First, I'd like to say that I really liked the concept and idea behind this telling of the Mad Hatter.
I think there was a good idea for a story featuring Wonderland, all created from Hatter's mind, and him trying to find his Other Half, who appears in the form of Sam. The problem I ran into was that the story felt it was from point A to point C, with no real explanations in between. The villain of piece is brought in late to the story, with no build up to their motivations. The love story seems to occur quite quickly, also with no real build up to the characters' falling for each other. Lastly, there are lots of editing mistakes, with misspelled words and incorrect words being used. I wanted to love this story, and again, the concept was intriguing, but on the whole, the story did not work for me.