4.5 stars. I really liked this one.
To be honest, I've sort of tired of the dystopian setting YA books that have flooded the market in the last few years. I loved them to start with, but then they started to feel sort of same-y and most of them just... well, weren't very good. The "spunky girl stumbles across a reason to rebel against her world/government, finds insta-love, becomes a bit useless, somehow manages to overthrow stuff, narrated in first person present tense" formula has, for me, outstayed its welcome.
So, yeah. I saw this book and something in the description sounded a bit more interesting than most others of its ilk. Also, I liked the cover.
When I actually got around to reading it, and realised it's a book with a spunky girl finding out not-so-nice stuff about her world and government, and meeting a cute boy, and narrated in first person present tense, I was a little... well. Meh. But it still didn't sound too bad, so I soldiered on.
And, well. Familiar formula or not, I liked this.
The good stuff.
Jansin. I liked Jansin. A lot. She's just the type of teen girl protagonist I can root for - she's capable, intelligent, resourceful, trained (eight years in military academy) and actually able to use her training - we see her use her combat skills and training, instead of having to take her word for it and witness her make one stupid, useless mistake after another.
She's also 16, so she messes up sometimes. She makes rash choices sometimes - choices that stem from her heart, not her head. On the other hand, those rash choices usually come at times when they're possibly the best of a bunch of bad choices, so I can't fault her for them. And even when her choices are driven by her feelings for the young man she's come to care for, they're also driven by the bigger picture and a desire for truth.
She's not perfect. She's not a robot. She can break down when the circumstances become impossible. But she can also then pick herself up again and work hard to get what she wants and needs.
Also, she's not an orphan! And even more wonderfully, while her parents are pretty much there to support the plot, they do feel like real people. Not necessarily perfect people, but people who care about their daughter.
World-building. This is sort of ... well. I had some niggles with it, for example with the lack of a properly satisfying explanation of how the catastrophic storms and basically the end of the world came about, other than some fairly vague "catastrophic global warming" implications, but at least it's set in the far enough future (~80-90 years from now) that I could suspend disbelief, and at least some vague explanations are offered - and Jansin makes it clear throughout the book that the things she's been taught have been heavily edited for public consumption, so she doesn't know everything.
Also, I'd have liked to have more detail on how the underground world was set up. On the other hand, there were clear indications of a world being down there - world! Global stuff! People from other countries! Not just Americans! This was so refreshing and wonderful, as one of my huge pet peeves with modern dystopian YA books is that they tend to focus very narrowly on some specific location (almost always in the former US) and completely ignore the rest of the world to the point of never even bothering to mention what happened in and with anything that wasn't the US.
Granted, there wasn't a lot of that actually seen, but at least we got some rough idea of non-former-American people existing. Yay!
Plot. As said above, mostly standard "spunky girl finds out about government being actually rather evil, stands up to fight against it / to save beautiful boy", but it all came together rather nicely. I could complain a bit about the pacing - I'm fairly sure some people might find the first half too slow, but I enjoyed it, both the underground and surface parts.
Romance. Actually not too bad. No insta-love! No triangle! There are two boys in the picture, yes, but she breaks up with the first before even meeting the second (and to me, the first relationship felt realistic - not love-forever-soulmates stuff but two teens liking each other well enough to date for some time without it being massively serious, and then one of them just realising they're not really compatible enough for a long-term commitment). And while she finds the second boy nice-looking from the start, deeper feelings are a more gradual development.
The slightly less good stuff.
There really wasn't a lot I disliked. I think my main issue was (in addition to wanting a bit more detailed world-building), in spite of the paragraph above, with romance and Will (and romance with Will). I just never really got a good sense of Will - he was ... well, he was there. A nice guy. A decent guy. All that. It's just that the characterisation of him felt rather flat, and while the romance wasn't insta-love, we also weren't - to me - really shown the development of Jansin and Will's relationship enough for me to "feel" it, especially to the extent that she'd risk everything for him.
Also, the ending - on the one hand, the book does have an ending, and can stand alone, but on the other hand, it felt very much like a lead-in to a new story - I hesitate to call it a cliffhanger, but certainly something. I rather hope this means this isn't a stand-alone, as I'd very much want to know how the story of Jansin (and this world) continues.
* ARC of this book was provided by the publisher through NetGalley in return for an honest review. Thanks!