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Billionaire Biker #1
Submit: Taken by the Biker Billionaire
Liam Hamilton. The mysterious billionaire who is no more than a shadow. Are the rumors true? Does he actually exist?
Michelle isn't usually the adventurous type. Tonight, however, is an exception to the rule. After her boss kept her late and ruined the plans she had laid out for the evening she is determined to prove to herself that he doesn't own her.
Stopping at the nearest bar, she quickly finds herself in foreign territory. The outside wall is lined with motorcycles, and inside their riders. "Just a quick drink," she tells herself before swallowing the lump in her throat.
Little does Michelle know that her stop is going to be anything but quick. She's soon going to find herself taking orders from the mysterious billionaire, and she's going to be doing it all night long.
Michelle isn't usually the adventurous type. Tonight, however, is an exception to the rule. After her boss kept her late and ruined the plans she had laid out for the evening she is determined to prove to herself that he doesn't own her.
Stopping at the nearest bar, she quickly finds herself in foreign territory. The outside wall is lined with motorcycles, and inside their riders. "Just a quick drink," she tells herself before swallowing the lump in her throat.
Little does Michelle know that her stop is going to be anything but quick. She's soon going to find herself taking orders from the mysterious billionaire, and she's going to be doing it all night long.
30 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 6, 2014
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April 29, 2019
4 Seductive Stars
Deliciously written to captivate and wet (pun intended) the appetite for book two.. O Yes, I will be continuing this series. 😉
Deliciously written to captivate and wet (pun intended) the appetite for book two.. O Yes, I will be continuing this series. 😉
January 12, 2021
Cliffhanger serial
Not what I expected, but when an author wants to screw you, they create a serial series that is short on words and huge on cost. Not a penny more will I give to this story as I can’t stand this type of manipulation. Will not read this author again.
Not what I expected, but when an author wants to screw you, they create a serial series that is short on words and huge on cost. Not a penny more will I give to this story as I can’t stand this type of manipulation. Will not read this author again.
July 17, 2016
Liam Hamilton is a mysterious billionaire that prefers to drive his motorcycle and hang out in one of the biker bars he owns rather than go to fancy restaurants in a limo. His P.R. people told him he must make more public appearances and not be such a recluse. Michelle hates her job and she hates her boss even more feeling like she's hit a dead end in her life. After working late one night she decides she needs a drink so she stops at the nearest bar which happens to have motorcycles lined up outside. While sitting at the bar she sees a gorgeous man watching her from across the room. They have a conversation and then end up in the apartment above the bar where they both have the best sex of their lives. The next day she is shocked to find out the gorgeous stranger she just spent a wonderful night with is billionaire Liam Hamilton. He offers Michelle the opportunity of a life time. If she agrees to be his submissive and attend events with him he will give her the world on a silver platter, trips, the finest clothes or an education. What could possibly be the down side to this arrangement ? Can she submit to Liam completely in the bedroom ? What happens when she starts developing feelings for Liam ? Will he end it if he knows how she really feels about him ?
October 29, 2016
Thank god this book was free. I am ashamed of this character who shares my name. This is a poor excuse for a BDSM novel. It sort of smells like Fifty Shades of Grey and that isn't really a compliment. It was basically him trying to be a Dom and her just saying sure whatever you want to do with me I accept which I guess makes her his Sub. Again this wasn't a good example of BDSM. The next book is $2.99 and it has about 30 pages. Ha ha. Yeah right. Not going forward with this series.
August 5, 2017
This was a short quick read with a hot book cover. After stopping at a biker bar for a quick drink Michelle Porta meets a hot sexy tattooed biker Liam Hamilton who is also a mysterious billionaire. She missed her girls night out because her boss kept her late she hates her job. These two hook up and it was hot Liam is a Dom and he is looking for a sub. He has been keeping an eye on Michelle and he wants her. This book was too short and I know that it has 4 more parts. I have read this author before. This book was well written with no errors in grammar or spelling. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter of this series.
January 13, 2016
Yet another shitty attempt at BDSM. I wont even go into details except to say it's clear this is yet another author who didn't even bother to research what she was writing the tiniest bit. I've even ran out of steam to rant about this because its so sadly common these days. This essentially was porn in word form. I'm distinguishing this from erotica because it isn't really erotica. You have to sort of suspend any desire for a plot that isn't so bad you can't read it without giggling uncontrollably or rolling your eyes all the way to the back of your head. The creepy factor of playing BDSM games with a total stranger is high for me and I decided to abandon it because of that.
April 9, 2019
To submit
This story ended to quickly. I know this is a short story but the ending was leaving me wanting more. Michelle working over time She hates her boss, and missed out on girls night. She decides to go out to a biker bar for a drink. She meets Liam a mysterious billionaire. He takes her upstairs and dose naughty things to her. The morning after, he offers her his Business card and ask her to meet him at his office at 2 o’clock in the afternoon. He offers her a job she couldn’t refuse.
This story ended to quickly. I know this is a short story but the ending was leaving me wanting more. Michelle working over time She hates her boss, and missed out on girls night. She decides to go out to a biker bar for a drink. She meets Liam a mysterious billionaire. He takes her upstairs and dose naughty things to her. The morning after, he offers her his Business card and ask her to meet him at his office at 2 o’clock in the afternoon. He offers her a job she couldn’t refuse.
May 21, 2018
This actually the first part of a story, but a very hot one.
You can read it as a stand alone, but why would you?
Michelle steps into a bar she normally won't visit.
But there she sees him and he sees her, Liam.
Liam takes control of her from the moment they met and he takes her upstairs for a very hot experience, pffff
You can read it as a stand alone, but why would you?
Michelle steps into a bar she normally won't visit.
But there she sees him and he sees her, Liam.
Liam takes control of her from the moment they met and he takes her upstairs for a very hot experience, pffff
August 30, 2017
😄
All she wanted was a drink but what she got was a hot night with a stranger and what she thought would be her first one night stand. But she was wrong he is no stranger they have met before and he's a billionaire intent to make a deal she might not be able to resist.
All she wanted was a drink but what she got was a hot night with a stranger and what she thought would be her first one night stand. But she was wrong he is no stranger they have met before and he's a billionaire intent to make a deal she might not be able to resist.
October 13, 2019
Loved it made me think of the past when I would slide into a dive bar for a cold one, but I never got as lucky as her! Nice Package all the way around! These days my life is non-existent,I used to have a life of men , I had an awesome body which I worked hard for, until the early morning that my then fiancee shot me; when I had found out what all he was into i was going to leave but he said HELL NO, at the time I was 26 and he said he was 41 but acted more my age. Now I am partial disabled and take care of my 86 year old mom. I need a MAN like yesterday!
I love a man who takes control in and out of the bedroom if you know a single one, that would want a sweet southern women with a very tight pussy, and loves to suck a nice big cock, send him my way i am in Hendersonville, NC
I love a man who takes control in and out of the bedroom if you know a single one, that would want a sweet southern women with a very tight pussy, and loves to suck a nice big cock, send him my way i am in Hendersonville, NC
August 12, 2017
I got this book free from Smutpire Press in exchange for a review. Michelle has a bad day at work and goes to a bar to let off some steam, where she meets Liam, a biker. She engages in a one night stand with him and is propositioned by him the next day with a contract to be his sex slave. This mini story definitely ended too quick. I would have liked for the story to continue. Did she accept or not ? What a cliffhanger ! Good story line though with a great sex scene.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 20, 2023
A Quickie
This was an extremely quick read that said it all in so few words I'm amazed I enjoyed it so much! Nothing that needed to be said was left out. Too many short stories leave out details, but Submit balanced the needs of the story and the reader like a master. The only criticism is the price. $2.99 is too expensive for a story that is less than 50 pages long. For that reason, I won't be buying the rest of the series.
This was an extremely quick read that said it all in so few words I'm amazed I enjoyed it so much! Nothing that needed to be said was left out. Too many short stories leave out details, but Submit balanced the needs of the story and the reader like a master. The only criticism is the price. $2.99 is too expensive for a story that is less than 50 pages long. For that reason, I won't be buying the rest of the series.
March 18, 2018
This is a easy to read erotic book. It is VERY short more of a few chapters then a full book.
But it does give a good ideal of the authors writing skills. It does have a few steamy sections that will entertain you with a hook at the end that will want you to purchase further "books" under this title.
But it does give a good ideal of the authors writing skills. It does have a few steamy sections that will entertain you with a hook at the end that will want you to purchase further "books" under this title.
December 31, 2020
Michelle walks into a biker bar after work. She just wants 1 drink and the will go home to a movie and ice cream. She sees Liam, a hot biker and he buys her a 2nd drink telling her, he's going to take her and ride her hard until she's screaming his name. Did not like the ending. Now need to read Obey. I'm not a fan of serial atories.
May 1, 2023
Good preview
The preview actually maybe want to continue on the bus I wanted to see what her decision was. But obviously if she had said no then there wouldn't be a book one or a series in that matter. The fact that she didn't recognize him before but she felt an immediate connection is truly inspirational.
The preview actually maybe want to continue on the bus I wanted to see what her decision was. But obviously if she had said no then there wouldn't be a book one or a series in that matter. The fact that she didn't recognize him before but she felt an immediate connection is truly inspirational.
February 13, 2024
Spicy!!!
Such an amazing Teaser so much so I immediately went to find the next book.im already loving Liam and can't wait to to read how Chelle deals with this proposal....but let's be honest Liam showing a girl what he has to offer and saying that's just a tease he was going easy lawd have mercy sign me up
Such an amazing Teaser so much so I immediately went to find the next book.im already loving Liam and can't wait to to read how Chelle deals with this proposal....but let's be honest Liam showing a girl what he has to offer and saying that's just a tease he was going easy lawd have mercy sign me up
April 13, 2025
Meh, gave knock off 50 shades with a twist of a biker. Honestly I was enjoying it until the last 10 pages where it seemed very 50 shades with the contact and how she saw sub an dom on the paper before she fled.. Overall could've been a lot better. Just kinda felt like a wattpad money grab to make you buy the next book.
May 26, 2018
A scene from a book not an actual book
He sounds like Daryl at first then he turned into Christian Grey. The sex was uninspired and mediocre. The characters weren't even sketches they were ideas. It was dumb.
He sounds like Daryl at first then he turned into Christian Grey. The sex was uninspired and mediocre. The characters weren't even sketches they were ideas. It was dumb.
June 26, 2018
To short and cliffhanger
The storyline was interesting and characters also...but there wasn't enough of a story. It wasn't long enough and ends in a cliffhanger! I don't like cliffhangers! Had it been a little longer I would have given it 3 stars.
The storyline was interesting and characters also...but there wasn't enough of a story. It wasn't long enough and ends in a cliffhanger! I don't like cliffhangers! Had it been a little longer I would have given it 3 stars.
November 29, 2018
How did she stop at this bar
Chelles boss had worked her. She was ready to go and have a drink then go home. The bar she stepped into was a mistake so she thought. So a night of great sex to find someone was watching her to an unbelievable offer
Chelles boss had worked her. She was ready to go and have a drink then go home. The bar she stepped into was a mistake so she thought. So a night of great sex to find someone was watching her to an unbelievable offer
October 15, 2019
I wish this wasn’t a series
Thestory was fine I just hated the cliffhangernesss. I’m also not too keen on the total caveman act. What in earth was she doing there. Very dangerous behavior for a grown woman
Thestory was fine I just hated the cliffhangernesss. I’m also not too keen on the total caveman act. What in earth was she doing there. Very dangerous behavior for a grown woman
October 14, 2020
Excellent book thank you for write it
It's a good 👍read it it has plenty of twists and turns and if you have half an hour you will look forward to reading 📚the next books can't wait
It's a good 👍read it it has plenty of twists and turns and if you have half an hour you will look forward to reading 📚the next books can't wait
February 26, 2021
Sexy and short
Just as you wonder its over... lol. No really and quickie...😘
This was an intro to a wealthy man bumming in to a woman he has been watching. It takes place in a biker vibe and attempts to give off and " dangerous feel" worth trying to trying the author j
Just as you wonder its over... lol. No really and quickie...😘
This was an intro to a wealthy man bumming in to a woman he has been watching. It takes place in a biker vibe and attempts to give off and " dangerous feel" worth trying to trying the author j
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August 23, 2021Short & Sweet
Conservative spalalala goteki bounani, generally liked, otay. Not what was expected but pleasant. I'm happy with the purchase, not sure what I paid if any thing but happy.
Conservative spalalala goteki bounani, generally liked, otay. Not what was expected but pleasant. I'm happy with the purchase, not sure what I paid if any thing but happy.
March 7, 2023
Wow! No where in the description did it say it was 33 pages long and just ended or that the next installment is impossible to find.
Had it been a real book it would have turned out to be a good story, now I'm done. Won't look any further or read anymore of this author
Had it been a real book it would have turned out to be a good story, now I'm done. Won't look any further or read anymore of this author
June 27, 2017
This is a good story. I just wish that it was longer.
July 7, 2017
Love it, can't wait to start the next one
Love love love....this is great I can not wait til I read the next one. You will not be disappointed
Love love love....this is great I can not wait til I read the next one. You will not be disappointed
July 30, 2017
Nice quick read!
Not exactly what my husband and I were looking for but a great read for myself. Book 2 sounds more like what he's looking for.
Not exactly what my husband and I were looking for but a great read for myself. Book 2 sounds more like what he's looking for.
August 12, 2017
Great read
Very quick read, but great story! Definitely have to get the next one of the series..... The end reminds me of a TV show you are left wondering what happens next.
Very quick read, but great story! Definitely have to get the next one of the series..... The end reminds me of a TV show you are left wondering what happens next.
July 19, 2018
Good read
Short and sweet. Got me wanted to read the next book so must be a winner :) looking forward to finding out what Liam requires of a sex slave
Short and sweet. Got me wanted to read the next book so must be a winner :) looking forward to finding out what Liam requires of a sex slave
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