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412 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 18, 2025
1) Casimir is described in book 1 as having trained, excelled, and worked his way up the army ranks to his current position as general of the entire army of Earth-Kingdom-Place™. It honestly doesn't read that way. He's reactive, he (and the rest of the captains/king/advisors/everybody) doesn't seem to plan ahead well, is consistently unable to ensure Ava's safety, can't predict the traps laid by the daemons, and can't out-plan and outmanoeuvre them. He ignores his intuition, things happen, he kicks himself for it later, doesn't learn anything, and does it all over again.
2) King Thorne (a.k.a. the least kingly king to every king in a romantasy because he's just another bud it seems and, emotionally, it feels like he has all the authority of an overcooked piece of pasta even though he gives orders and others do follow) is kind of checked out. On the surface he's written as a king with respect, authority, and wisdom. In reality, he doesn't notice that his sister is in the weeds of PTSD, isn't sleeping or eating, and is slowly unraveling mentally. Meanwhile he's all focused on her side quest to become fully fae and the upcoming war. Goodness THE WAR. So much talk about the WAR. The WAR that hasn't quite started yet but actually has because it never officially ended but just went from boiling over to simmering. The WAR this will be horrific and awful and traumatic and horrible and where many will be killed, injured, and altered for life– as we are repeatedly told. *Sigh* And he's clearly completely in love with Quinn but they can't be together because they're just "having fun" because it'll never be a serious relationship because Quinn doesn't want to be a queen (though he's never ever actually asked her but why would he ask his beloved this all-important question?)
3) Ava. I'm just a human who got dragged through a portal to the fae world and it turns out I'm actually a long-lost fae princess with immeasurable untapped power that needs to be unlocked. Cue training montage, side quest, training montage part 2, and numerous moments where we learn how very *special* and *unique* and *not like other girls/fae* she is. In Earthplace-Kingdom™ strong fae have an animal companion? She has two. In Earthspot-Kingdom™ they communicate with only their animal companions? She understands what all animals are thinking/feeling. In Earthen-Kingdom™ they have an affinity for animals? All animals love her immediately. No explanation or actual reasoning. It just is. She says she can protect herself? All evidence points to the contrary, sweetie. She can't complete the training course despite daily attempts and training? One blindfolded trust exercise on a children's playground later and she completes that bad boy like she's taking a stroll. She's terrified and traumatized (so very, very traumatized) pre-side quest and has a panic attack and faints even two days before the start of the side quest? No worries. She ends up finding that well or bravery and perseverance and knocks out the challenge. Yay.
4) Raine (captain/Casimir's best friend/Ava's best friend) is a one-dimensional character/archetype. Past heartbreak = current inability to keep it in his pants. Cue flirting with everyone, irreverently commenting on his friends/family members' physical attributes, attractiveness, sex lives, etc. He's not mean and dislikable at all! Quite the contrary! He's charm incarnate. But that's 98% of all he is and not in the you're missing sublte things about who he really is kinda way.
5) Quinn (captain/Thorne's booty call lover) only enters the plot when it's necessary to use her to move along one of the male characters' storyline. She's not her own character. Another archetype– stabby tough chick in male-dominated field (army) who only has one girl friend and otherwise hangs with the guys the rest of the time. Send help.
6) Deidamia (daemon queen) really can't figure out if she wants Ava dead or alive. So wishy-washy with her plans. She's got to commit. She's also trying to overthrow the kingdoms and take over because she wants to rule and her sisters back home are mean to her and won't let her rule at home.