing. Words out of place, things that don't fit with what we know of a character, wrong words used...I think this one may have had the most errors that took me out od the story so far. For all the areas that were improved, there were more that bothered me in this one, but I am jumping immediately to the next part.