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Seduced: Book One
Nikki is desperate to find a way to get back with the person she loves most in this world, but she needs someone as strong as Tristan to put her plan in motion.
But when these two magnetic people, what will happen? Will they repel each other or will an undeniable attraction flow between them.
Will they be able to survive this attraction? Will they be able to know each other's true intentions?
***Intended for Mature audience due to Explicit Contents.***
But when these two magnetic people, what will happen? Will they repel each other or will an undeniable attraction flow between them.
Will they be able to survive this attraction? Will they be able to know each other's true intentions?
***Intended for Mature audience due to Explicit Contents.***
152 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 31, 2014
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March 24, 2016
Oh, me, oh, my was this bad. Goes in my top ten of shit -for- books.
Revoke His Man Card ASAP!
The MMC is supposed to be a ripped up badass... He beats The Hulk down and stares down a gun, saying, "shoot."
Yet...
His sweetly clean mouth says "heck" a lot.
He drives a Honda Civic.
He owns a book store.
His inner thoughts sound like a chick:
Awwww, I almost offered...
Sounds familiar...
And, I was so fucking tired of hearing over and over how he hadn't had sex in six months.
Female MC Is Someone I'd Slap The Fuck Out Of In Real Life
She gets some guy's ass beat by her bodyguard for mildly hitting on her in a bar. She asks a stranger, the MMC, to break up the fight. He simply says it's not his business. When she sees him again, she gets her bodyguard to try and beat him up to give him a "taste of his own medicine."
She's her dad's little bitch, with no deeper thought than getting his money and shopping. She's in her twenties, yet...
"Dark desire" over looking at a fine body and erotic experience over rubbing chests thanks to a spider?!?! Oh, give me a damn break!
She is sitting at his house with a "punctured tire." He offers her a ride and discovers his tire is "punctured," too. Ha, not so strangely enough, he'd changed his tire yesterday because it was "punctured." Are they worried about THREE punctured tires in two days? Nope, she's wondering how he can live without a TV in his bedroom.
This would be more fitting...
I digress:/
Weirdest, Most Awkward, Almost Sex Scene Ever
The Awkward...
She sets out to seduce him. Even though he is mentally hot for her, he puts a halt to any and all of her attempts to fuck him.
She's relentless and eventually follows him into a shower and rubs on his thigh until she comes...
The Weird...
She goes to rain.
First thing she does is tell him she's embarrassed and just there to train.
Second thing she does is crawl across the floor on her hands and knees to grab his cock and suck it.
He proceeds to "make love to her" after debating if he even liked her and whether or not she was a slut.
Nope, couldn't find a single meme worthy of that bullshit.
Details
When a book's plot and characters are this bad, and make no mistake they are bad here, every out of place element sticks out like a sore thumb.
For example...
If you are going to go for pretentious, rich bitch, then at least make the shit believable ...
A Camry and multi-millionaire do not belong in the same sentence of a chick who admits to selling her values for shopping money.
Another example: @23%, Trisha is a "nineteen-year-old girl." At 90%, Trisha is "seventeen."
Typos
Plot
She's trying to get to someone named Stephen, who she cares about. She thinks that having the MMC train her to fight (him specifically) is the key to getting to Stephen.
Spoiler From Here On Out
This is what I'm talking about with the details, not to mention why I can't stand this FMC.
At 71%, we find out the mysterious Stephen she's trying to get to is her son. Her father took the kid away from her six months ago and has him stored in a penthouse.
Now, does this intro to the Stephen plot line back a 9% sound ANYTHING like a grieving mother...
Her dad says:
She thinks:
Her child has been kept from her for six months, yet "Seduced" is the most apt title for this book!
Her thoughts here are consumed with how hot Tristan is, her sexual desire for him, and how she will seduce him.
Meanwhile...
A word search for "Stephen" shows 14 times and "son" one time.
The End
There are some things in life that just shouldn't exist, especially in mass, and this book is...
A series. Yipppppie.
I will not be continuing. The only 5 stars I'd give this shit is in the negative.
Revoke His Man Card ASAP!
The MMC is supposed to be a ripped up badass... He beats The Hulk down and stares down a gun, saying, "shoot."
Yet...
His sweetly clean mouth says "heck" a lot.
He drives a Honda Civic.
He owns a book store.
His inner thoughts sound like a chick:
"Damn, I need to lose the fat around my thighs. I felt a centimeter pinch of fat was building around my thighs. I took a mental note of doing some more yoga for thighs and plyometric moves later in the training."
In one of the fuzzy dreams from last night, Nikki was naked, lying down on my bed, and when I tried to kiss her, she just disappeared and I fell hard on the bed. In reality, I fell off the couch and it hurt.
Awwww, I almost offered...
"Even though she had been present in all my dreams, I had literally forgotten that she was still in my house."
Sounds familiar...
And, I was so fucking tired of hearing over and over how he hadn't had sex in six months.
Female MC Is Someone I'd Slap The Fuck Out Of In Real Life
She gets some guy's ass beat by her bodyguard for mildly hitting on her in a bar. She asks a stranger, the MMC, to break up the fight. He simply says it's not his business. When she sees him again, she gets her bodyguard to try and beat him up to give him a "taste of his own medicine."
She's her dad's little bitch, with no deeper thought than getting his money and shopping. She's in her twenties, yet...
"He (her dad) would kill Tristan and ground me for the rest of my life."
"Dark desire" over looking at a fine body and erotic experience over rubbing chests thanks to a spider?!?! Oh, give me a damn break!
She is sitting at his house with a "punctured tire." He offers her a ride and discovers his tire is "punctured," too. Ha, not so strangely enough, he'd changed his tire yesterday because it was "punctured." Are they worried about THREE punctured tires in two days? Nope, she's wondering how he can live without a TV in his bedroom.
. A big spider came out of nowhere. "Oh, my God. Tristan help me, please."
"Still thinking about him, I opened my Range Rover door and hopped in. I turned on my stereo to listen to Bryan Adams....
This would be more fitting...
I digress:/
Weirdest, Most Awkward, Almost Sex Scene Ever
The Awkward...
She sets out to seduce him. Even though he is mentally hot for her, he puts a halt to any and all of her attempts to fuck him.
She's relentless and eventually follows him into a shower and rubs on his thigh until she comes...
"I felt like an idiot. I had used his thighs for my own pleasure, not able to think of anything but my own needs. Turning away from his gaze, I put on my clothes and walked out of his house, too embarrassed to look back."
The Weird...
"Am I a slut Tristan?" She messaged, along with a crying smile. She was hurt by her actions last night. It wasn't her fault completely; I should have controlled myself. I knew she was trying to get through my armor, and I knew what would happen if I gave her any signals. But it went a different way and in the end, she walked out of my door crying.
"Are you? Am I supposed to console her now? We both went ahead with our urges, giving in to our frenzied needs, and she ended up coming in my arms and leaving. Did that make her a slut?
"What's your opinion?"
"You should get your ass over her and start training," I replied in frustration. Text messaging was never my thing.
She goes to rain.
First thing she does is tell him she's embarrassed and just there to train.
Second thing she does is crawl across the floor on her hands and knees to grab his cock and suck it.
He proceeds to "make love to her" after debating if he even liked her and whether or not she was a slut.
Nope, couldn't find a single meme worthy of that bullshit.
Details
When a book's plot and characters are this bad, and make no mistake they are bad here, every out of place element sticks out like a sore thumb.
For example...
If you are going to go for pretentious, rich bitch, then at least make the shit believable ...
"Half an hour later, we were driving in my Camry, my back up car. Being the daughter of a multi-millionaire did have its perks.
A Camry and multi-millionaire do not belong in the same sentence of a chick who admits to selling her values for shopping money.
Another example: @23%, Trisha is a "nineteen-year-old girl." At 90%, Trisha is "seventeen."
Typos
"Whenever I tried to use my right hand pasta certain threshold, it started throbbing."
Plot
She's trying to get to someone named Stephen, who she cares about. She thinks that having the MMC train her to fight (him specifically) is the key to getting to Stephen.
Spoiler From Here On Out
This is what I'm talking about with the details, not to mention why I can't stand this FMC.
At 71%, we find out the mysterious Stephen she's trying to get to is her son. Her father took the kid away from her six months ago and has him stored in a penthouse.
Now, does this intro to the Stephen plot line back a 9% sound ANYTHING like a grieving mother...
Her dad says:
"If you don't do this I'll not give you a single penny for to go shopping."
She thinks:
"Because of my own stubborn attitude, I'd lost access to Stephen and shopping was the only thing that comforted my heart after I couldn't see Stephen anymore.
Her child has been kept from her for six months, yet "Seduced" is the most apt title for this book!
Her thoughts here are consumed with how hot Tristan is, her sexual desire for him, and how she will seduce him.
Meanwhile...
A word search for "Stephen" shows 14 times and "son" one time.
The End
There are some things in life that just shouldn't exist, especially in mass, and this book is...
A series. Yipppppie.
I will not be continuing. The only 5 stars I'd give this shit is in the negative.
January 27, 2015
I did not like this book. There was no character development. I got more out of the blurb then I did out of the entire book. I had no idea what was going on. It jumped from one thing to another. I was confused at some points, because all of a sudden they would be talking about Stephen, who the hell is Stephen?! Hes mentioned throughout the book briefly, then you finally learn who he is and its a WTF moment. Like ummm... WHY?! If you've read it you should understand what I'm talking about. Also, the book read with some errors. Not so much spelling, but there would be a sentence that you would have to figure out "what is she going on about", it would be missing a key word.
January 6, 2015
Short read
This is about an injured MMA fighter that happens to walk in a bar and a woman tries to get him to break up a fight, he refuses saying it's not his fight. She is intrigued with him and his actions. She then sets her sites on taming him.
This is about an injured MMA fighter that happens to walk in a bar and a woman tries to get him to break up a fight, he refuses saying it's not his fight. She is intrigued with him and his actions. She then sets her sites on taming him.
June 24, 2015
Ugh....
I can't get passed the terrible sentencing formation or the horrible editing ... Thank goodness it was free, otherwise I'd be upset........
I can't get passed the terrible sentencing formation or the horrible editing ... Thank goodness it was free, otherwise I'd be upset........
July 7, 2015
Not for me
This one just didn't do it for me. The storyline seemed to follow a simplistic model that just didn't integrate me into the story while reading it.
This one just didn't do it for me. The storyline seemed to follow a simplistic model that just didn't integrate me into the story while reading it.
October 16, 2014
This is the first book that I have read by this author and I will say that it did start out slowly (character introduction)...but when it picked up boy did it ever! As I kept reading I understood more about Nikki and Tristan...Nikki wants something back and she finds that she needs Tristan's help to get it. We have her strict ruling father and her bodyguard (Chase) hits first and doesn't ask questions at all. Tristan is an intense sexy retired MMA fighter who owns a bookstore...he is such a kind person as you will find as you read this story. Nikki is smart, sexy and finds that she wants more than Tristan's help! I will say that this book ends in a cliffhanger and it has you wanting to read the second book which I intend to do as I need to find out what happens next. I found that this author has other books and I can say that I will be reading some of them as well. I received a gifted copy of this book for my honest review.
January 23, 2015
Iffy
I would think hard about buy the next book in this series, it's a great story, when you finished thinking about what the writer is trying to convey, its very difficult to keep up with her train of thought. She keeps missing words, having unfinished sentences I mean you have to really think hard and re read before I figure out what she means and then am wondering ... ok, so, did I miss something here, but of course I did, the words are not there, and you have to think about what she meant. It takes away from the story, I love a good story and this would have been a great one if they had taken the time to edit it properly, a shame really. I hate to see a great story chopped up.
I would think hard about buy the next book in this series, it's a great story, when you finished thinking about what the writer is trying to convey, its very difficult to keep up with her train of thought. She keeps missing words, having unfinished sentences I mean you have to really think hard and re read before I figure out what she means and then am wondering ... ok, so, did I miss something here, but of course I did, the words are not there, and you have to think about what she meant. It takes away from the story, I love a good story and this would have been a great one if they had taken the time to edit it properly, a shame really. I hate to see a great story chopped up.
September 7, 2014
Great 3 and half star read. This is a good start to a series. Some of the characters you are going to get to know and not like and the others will intrigue you. The story builds in intrigue as it goes. P.A.'s series always build in more and more twists and turns as the series builds. The only reason I did not give it 4 stars is because in the beginning Nikki was all over the place and I just didn't get her causing the storyline not to flow as well but you see her character develop as the book goes on. There are some grammatical errors. Look forward to the next book.
I received a gift copy in exchange for an honest review.
I received a gift copy in exchange for an honest review.
February 2, 2015
Tristan finally gets his own story and it is a big one. And it seems he is just barely hanging on to life.
Nikki is fighting for her life and for another life to get back to. But her father is controlling everything. Including a hulk of an idiot Chase, who is with her all the time.
Nikki gets in trouble and looks for Tristan to help, but he refuses saying it isn't his fight.
When they meet again, her father offers him a job, which Tristan refuses. Nikki sees this as her chance to get back the one thing she loves most of all.
Can Tristan help Nikki? Or can Nikki help Tristan?
Nikki is fighting for her life and for another life to get back to. But her father is controlling everything. Including a hulk of an idiot Chase, who is with her all the time.
Nikki gets in trouble and looks for Tristan to help, but he refuses saying it isn't his fight.
When they meet again, her father offers him a job, which Tristan refuses. Nikki sees this as her chance to get back the one thing she loves most of all.
Can Tristan help Nikki? Or can Nikki help Tristan?
December 23, 2014
I was given a copy by author for honest review.
Seduced is the first book I have read from this author and I can definitely say it will not be my last!
The story starts off a little slow while you get to know the characters then turns into a hot story with lots of twists. From the beginning of the book I felt a pull and I had to know what happens! Now that I'm done I need more like NOW!
I can't say to much without giving to much away just know that this is a must read!
5 Stars
Seduced is the first book I have read from this author and I can definitely say it will not be my last!
The story starts off a little slow while you get to know the characters then turns into a hot story with lots of twists. From the beginning of the book I felt a pull and I had to know what happens! Now that I'm done I need more like NOW!
I can't say to much without giving to much away just know that this is a must read!
5 Stars
September 2, 2014
OMG. This series is going to be great! This book wasn't long but gave so much. I didn't know what was going on at first and thought I missed something but eventually it became clear and everything I had been thinking was way off. It was great and I definitely can't wait for the next in the series. Please write fast!!! Lol
September 5, 2014
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September 5, 2014
I loved this book, as I loved all book by Mrs. jones. U tell urself that there is no way it can get any juicer, till u read the next book or series. This book reels u in and leaves u wanting more. I cant wait to read part 2...
September 6, 2014
Good story line developed...some grammar errors...the flow of the story could have been a little better.. But it kept me interested
September 3, 2014
This is going to be a great series! You don't know which way is up and then it all becomes clear. But the end leaves you questioning again. Can't wait for the next book in the series!
February 11, 2015
I was already to get into this book, then boom. Over. I'm not sure if I will read the next book in this series.
April 10, 2015
Tristan
Follow Tristan as he now lives in New York. He now done with Emma and runs his own chain of book stores. Nikki has plans for him he just doesn't know it yet.
Follow Tristan as he now lives in New York. He now done with Emma and runs his own chain of book stores. Nikki has plans for him he just doesn't know it yet.
June 21, 2015
Good storyline
....BUT please send me your books so I can edit. It was very difficult to read. I started highlighting but there was so much. I am going to read 2.
....BUT please send me your books so I can edit. It was very difficult to read. I started highlighting but there was so much. I am going to read 2.
June 29, 2015
Interesting read if you can overlook the typos and missing words.
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