I felt obligated to read this as I loved the og warhammer fantasy and wanted to know how the end times actually, you know, ended. But holy cow is this book a slog.
First, I've seen other reviews praise the prose, and I have no idea what they're talking about. This book should be called "adverbs, the novel" (aka words ending in "ly").
"He grimaced, darkly." "He said, coldly." etc. It's overwhelming.
The other part is how much of this book tells without showing. There's very little to infer here.
This is in part due to bizarre pacing, framing, and structure. Fundamentally this is about the vampires of fantasy collaborating with a tomb lord to resurrect Nagash, who is basically Sauron to this world. To do this they need to gather a bunch of relics from neighboring factions, Castlevania 2 style, and then do some kind of ritual.
Thing is, this could have been just a book about Von Carstein (head vamp) hanging out with his tomb lord buddy on a fun road trip to get some relics (which is pretty much what the much better WH40k novel, The Infinite and the Divine, is), but instead the book feels the need to provide both a zoomed in view of certain scenes, but also wide view of the world as a whole.
Did you need to see what the dwarfs were up to? No? Well, too bad. What about the empire? Elves (of all flavors)? Lots and lots of Brittonia? So many scenes of Brittonia knights ruminating about a charge or combat, only to get instantly killed by a vampire. It happens multiple times, and every time feels like it's wasting my time.
The flip-flop between bigger picture stuff and lots of drawn out conversations (and fight scenes) gets dreary very quickly, but also messes up the pacing. There's no clear act structure here, instead it just reads like a mix of Total War Warhammer campaign map interaction with more zoomed in bickering of vampires.
I get that these are all named characters and so they needed resolution from a brand perspective, but it dilutes the story to a point where it's indecipherable.
I still gave it two stars because despite all this, it's still an above-average warhammer book, and there is some decent scenes and smart writing here, though less often than I'd prefer.
Overall, meh. I'm committed to seeing these end times books through because I actually liked the lore of old WHF, but man am I worried about the quality of this stuff.