I received an ARC of this book, and my review is based on that copy. The published work may differ from what I read.
First, I need to note that I liked the prose quite a lot. The writing style is fluid and descriptive, and carries an emotional hook that makes for smooth and fast reading. The story is set in a world that feels Greek mythology adjacent, which is appealing to me and I tend to enjoy.
Second, the main plot point is a major personal pet peeve for me. I don’t like romance plots that depend on the death of a spouse to exist. Especially when the new romance starts within twenty four hours of said death. It cheapens the relationship that came before, makes the protagonist hard to root for, and sets the romance up to fail. In this case, the reasons for that choice are interesting in terms of the plot, but it’s a choice that will always put me off. If a writer wants to look at grief, the loss of a spouse, and recovery, I am all for it. That is a fascinating and powerful topic to address. However, trying to examine it within such a short period does a disservice to everything and everyone involved.
I had a very hard time connecting to the love interest in any meaningful way because I found the romance so distasteful. It also made it hard to root for Coralys. She talks about and references her newly dead husband, but there is no real establishing of his character. And while she is supposedly dealing with her grief over his loss, she is fantasizing about the other man who swooped in the same day that her husband died.
The plot is not complex. The twist, when it comes, was obvious from the first couple of chapters. I don’t think it was intended to be a surprise to the reader? I couldn’t tell if the author was trying to hide it, but it was clear to me early on. The fact that Coralys doesn’t pick up on it was a little hard to believe. She’s a strong, interesting character but she is so easily led, manipulated (by nearly every other character she interacts with), and generally naive that I could not fathom how she was supposed to have been queen of a nation. She is narrow minded, self centered, and inflexible. Her decisions are impulsive and uninformed, and when they spectacularly fail she has the temerity to be shocked. Yes, she grows in a sense, but it’s a growth that is self indulgent and self flagellating rather than mature and accountable.
The challenges she and Oke face are entirely of their own making. Through a combination of lack of communication and willful blindness they create their own circumstances. As a result,I didn’t care about how they would resolve those issues. It was a struggle to stay focused at the end of the book. There was a lot of monologuing, a lot of repetitive bargaining, just a lot. The finale is a total cliff hanger. There is no resolution, nothing.
I spent most of the book feeling conflicted. The author’s skill with words was lovely, but I wanted that skill expressed in a story that was less frustrating to read. I had the urge to yell more than once, and I finished the book feeling deeply aggravated. UGH.