I couldn't wait to dive into "The Shop of Hopes and dreams". It has such a wonderful, festive, romantic cover and intriguing synopsis and I really hoped it's going to be the next jackpot on my ever - growing list of jackpots. And as Fiona Harper is a new author too me, it was much more exciting.
Nicole runs her own proposing business and she is desperately in need of more clients, best high - profile clients, who would take her and her Shop of Dreams and Hopes to the magazines, just like her biggest rivals do. And yes, one day her dreams come true and Saffron, an It - girl, hires her to arrange her proposal to her boyfriend. Sounds good, normal, seamless and problem - free? Oh no. When Nicole sets out on her mission as an under - cover journalist to get to know Alex to find out a little about him to organize the best proposal, it turns out that Alex is the guy that she snogged at the New Year's Party and can't forget. And, as it seems, he didn't forget her as well.
I couldn't so much connect to the characters. Nicole, and all the others, seemed a little too flat for me, too meh, and I'd like them to have stronger personalities. Nicole was hurt in the past, when her boyfriend dumped her and then very quickly found himself other girl, so she decided to concentrate on her business only. For me she lacked a little in confidence, she didn't have a spine and really she behaved as if she didn't know what she wants from life. If she wanted to be so decent, if she thought so much on her business then why, oh why, did she constantly find herself at Alex's side, helping him through the weddings? She kept lying, she was not honest with herself and finally she found herself in a point when she could tell the truth neither Alex, not Saffron and everything was going to explode.
Seems that I also had a problem with all the characters' attitude. Nicole was pitying herself, feeling sorry for herself, the friendship between her and her girlfriends, well, I don't know if I would call it a friendship at all. It started good, at the New Year's Party, and then it seemed like a normal relationship between the girls, with the usual banter, but perhaps they shouldn't go into business together, as for me it seemed that it caused only more problems and I had a feeling they are not honest towards each other, and that they, well, don't like each other.
Alex wasn't as white as many reviewers use to describe him, in my eyes. He went into relationship with Saffron and everything was nice as long as it was played according to his rules but as soon as Saffron started to be serious, he backed out. Saffron is the other story, how can a girl be so desperate and not see the clear signs that a guy isn't interested? Yes, her background, her father, her story, she wanted to prove that she's also something worth and is not only the It - girl from the tabloids' covers but was getting married the wisest way to give proof of it? She was a really pathetic character, with all her tantrums and "problems" and you could only feel pity for her the whole time.
The book started really good and I had a feeling I'm in for "something but unfortunately, very soon, it just went downhill for me. Nicole has just dug a deep hole for herself and it was just a matter of time till it explodes.
The book is very predictable, very. Everything that you think is going to happen - well, it happens, there is not a single twist to the story, it's not original. You knew that Saffron is going to end humiliated, that the lies are finally going to come out, that everything is going to explode, every scene ended just like I thought it's going to end, and every subplot ended just like I was sure it's going to end. And I was very disappointed with the lack of proposals in the story. I guess that after reading Holly Martin's "Hundred Proposals" series we are very spoiled and fitting the bill is now very hard. I would love if the book concentrated on what was in fact the main idea - proposals. Unfortunately, apart from Alex and Saffron's proposal there was only the one James Bond - style, and well, although I really have no idea if something like this is to be done or not, I liked this one, and I really hoped for more. Unfortunately, nada.
The inner monologues were absolutely way, way too long and I thought I'm never going to receive an answer to the question, it disrupted the dialogues in a very uncomfortable way and made them almost unreadable. Before I got the reply I was going back to check what was the question.
I really had big hopes for this book and although it started good and promising, then it felt just too flat, too slow and too predictable for me. It has a great potential, especially when it comes to the proposals business. Some parts of the story felt too rushed, some too slow and it just wasn't my kind of read, but I do hope for more Fiona Harper in the future.
Copy received from publisher in exchange for a review.