You can see some evolution in Williams's writing after having been abroad, and in the ten years since his last collection of original works. I have to admit, the poems themselves didn't strike me as interesting--a lot of them being grouped in ways that seemed like stanzas in three columns on a page, but each group was often a single line, and that meant the enjambments didn't grab as much, in my opinion. As always, rhythm is a huge factor of the poems here and that never ceases to be the highlight of his work--the way you can hear these, feel the beats.
However, surprisingly I found the kind of "screenplay"s that he put in the second part and especially the final section re-imagining Miles Davis and Juliette Greco's romance in Paris to be the best parts of this collection. I think actually he would do great writing for the stage or film. I went and looked and found he wrote and directed a film that was released two years ago, and will definitely watch that now. Having now read all of Williams' poetry books, I think I would say , said the shotgun to the head is the best, but s/he and this one might be tied for next best, with Dead Emcee Scrolls coming in last only because the final section of journals isn't as strong as the rest. Glad I have read all of this, and seen this side of him to think about as I bop to the tunes he releases.