I was so distracted by the many, many mistakes I just couldn’t get into the story. Repeated paragraphs, conversations, and typos throughout the book. I never saw the characters fall for one another. It was attraction, sex, I love you, “why didn’t you fight for us?” Maybe some flirty texts or an a long phone call? Something. I’ve liked the other books in this series. This one seemed rushed.
In Brooklyn Cate’s *Puck Fest*, the romance between Danny and Noah brings a fiery, high-stakes dynamic to the *Dirty Puck* MM hockey romance series. Noah lives by a strict rule never to get attached to a player, but everything shifts when the cocky and swaggering Danny Masterson walks into his office. As forced proximity blurs professional boundaries, the explosive friction between Noah’s cautious restraint and Danny’s relentless charm quickly sparks into undeniable chemistry. On and off the ice, the two are forced to navigate intense emotional angst, personal vulnerabilities, and the terrifying risk of losing their hearts. Ultimately, their journey delivers a captivating, steam-filled story of two strong-willed men realizing that the greatest victory is letting down their guard for love.
The story was good. I would give it 5 stars. But the editing was nonexistent. Not only the formatting, but also the consistency. Timeliness didn't make sense. They waited until after the probation? That's not my impression. I thought they were making up stories but they swore it was the truth. It was really hard to read. I hope the author realizes that she must have downloaded the alpha version and makes the corrections.
This book had a great story but was very difficult to read due to many typos and obvious mistakes with the story line not caught in editing. Poor editing is why I rated this one with one star.