I don't wish to be rude, however the only reason my review has any stars is because I felt like the plot was good.
This book is so repetitive I ended up taking a break from reading because I was struggling to get into the book. The fact it has 3 chapters makes it even more difficult to read as they're quite long chapters with multiple things happening in them, this makes it confusing to follow as the main character Alex visits many places per chapter, and the transitions between scenes (like a cafe and warehouse) are not smooth so you start reading the next paragraph thinking he is still at home but suddenly he's reviewing CCTV footage?
There was absolutely no reasoning for why Alex wanted to investigate the situation the book is about, which made it hard for me to want to understand more. The idea of the plot itself was good, but without these little bits of information it makes it hard for a reader to get into a book.
There was A LOT of repetition in this book, whether it was repeated dialogue, repeated scenes or even repeated bits of text. I appreciate that psychological thrillers may have repetition in, especially if the focus is on a character who may or may not be crazy. But having the same line "Her tone was light, teasing, yet it held an undercurrent of something more, something that suggested she saw right through his flimsy facade" within a matter of a couple of paragraphs of each other seems a bit extreme to me.
Alongside the repetition, that different scenes don't flow smoothly, and that most sentences have several , in them. Everything is very much over described. Again, the book is implying that the main character may be crazy and paranoid but every time this character hides in an alley or warehouse it's described in far too much detail for my personal preference. Every light is anemic, the dark is always oppressive. I believe that I may have been able to accept how descriptive this entire book was, if different words had been used.
There were also capitalisation of Alex's name and Mike's name in the last chapter which hadn't appeared at all in the book prior to the last 10%.
I really do hate to give such a negative review, but this plot could've been written better and likely over in half the amount of pages. But we need to know that "she could see through his flimsy facade" more than once, and that the light is anemic and the flashlight beam is weak.