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Promised to the Mafia Prince
I offered myself to save my brother.
A bond. A claim. A sentence.
Luca De Rossi is heir to the most feared mafia dynasty in Portenza—an alpha forged in blood, trained in cruelty.
He said he'd spare my family if I mated him.
He never said he’d want more.
I thought I was just another deal. Another omega to own.
But Luca? He doesn’t just want control. He wants to destroy everything he's inherited—and he wants me beside him when it burns.
Now I'm carrying his heir.
The De Rossi name is growing inside me like a fuse.
And if anyone tries to take it away, Luca will make the whole world bleed.
A bond. A claim. A sentence.
Luca De Rossi is heir to the most feared mafia dynasty in Portenza—an alpha forged in blood, trained in cruelty.
He said he'd spare my family if I mated him.
He never said he’d want more.
I thought I was just another deal. Another omega to own.
But Luca? He doesn’t just want control. He wants to destroy everything he's inherited—and he wants me beside him when it burns.
Now I'm carrying his heir.
The De Rossi name is growing inside me like a fuse.
And if anyone tries to take it away, Luca will make the whole world bleed.
158 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 27, 2025
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Displaying 1 - 7 of 7 reviews
January 18, 2026
i feel like i’ve read this book in a different font...
July 29, 2025
DNF 59% Is this AI? I mean, I expect OTT storylines and insta-love from this genre. I don't think I'm gonna find a Hugo award winning author writing omegaverse romance or anything, but this was all jumbled an inconsistent. Many sentence fragments and continuity errors, entire paragraphs of exact word for word sentences a few pages apart. World building and character traits were all over the place. Looks like the cover is AI generated, too. I can only assume the authors are using an LLM for their writing.
September 11, 2025
So the story was cool... there is a but in here though which why it's only 3 stars. I think it might be a case of editing that is the issue. They endeavored for a high level of intrigue but somethings are not well conveyed. The scene in the blood vault is the most obvious of these. When they get to the blood room Eli and Luca are together... then the door got blown open and that whole convo happened including Luca asking where the omega (Eli) is ... and them boom.. ELI shows up to save the day...
The timeline and action makes no sense. There are very few indicator of who long has passed but you get the impassion of less than a month and so other things make little to no sense in that context.
The story was good though.
The timeline and action makes no sense. There are very few indicator of who long has passed but you get the impassion of less than a month and so other things make little to no sense in that context.
The story was good though.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 14, 2025
Good Idea, Terrible Execution
Do Not Bother!!! I never write reviews but I couldn’t subject someone else to this without warning.
Two authors and it was still this poorly written. The idea is a good one, I mean, who doesn’t like a good mafia troupe? It is common enough.
This book’s pacing was terrible and it did not feel like there was a connection between the characters. The transition between time lapses were so confusing, I kept having to go back to check if I missed a paragraph or something. If someone said this was written by AI, I would 100% believe that, because some sentences are repeated in a very weird way or dialogue is off. Characters say one thing in one paragraph then completely contradictory in the next…..so confusing. Eli’s brother was his main motivation yet he hardly gets mentioned apart from this. We never get a dialogue between the brothers….what happened to him? There’s a scene that starts off with Eli and Luca before Luca’s father comes in, speaking like he had Eli kidnapped, and Luca asks where is he and I’m thinking what do you mean? He was with you 2 sentences ago!
This needs more than a beta reader which I why I don’t understand how you can get this quality when there are 2 authors……did neither one reread the draft in its entirety before publishing?
Don’t waste your time.
Do Not Bother!!! I never write reviews but I couldn’t subject someone else to this without warning.
Two authors and it was still this poorly written. The idea is a good one, I mean, who doesn’t like a good mafia troupe? It is common enough.
This book’s pacing was terrible and it did not feel like there was a connection between the characters. The transition between time lapses were so confusing, I kept having to go back to check if I missed a paragraph or something. If someone said this was written by AI, I would 100% believe that, because some sentences are repeated in a very weird way or dialogue is off. Characters say one thing in one paragraph then completely contradictory in the next…..so confusing. Eli’s brother was his main motivation yet he hardly gets mentioned apart from this. We never get a dialogue between the brothers….what happened to him? There’s a scene that starts off with Eli and Luca before Luca’s father comes in, speaking like he had Eli kidnapped, and Luca asks where is he and I’m thinking what do you mean? He was with you 2 sentences ago!
This needs more than a beta reader which I why I don’t understand how you can get this quality when there are 2 authors……did neither one reread the draft in its entirety before publishing?
Don’t waste your time.
June 18, 2025
WOW WOW explosive
Different from other mafia stories but that's a good thing
Lots of action betrayal and strategy planning - you do get a HEA and a beautiful baby but only after you get your world rocked!!!
Thank you - Lori
Different from other mafia stories but that's a good thing
Lots of action betrayal and strategy planning - you do get a HEA and a beautiful baby but only after you get your world rocked!!!
Thank you - Lori
August 25, 2025
dnf @ 80%. This jumped all over so much I had a hard time following it. It went from zero to sixty with no information in between. It felt like one author wrote a page and then handed it to the other author without having a story mapped out at all. 🤣
September 19, 2025
WTF was that? It was just a bunch of word vomit repeated over and over again disguised as a book.
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