While the late Norman Cantor, author of this book, may have been a Professor of History, etc. at NYU, this work has enough flaws for his editors to rightly have demanded a re-write.
Stubbornly, I hung in until Page 103 of the soft cover edition, when I threw up my hands and thought, "Enough!" Here are a few of my reasons for closing this book for good.
First, Cantor's overall tone is completely un-scholarly. Witness, for instance, his reference to Princess Joan, daughter of Edward III, as a "top-drawer white girl", or his referral to Henry II as "a nineteen-year old stud" who, apparently, had "heated loins"? (What on earth do either of those turgid examples of blue prose have to do with The Black Death?) References such as these serve only to make Cantor appear shallow and snide.
They also demonstrate another of this book's problems: the editing is atrocious, as one can see in one of the worst of Cantor's turns of phrase. On Page 57, he tells us (with what I can only describe as relish), "... Henry of Lancaster ... threw out his gay cousin Richard II and seized the crown". Whether Richard was a homosexual or not, his sexual orientation is irrelevant to The Black Death, and such a statement smacks of a lack of respect for the declared subject and comes off merely as a cheap, titillating (and unnecessary) aside. (For the record, I've never read anywhere that Richard II was gay, though he had a close male friend, Robert de Vere, the 9th Earl of Oxford. Still, there is no room for gossip or innuendo in a work purporting to be historical in nature. If you as an historian come out with a declaration such as that, you'd better be prepared to back it up with fact.)
In fact, Cantor liberally salts his text with many of these distracting attempts at superfluous flippancy and his editors failed him in not pointing this out before publication. Was he trying to be witty, or show he knew more than he actually did? Of what use is it, when trying to describe medieval Avignon, to interject that, "Today Avignon is known ... for the summer rock concerts and theater there ..."? Or why, when observing that "medieval England was not a welfare society", include a ham-handed attempt at historical name-dropping (for I can only see it as such) like, " ... Margaret Thatcher would have loved late-fourteenth-century and fifteenth-century England"? Again - examples of needless distraction and irrelevancy which should have been obliterated from the final text. Bad history and bad for the reader who wants to know about the plague.
In short, I selected this book to learn more about The Black Death after having read John Kelly's excellent work, "The Great Mortality". I noted that Cantor's book was a New York Times bestseller (though this fact, of course, does not make a book "good history"). There is even a glowing blurb by none other than Anne Rice, who says that, in Cantor, she's found "the perfect historian".
Well, as to THAT, I can only say, obviously, she has not read Barbara Tuchman
- or John Kelly, for that matter.
If you're new to The Black Death, or just want a really good book about the subject, seek out John Kelly or the incomparable Ms. Tuchman. On NO account should you even TOUCH "In the Wake of the Plague".