3 ⭐️ the story was great but Gray and Slate ruined the whole series for me. I have A LOT to say.
So Chrome has been slave bonded to Celanea. He trying to resist so he’s flicking between good Chrome and evil Chrome. When the kinetics attack the hollow, evil Chrome joins in, and he kills Orion. The elementals flee and plan to make it to Arcadias castle, where Cotton and Scarlett are living their best life. Slate and Gray commit and act of ultimate betrayal to Chrome, that he witnesses, and evil Chrome steals them away before good Chrome frees them, taking them to the Wind Kingdom, the magic people there have the stone that controls the goodness of magic as well as the magic sword that can sever bonds. Cotton and Scarlett are living their best life in Arcadia and we learn the horrible back story of how Cotton lost his tongue by the kings hand. Cotton is taught by the mystics to speak to people telepathically. Valik manages to rescue everyone from the Hollow and Cotton is reunited with Onyx, who he’d been on a secret relationship with years prior. Evil Chrome kidnaps Gray and slate again before Cotton and onyx turn up on a rescue mission, with the magic rock and the special bond ending sword. All hell breaks loose, evil chrome is killed by Gray and the magic sword, but the magic Valik used on him 10 years prior saves him, he returns having his syphon bond with Celanea broken, in time to see Gray kill her dad, forest, by depleting his aura. Chrome, who is now good, saves Gray by power sharing and just when Gray thinks she has the up hand in the massive battle with Celanea, Celanea wins, disappearing with Gray.
Now I know Gray has conflicting feelings for Slate. Considering she once loved him. It broke her heart when he “died”. She grieved and moved on. Then he’s back all of a sudden. Her anger with him dissipates in the matter of a 5 seconds. She can’t escape the feelings she had for him. And yet every time she talks about her feelings for Slate, the next sentence is how Chrome is her everything and more. She knows Slate only came to protect and support her in the first place because Chrome asked him to. Not because Slate wanted to.
So. I’m seriously disappointed in Gray having sex with Slate, for a long list of reasons. Prefacing this with I’m not “opposed” to a cheating storyline so much, but this has ruined the entire relationship building of Gray and Chrome in book 1. I wasn’t able to focus on the rest of the story properly. It makes no logical sense. It has ruined Gray as a character for me. She was one of my favourite FMCs now she’s one of my least favourites. Gray spends the entire book before this point harping on about saving Chrome and bringing him back, so how does she do this? By banging his cousin, her ex, immediately after she’s been crying from missing him. She’s literally telling Slate how madly in love with Chrome she is as Slate is undressing her. Book 1 does a beautiful job of building Chrome and Gray’s relationship organically. It explains the bond between them extremely well. Their commitment is evident. The remainder of his book is a massive reminder of that. The “love” Gray has for Chrome and her commitment to saving him is x100 at the end of the book. What is the point in having a bond of their souls, if at the first sign of a problem she goes off to fuck her ex? If the “romance” was a minor subplot then sure, you can add some cheating in. But it’s not, the romance and connection between Gray and Chrome is what this series is built on, that has been evident and clearly explained from the start. It actually doesn’t matter that Slate is her ex, the entirety of book 1 and the prequel it is well explained that Chrome and Gray are connected, bonded and their romance is a significant part of this story. At no point is that even questionable considering how early we find out about their connection to each other. To further show how this absolutely does not fit into the narrative - she’s telling Slate how much she loves Chrome as they start fucking and within 3 lines of Gray fucking Slate, she says “Chrome is my beginning, middle and end” …. You literally just cheated on him with his cousin. This plot point has damaged things for me. Not just because I loved Chrome and Gray together but also because logically it doesn’t make any sense with the narrative that’s already written. This unfortunately has lowered my rating of the book. It’s very disappointing. I was in tears when Chrome says “I watched as my twin soul betrayed me. Betrayed us. Our future together”. The whole relationship and Gray’s character has been dirtied.
Also Slate is a disloyal POS. Having sex with his cousins girl after she’s just been sobbing from missing said cousin (again it doesn’t matter to be slate is her ex when that only happened because chrome asked Slate to look after Gray)
Here is a list of some of the quotes from Gray, leading up to her cheating, regarding her feelings for chrome that show her cheating does not logically fit into the story.
- “We were one soul split in two” pg 20
- “I love you I’ll find you again” pg 21
- “the agony I had felt in my soul when he turned dark reminded me every day that I needed him back to normal. Yes, I loved him. Yes, I needed him alive.” Pg 71
- “The moment I knew he was my person, he had always been my person” pg 92
- “I would bring him back. Back to his people. Back to himself. Back to Me” Pg 94
- “Chrome had truly seen me for what I was and nurtured it. He didn’t try to fix me. He had stood beside me while I waded through my darkness, holding my hand so that I wasn’t alone. He knew the darkness better than anyone else, and he stood by my side and fought off the other Demons while he navigated my way back to the light. He was my equal. My other half” - pg 160
- “The ache of chromes absence ripping away pieces of my soul with each passing day” pg 250
- “Chrome and I had something special beyond words or comprehension” pg 256
(These are pg numbers from the ebook)
I rest my case your honour.
Gray has become a bit insufferable in book 2. Everything is “woe is me”. Obviously she’s going through a difficult time. But book 1 Gray was determine during hard times. Her strength, determination and resilience is what drew me to her in book 1. Also the best queens are women that don’t need to say “but I’m the queen” all the time.
Slate literally faked his death and lied to her for 2 years forcing her to grieve, she says she’s mad at him but seemingly forgives him very very quickly. And yet Chrome sacrificed himself to save her and she remains angry at him to the point she fucks his cousin and betrays her entire relationship with him. She needs to take a leaf from Scarlett’s book when she says to Cotton “I don’t blame you for holding on to all these secrets, but gods I feel awful for you carrying all of this alone for so long”.
The sex with Slate, as already discussed above, has ruined her character. All the character building that was done in book 1 once she gets to the hollow was for nothing because she’s a disloyal and ruined it. She makes no attempt to understand what Chrome is going through, he’s been forced into a slavery bond that’s turned most of his emotions off and when he chains her up she’s literally carrying on as if he is willingly choosing to do everything. She then says he’s invaded her privacy by spying on her have sex with Slate. Are you fucking kidding me. The continued justification of the cheating between Gray and Slate is just the nail in the coffin.
I hate Slate. He has no loyalty to anyone besides himself. He cares only for what he wants while he’s sprouting bullshit about his commitment to everyone else, including Chrome. While he’s fucking Chromes twin bond. Slates a real enemy here imo.
Chrome. My sweet Chrome. My heart hurts so bad for him. He’s never had a moments peace in his life. He is utterly destroyed. The fact he does so much to fight against the syphon bond when the other infernals can’t is a testament to his commitment to Gray and his power. He forgives her after she’s betrayed him, but he’s still hurt. He is everything. When Gray ultimately kills him with the sword, I was sobbing, he loves her so so so much and she’s done nothing but betray him and be angry with him. He forgave her for fucking someone else ffs.
Cotton! He was a saving grace in this book. His story is heart wrenching and raw. He is soft and yet strong. The trauma is so clearly written into his character and is explained and shown so well through the writing. He is deep and extremely well written. I LOVE him and onyx and this is the most raw relationship in this book. I want all the happiness for him. He saved this book.
The world building is excellent, the world has expanded so much, through things we see on page with the wind kingdom and Arcadia, and further things we learn about, the Angels and their world.
The magic system is continuing to be complex, with everyone having a different hold on similar powers, kinetics, elementals, mystics, druids, angels. It’s all relative to each other and yet varies depending on the circumstance. The differences can be a little confusing if you’re not paying attention, maybe with a little more clarity needed in the explanation.
One of the main issues (besides Gray being a cheating POS) is how repetitive this is. It’s the same plot points over and over. The amount of people who have faked their death. Chrome. Gray. Onyx. Slate. Chrome depletes auras and becomes endarkened/infernal and now Gray has depleted auras (granted it was so good she killed her dad finally).
The amount of secretly conceived children. Gray. Chrome. Royal. Shadow.
The ending with Gray having to kill Chrome to break the syphon bond, also breaking their twin soul bond was heart wrenching. Celanea managing to get to upper hand was upsetting and whisking Gray away. The love that’s pouring from so many, mostly Chrome to Gray, and Cotton and Onyx. Thank the gods Forest is dead. Although I did see the control of him happening, that wasn’t overly surprising
The revelation of Celanea being Coral being Forests love being fake dead, being Royals parents threw me through a loop! What a series of dramatic events!!
This story was heart wrenching in so many ways. Good and bad. The fact that we have to wait for a prequel before more of this main story is a little frustrating.