Warning, there will be spoilers.
This book literally took me like three hours to read, not counting the breaks I took to make dinner, wash my bedding, and browse tumblr—basically anything I could do to keep from having to read more of this book—because there was absolutely zero substance to it. It was a relatively quick and mindless read that involved little to no effort.
What I liked:
-Neferet. All I could think while reading Neferet’s chapters was how much nicer her world view sounded than that of a world with Zoey Redbird in charge. Her visions of her world were detailed and beautiful, in a dark and morbid kind of way. Her character has pretty much always been fascinating to me, even if she isn’t the most believable or successful villain.
What I disliked:
-Why in the ever-loving fuck do these authors have to be so damn childish? Zoey is literally sitting in a jail cell for committing a double murder, knowing she’s going to reject the change and die all alone, and she’s still thinking about “psaghetti”. What the fuck?
-Point of view. More fucking points of view in this book. As if the last ones weren’t annoying enough, in this book we have random chapters from one of Neferet’s human supplicants which served no real purpose to the story. It could have just as easily been told from Neferet’s point of view, which I actually enjoyed and it would have made more of an impact. Oh, and we get some from Detective Marx as well. And his thoughts read like that of a teenage girl. Of fucking course.
-These authors are terrible. They treat characters—especially male characters—like total shit once they’ve fallen out of Zoey’s favor. Poor Erik is constantly ragged on by Zoey and her bitchy friends. Nicole steals Shaylinn and Zoey, Aphrodite, and Stevie Rae are gleefully watching the scene go down between Erik, Nicole, and Shaylinn, making fun of him for the awkward situation. These authors and characters are all fucking hags. Everyone is such a fucking bitch to Erik! God damn, he can’t even ask a simple question without some hag biting his head off. And his relationship with Shaunee comes out of absolutely fucking nowhere. Literally, there is no buildup and they’re suddenly a thing.
-Okay, rape is a horrible, disgusting crime. Everyone knows that. But these authors use it as a crutch and to try and make it seem like Neferet’s crimes are the fault of her father, not herself. She strangled her father to death, and the high council literally covered it up for her and allowed her to ‘start over’ so the entirety of their world didn’t know the truth about their high priestess. When Detective Marx objects, Lenobia says, “And please remember, Detective, that this man raped and brutalized his sixteen-year-old daughter.” Page 127. It’s awful, and he should have gone to prison for what he did, but they literally excused a murder committed by their future high priestess. That’s bullshit!
-Kalona. He’s an interesting character and one of the better written ones in the series, but his whole arc these last few books has been laughably stupid. When he dies and is reunited with Nyx, she welcomes him with open arms, accepts his warrior oath, and kisses him. He’s raped countless women over the centuries, and Nyx just forgives him because he sacrificed himself for a human he didn’t even know, which is totally out of his true character. And finding out that Erebus wasn’t really Nyx’s consort was so fucking stupid. They let Kalona think they were lovers even knowing it was driving him mad with jealously, and he fell because of it. And all is just forgiven between the three of them? Are you fucking kidding me?!
-Neferet’s defeat. It happened way too quickly, and way too easily. All of this buildup—twelve whole books—and the final battle is over in like five pages. It was so annoying and hard to follow. Zoey did something, Neferet did something, Zoey did something, Neferet did something. There was no emotion at all, or any real sense of urgency. You knew that Zoey was going to succeed in defeating Neferet without any real sacrifices. Aurox’s sacrifice was a bit surprising, but I didn’t really care since I hate all of these characters except for Aphrodite.
-Nyx. I’ve never liked Nyx. I’ve never thought anything she does or doesn’t do is even remotely believable. She literally could have saved countless lives if she had just taken Neferet’s powers from her like any sensible and just God or Goddess would do, but we get spoon fed some bullshit about ~free choice~ and that’s supposed to make her seem like a wise Goddess, but really it just makes her lazy. Nxy’s personality is also nauseatingly forced and fake. She acts like a giggly preteen, not a thousands of years old goddess that birthed and watches over an entire race of people. And her happily ever after with Kalona was disgusting. One good deed doesn’t undo a rape-fueled lifetime of hatred. Shame on these authors.
Overall, this book was shit. Pure and total shit. I can’t believe these books were ever published, as they’re filled with nonsense, as well as racist, sexist, homophobic bullshit. I wouldn’t recommend these books to anyone, ever. Avoid at all costs. 0.0