The Major and the Lady
“The Major’s Mistake”, written by Andrea Pickens, is book seven of Intrepid Heroines. Miranda, the lead female in the story does fit this description after she was scandalously divorced by her husband. She endeavors to take care of her son the best she can, she doctors neighbors, employees, and tenants with her knowledge, skill, herbs, and potions. She’s smart and likable. I like an older, strong female lead and Miranda fits this bill. Julian, her former husband, has returned, severely injured, from war to take up his mantle as a marquess. What did he have going for him? He wanted to get to know his son and promised as a gentleman not to take him away from Miranda. He did have some compassion beneath his soldier’s armor. Unfortunately, the backstory of this couple and the cause of their divorce was glossed over. The story mainly focuses on the reconnection of Julian and Miranda. I’m not sure exactly what I expected from this historical romance. Although, I did expect more heat and steam between them. Where was the fire, the passion? Julian and Miranda are older now, but at times they didn’t act like it. The bridge between them was their son, Justin, who was a cute, precocious, active six year old Julian had never met prior to this time. He wasn’t even aware of any offspring from his marriage to Miranda. What a surprise for him! Justin brought them together time and time again. They were forced to be civil for Justin’s sake. The angst in the story involved unrest in the area of Julian’s estate. This added some depth to the story. The story went along at a good pace until the end, then events moved too quickly. It seemed as though the author was in a hurry to conclude her tale instead of adding a few more chapters to conclude the story in a more meaningful, satisfying way. It was difficult for me to give this story a star rating. I have read and enjoyed so many of Ms. Pickens’ stories. Sadly, I just felt this one was lacking. There is a good premise here, but it needs a lot more work to make it a cohesive, satisfying story.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review, my thoughts and opinions are entirely my own.