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review
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✨✨✨ - 3.4 rounded to 3
𝓸𝓿𝓮𝓻𝓪𝓵𝓵:
💣 violence: 5/10 (powers that can be used violently)
🌶️ spice: 3/10 (checking someone out, 'hot', 'cute', kisses, etc.)
🤬 language: 8/10 (*ss, d*mn, f**k, p*ss, h*ll, b*tch, freak)
➕ other content: 2/10 (discrimination, diabetes, misogynists)
👩🏼 age rating: 14+
𝓽𝓻𝓸𝓹𝓮𝓼:
↠ dating show
↠ 'enemies' to lovers
↠ he falls first
↠ denial/slow burn
↠ magical powers
↠ lets her go, goes after her
*spoilers ahead!*
𝓬𝓱𝓪𝓻𝓪𝓬𝓽𝓮𝓻𝓼:
charlie green:
"or should I say Char, Charlotte, Charlie Green?"
power: mind control 🧠🎮
↠ like umm I would not feel comfortable around her! is she controlling me, is she not?
↠ she could NOT make up her mind (haha) about will! one minute she's like 'eww who would like him' and, I kid you not, the next page she goes 'oh, he's so hot 🥰'... 😒
↠ she's a swimmer!! made me so excited, though it's def not even prominent in the book, just a mention of swim meets 🏊🏼♀️ but also yesss bc that's so cool, there's not that many books that have swimmers in them
↠ she's barely known will and she's always assessing hers and his actions like they hold the answers to the mysteries of the universe
↠ when her power was revealed, she acted like she cared but she really didn't but then while her friends are talking to her about her ex, she plays on their sympathy and acts like she lost everything and really cared but bsfr, there was no emotion in the beginning
↠ also this was not a book about a dating show fr, it was more about her having diabetes (which was actually really interesting!)
will:
power: ...spiderman?? he can shoot elastic-y webs from his hands. sounds kinda familiar, huh? 🕸️🤨
↠ I kinda liked him, like he said stuff like he didn't like the idea of the dating show being so misogynous (yess, girl power!! 💪🏼🤭)
↠ awww he legit liked charlie for who she was, which is really rare to find in a mannn 🎀
↠ he always felt the need to 'save the day' though... that's what bothered me most, like all the people around you also have powers they can use!
↠ bland boy right here, though, like his personality went mia during the show
bridgette:
power: fire 🔥
↠ whoo, she's a character for sure!!
↠ the person she was at the beginning was fs very different than the end
↠ once she became friends w/ charlie and ginny, she was not like a better person, but I def liked her personality and how she acted a lot better 😊
↠ I would love to learn more about her background story! she was a really interesting person at the end of the book and I would love a sequel with her 😜
ginny:
power: growing plants (including poisonous) 🌱
↠ now THIS is the girl who should have the flames bc she has an ATTITUDE. like whoaa back the t-rex up girlie
↠ but also I liked her bc she was so sweet (the rest of the time)
↠ idk why she thought PAINT could cause PAIN?? (ch. 13) like umm no last I checked it doesn't 🤔
↠ not really much is revealed about her personally, like nothing really about her family except her grandpa and her aunt
𝓸𝓽𝓱𝓮𝓻 𝓽𝓱𝓸𝓾𝓰𝓱𝓽𝓼:
↠ dude dixon (yes, that's his name) was HILL-AIR-E-US, like omgosh the jazz hands?! bahaha 🤣 like what a freaking idol 🤌🏼🤌🏼
↠ okay, I did not understand the glitches thing, like nothing was explained. are they born with their powers? if they are, how did they find out? if you marry a non as a glitch, is your kid a glitch? why are glitches disapproved of? why are they all thought of as villains? is it bc of one glitch or a group of them? what is their history? when did they originate? how did they come to be? I HAVE SO MANY QUESTIONS!!!!
↠ the puns in this book? I don't think some were intended but they were NOT funny 🫥
↠ what is bolus?? charlie's bolus levels were always wacked and I had no idea what it was the entire time
𝓮𝓭𝓲𝓽𝓸𝓻𝓲𝓪𝓵 𝓷𝓸𝓽𝓮𝓼:
↠ 'were' should have been 'we're' in ch. 12
↠ some repetition? not as bad as lauren roberts (obvi) but also that's expected since there's only so many synonyms (#synonyms.com!)
↠ when writing bridgette's name, instead of a comma there was an 'm' which is actually so real bc it's right next to the comma on a computer's keyboard
↠ added quotation mark when it isn't needed since no one is speaking
↠ 'condensation' was not the intended word in ch. 35 (not sure what it was supposed to be)
↠ nothing else really, just some missing commas, etc.
𝓬𝓸𝓷𝓬𝓵𝓾𝓼𝓲𝓸𝓷:
this was a really odd book. there were a lot of parts that I enjoyed, but so much was missing. I needed some background info about glitches and their powers, how it works, and stuff like that. I also wish it were dual pov so we could learn a little more about will since he was honestly pretty bland the entire time. also there was basically no plot until the end 😭
if you like dating show books with slow burn/denial and minimal spice, this is for you!
thanks for reading my review! 🫶🏼💜
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pre-read
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my initial pre-read was mysteriously gone, but here it is again:
3rd arc, very excited to read! it looked funny so it better be 😄