Il nostro Eden senza Dio, Vol. 1

神様なんか信じない僕らのエデン [Kami-sama Nanka Shinjinai Bokura no Eden] #1

by Yuma Ichinose

Un mondo normale, dove è stato appena lanciato in orbita il più piccolo razzo mai creato e dove un geniale studente delle scuole medie è appena diventato il più giovane giocatore di shogi a essere promosso al sesto dan. Questo genere di mondo… Ma un giorno Shikito Takai, ragazzo ordinario con la passione per lo studio, avverte un profumo stranamente irresistibile provenire da Ririto Nishio, un compagno di classe che ha sempre ammirato in segreto. Alla fine della lezione di educazione fisica, Takai si accorge che Nishio ha il volto arrossato e il fiato corto e, preoccupato, cerca di accompagnarlo in infermeria, ma finisce per essere trascinato nel ripostiglio della palestra… Il primo volume della genesi dei primi alfa e omega nella storia dell’umanità!

Genres: Manga, Omegaverse, Boys Love, Yaoi, Romance, Queer, Comics

216 pages, Paperback

First published March 10, 2021

About the author

Yuma Ichinose (native name: 一ノ瀬ゆま) is a Japanese mangaka and dōjinsha.

Her work Kamisama nanka shinjinai bokura no Eden was 6th in the Kono BL ga Yabai! 2022 edition.

Dōjinshi Circle: Bessatsu Baribo 別册バリボー

Reviews

[Chelsea · Rating 3 out of 5]

The story was jumping around and quite confusing at first.
Then the rest of the book one MC (the cool guy at school) feels 'unwell' and decides locking himself in a shed would be the best idea because he can't go home... because he's sick?



... the other MC has to fuck his brains out because his scent is so good... because ya know, omega on heat n shit.....
And even though these two are apparently the first omega/alpha to ever exist........ The alpha somehow works out that the other guy is on heat?

✨Ta-daaaaaaaaa✨
Of course I don't really read BL for the plot most of the time, but this one wasn't low on plot... it was DEVOID of plot. (Which again, is amazing also because plot isn't always necessary)
But I actually hope we get some explanation or reason that they are the first alpha/omega to exist?
Because why?
OR I GUESS IF ITS JUST 4 VOLUMES OF THEM SMASHING AND FALLING IN LOVE I WILL ALSO ACCEPT THAT heheheheh

[rory (jess' version) · Rating 4 out of 5]

they're the adam and eve of the omegaverse. such a fresh take in the world full of clichés. GIVE ME MORE

[Shakera✿✿✿ · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5☆

[Lid · Rating 4 out of 5]

WoooW. Aviso de manga de omegaverse con mucho smut 🌶️

Este manga trata sobre el comienzo del omegaverse y me ha resultado flipante. Es sobre dos chicos normales, que no han tenido mucho trato pero de repente empiezan a sentir una atracción super hardcore y empiezan a darle tal que cajón que no cierra.

Pero lo que me ha encantado es ese nacimiento del omegaverse, lo bien que lo explica (la explicación del nudo tal que *PRECISA* 😂), como te va diciendo cada cambio, como lo trata de un modo científico intentando comprenderlo porque leches, les dan unos impulsos durísimos que les trastoca la personalidad por completo.

El ver al omega relegado a estar todo el rato cachondo escondido, al alfa con unos impulsos de celos y marcar en un personaje tan dulce... Es flipante y tengo mucha curiosidad por ver donde como va a hacer para que su condición de alfa no se coma su personalidad.

[Isabella Shane · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5⭐️

[Imanewreader ✨ · Rating 1 out of 5]

cw / SEX
beaucoup de sex. trop de sex.
j'aime beaucoup les omegaverse et avoir un manga qui conte les débuts de ce système avait l'air très intéressant mais dès les premières pages on est sur du sex presque non-stop.
ça fait beaucoup pwp. les dessins sont pourtant très beaux et la couverture à tomber par terre !!

[ContiClown · Rating 1 out of 5]

tenía una trama original para ser buenísimo pero fue re choto mal

[psyche · Rating 5 out of 5]

Takai es el alfa más green flag y gracioso del universo. Tqm mi rey no cambies 🥹

[Kiwi · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars
while the story itself isn't that much, the premise is extremely interesting in and of itself, and certain themes and ideas presented are definitely interesting too. so even though the story follows a more "conventional" romance line, i like it because it is one of the few stories that i feel do something interesting with an omegaverse setting

[Heather’s Reading Bubble · Rating 2 out of 5]

I enjoy the premise of this much more than the execution. I’d say a majority of this was our two leads mating, I guess is the most polite way to say it. Towards the end as Takai starts putting the pieces together I started getting much more interested. I already bought volume two so we’ll see if this gets more interesting.

[Minnie · Rating 4 out of 5]

Ich habe so viele omegaverse fanfic in meinen Leben gelesen, dass ich mit dem Thema sehr gut vertraut bin. Das hier ist einer der besten Versionen davon. Es handelt um die biologischen Anfänge der Alpha x Omega Evolution, alles viel wissenschaftlicher erklärt, als ich dachte.

Und die Cover sind so wunderschön 🥺✨ die schönsten boys love manga cover, die ich besitze. ✨

Spice Level: 🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆😂

[Ester · Rating 5 out of 5]

Amo todo de esta obra, sobre todo que rompe con el típico omegaverse y nos sumerge en los inicios de lo que sería una mutación humana para la supervivencia de la especie. también la forma de narrar de Yuma ichinose es deliciosa, porque te hace unas metáforas visuales preciosas.

[XA · Rating 5 out of 5]

Increíble omegaverse ♡

[ℂ ✧ · Rating 5 out of 5]

Dibuix espectacular per a un BL omegaverse amb una premissa senzilla, però innovadora i molt efectiva: se'ns mostra la història del primer alfa i el primer omega, dos companys de classe amb personalitats contraposades i que es deixen endur pels seus instints sense acabar d'entendre per què els seus cossos reaccionen com ho fan. Em sembla una trama interessantíssima que genera un munt d'interrogants, els protagonistes tenen una química desbordant des de la primera pàgina i són una parella d'allò més carismàtica. Amb ganes de més!!! ♥♥♥

[Sera Nova · Rating 2 out of 5]

Not the story I really wanted. Again, put them in college. Especially with this subject. Didnt really enjoy the story or the art.

[Brenda · Rating 4 out of 5]

El omegaverse finalmente ha llegado \😚/

Y sin censura...
Ya estoy tan acostumbrada a ver sables de luz, que ni me había percatado que estaba viendo todo fuerte y claro jajaj

Pero bueno, ese no es el punto.
Nos encontramos frente a una historia bastante intrigante debido a la trama que sigue la historia. Dos chicos normales que de repente se ven atraídos el uno por el otro porque... ¿Sus feromonas se atraen?

Es el inicio del omegaverse, ninguno sabe lo que está ocurriendo salvo que no pueden evitar dejarse guiar por sus instintos. Lo que los orilla a pasar el celo en una bodega de la escuela y poco a poco, el alfa irá descubriendo a base de la ciencia que es lo que está sucediendo con ellos.

Amé demasiado el desarrollo y ya estoy esperando que llegue el segundo tomo

[Paola Malagrida · Rating 3 out of 5]

Alright: Am I confused of what I'm reading? Maybe.

Is not my first time reading omegaverse, but it is new that no one in the story actually knows what is happening and that is making me feel a little bit anxious.

Not much is happening as I see it, just a romance where some miscommunication happens and a lot of smut in between while none of them knows exactly what is going on with them, not bad tbh, I'll keep reading.

[Katherine · Rating 3 out of 5]

I was able to find a Spanish copy of this manga… oh boy! I loved it! I was wondering how the omega verse began and I get this is actually not the first omega verse book that came out but I do like the idea of picturing the first alpha and omega couple. I like the setting and the idea that these are two young boys who are discovering themselves… ahhhh it’s refreshing!!!!

[Helén · Rating 3 out of 5]

絵がすごくきれいなのになぜか読んだことないって思って読んでみた。オメガバースだった。オメガバースはあまり好きではないがこの漫画のほとんどはエッチなシーンばかりなのでそんなにきにしていなかったｗ。

[The_heaven_of_books · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5⭐️

Je ne sais pas quoi en penser 😅
C'était vraiment surprenant ! Après l'avoir terminé, je me pose pleins de questions !
Bref, j'attends la sortie du tome 2 avec impatience !

[Sees · Rating 2 out of 5]

Giving it the benefit of the doubt cause I Google-translated page by page after accidentally buying it in German

[romi · Rating 3 out of 5]

sabés que el manga omegaverse va a estar bueno cuando citan frases del antiguo testamento

[78sunny · Rating 2 out of 5]

Selten habe ich mich auf einen Manga so gefreut, wie auf diesen. Ich liebe Omegaverse Stories und die sind ja noch recht selten bei Mangas vertreten. Daher hatte ich richtig hingefiebert, dass er endlich erscheint und ich ihn lesen kann.
Leider war das ganze ein echter Flop für mich.
Hier entdecken zwei Schüler nach und nach, dass sie Alpha und Omega sind und wie das ganze dann mit der Hitze/Brunft so abläuft. Noch weiß ich nicht, ob die jetzt das erste Pärchen sein sollen bei denen das passiert und sonst noch niemand von so etwas weiß, aber ich vermute es mal. Am Ende des Mangas weiß man das auf jeden Fall nicht so recht.
Die Charakter sind nichtssagend und man fiebert daher weder mit ihnen mit, noch kommen hier Gefühle bei mir an. Und das obwohl der Manga zu 90% aus Gedanken der beiden Protagonisten besteht. Und das war dann auch noch schrecklich langweilig. Der Alpha ist eigentlich ein Streber und Wissenschaftsnerd und geht auch an die Alpha/Omega-Sache so heran. Wer also in aller Ausführlichkeit etwas zum Omegaverse erfahren will, ist hier gut bedient, aber es ist einfach nur langweilig geschrieben. So nun ist das aber ein Manga und könnte es ja mit den Zeichnungen rausreißen. Leider, tut es auch das nicht. Wie befinden uns so gut wie die ganze Zeit in einem einzigen Raum, von dem wir auch noch gerade mal 10% sehen. Alles andere sind nur die beiden Charaktere in verschiedenen Posen und Stellungen. Dann kommt noch der Yaoi-Aspekt, der ebenfalls ein Witz ist, da die Szenen zwar durch aus ganz sexy hätten sein können, aber durch blendend weiß ausradierte Geschlechtsteile einfach nur lächerlich für einen P18 Manga sind.
Sorry aber der Manga zieht gleich wieder aus und ich bin froh, dass ich ihn noch gelesen habe, bevor ich in die Special Edition des zweiten Bandes invertierst hätte.

Story 2,4/5
Emotionen 2,4/5
Charaktere 2,4/5
Unterhaltung 3,0/5
Zeichenstil 3,0/5
Lesegefühl 2,4/5
Gesamt 2,4/5

[akira · Rating 3 out of 5]

imagine being the first omega in the wold, and finding out by going in heat... yikes. no god in eden is such an interesting premise. following takai shikito and nishio ririto, who seem to be two normal highschoolers, until a random day and a random gym class that changes everything.

now nishio in uncontrollably, uncomfortably horny and takai is strangely attuned to every change of nishio's scent and emotions.

i really did enjoy this. its a curious mix of humor, emotion, and just a few biblical references. i'm not kidding - this is probably the first time i've seen a bible verse quoted in an omegaverse bl. while it was not what i expected (a bit more of a serious tone maybe?), it did fit the setting with them being teenagers. and the manga still does explore the emotional depths and struggles of all the changes they, especially nishio, are going through.

there's this part where takai realizes how much nishio was hurting, and still putting on a brave face, and takai thinks what is my favourite line from the volume:

but, nishio-kun... if you do that, then no one will ever know... which parts of you are painful when touched... or that there's even a gaping, open wound inside you.

that's just genuinely an adorable and sweet line.

[Iyas Utomo · Rating 1 out of 5]

This is my first time reading Ichinose-sensei’s work, so I don’t really have any reference for their storytelling or art style.

Honestly, the manga has a pretty interesting premise. Even though I’m not really into the omegaverse genre, I gave it a shot, thinking maybe I’d still enjoy it even though it’s not my favorite genre.

While reading the first volume, I felt like the story didn’t really go anywhere. I mean, what happened to the main character could’ve been explained through narration instead of constantly repeating things—especially the parts where the MC and ML have sex. It felt a bit excessive.

Is this a good manga? I can’t really say.
Is it enjoyable? Sadly, I couldn’t find the usual fun I get from reading high school romances like this.
Did I enjoy it? I’m not so sure.

Hmm, at first I thought I wouldn’t continue with the second volume, but I’ll give it another chance.

[Carmen · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a really interesting concept, the first alpha and omega being high school boys and they have to navigate a heat/rut having zero clue what’s happening.

It’s not a short volume but really not much has happened yet as it needed to spend the time setting up the world and have them figure out what’s happening. I’m looking forward to the rest of the volumes to see a relationship progress but also how this will play out in their world. Will others start exhibiting traits or are they going to be the lone alpha and omega and their future kids will in theory “spread” the traits? I’m intrigued

The art is pretty too

[Literatura sin límites · Rating 5 out of 5]

Primero que nada, gracias por traer el primer omegaverse a México.

Segundo, es la historia que pinta muy bien.

No sé si es el primer omegaverse en si del manga, pero sí trata el origen del omegaverse en el mundo ficticio de esta historia.

Normalmente un manga ya te muestra las bases establecidas del omegaverse y van soltando la información conforme avanza la historia. Pero aquí no

Se desconoce que es un alfa, Omega, en que consiste el nudo, etc.

Así que es interesante ver cómo ambos personajes lidian con la parte del celo en total ignorancia.

[Mari · Rating 5 out of 5]

Probably one of the best omegaverse stories I have read recently. It isn't groundbreaking and there is a lot of smut. But I like the twist? I appreciate that the main character is smart and analyzing the situations as they go along. The art is beatiful too and I like how the author uses it to convey emotion and tone.

So this is omegaverse, so we do have the dubious content. The uncontrollable heats 😮‍💨 The uncontrollable lust 🙄 But I like it overall despite the tropes.

cw dubcon

[Bee C · Rating 4 out of 5]

😳😳😳😳😳 our two main characters are always locked on each other if you know what I mean and that’s mainly the whole first volume. We get to know them as they interact other than physically and Takai eventually starts putting puzzle pieces together to find out what’s going on with not only himself but also with Nishio. It will be interesting to see if they work through this alone or get family involved.

[Anna DeJesus · Rating 3 out of 5]

I love the story concept, the first alpha and omega in the beginning of the omegaverse. I just wish there had been a little more dialogue and clearer illustrations. The story was spicier but the scenes lacked clarity. I will continue to see how The omegaverse develops and where the story goes. Overall it was a good read. I like how Takai’s character is nerdy and into science so he’s figuring things out.