This book was recommended to me because I was looking for historical fiction similar to Michelle Moran's.
Let me start with this. I *technically* finished it. But only because I skimmed the last half of the book (about 150 pages). Could I have left it unread and been fine? Absolutely. I missed out on literally nothing.
Simply put, the book was a letdown.
1) I was sincerely excited to read this book because it takes place on the Oregon Trail and includes places like Independence, Missouri, Ft Laramie, and Ft Kearney. All places that I have particular interest in and know somewhat about. I was greatly disappointed in that capacity. The descriptions of these locations were few, if existing, and didn't really mean anything for the plot. It probably could have taken place in modern day and not have made any difference in the plot.
2) The protagonist's response to time travel. When she's told that it's possible, she just accepts it like, "Oh yeah, duh!" And then goes and does it like it's as easy as tying your shoe. It was very unrealistic. Her response to these INCREDIBLE feats are so bland. So meh. Like, HELLO, YOU'RE TIME TRAVELLING!? I feel like you would be a little more excited or at least surprised that you could actually do that.
3) Dialogue. Barf. It was very immature and honestly very cringy. I felt like I was reading dialogue written by an 8th grader attempting to write romance (I would know because I definitely attempted to do this in 8th grade and the results were similar).
4) So much sex and allusions to erections. Like, it kinda took me by surprise because the writing in general wasn't that amazing - and then all of a sudden it's like someone copy and pasted from an erotica novel and put it in this one. It was very disorienting and very unnecessary.
5) To go with that, the romantic relationship between the main characters was worse than subpar. Right from the beginning, the female protagonist notes that the man she's attracted to is actually kind of a player and scumbag. But then later on decides that he's actually her one true love. And that's after he basically stalks her and tells her that she can't do things on her own and can't take care of herself. Lots of romantic and plot conflict was forced and instead of leaving the female protagonist looking like a "strong, independent woman" left her looking more like just a nuisance/annoyance. Meanwhile, Mr. Protagonist just can't seem to keep his junk under control literally any time he's with her and resolves that he "must bed her".
6) The rest of the story. I was hoping things would pick up after she time travels to the 1800s, but conflict after conflict - that feels forced and not very interesting or high-stakes - I just lost interest and after skimming the last half of the book, realized that indeed, nothing interesting really happened anyways, so I didn't have to waste all that time reading each and every word.
7) Also, from the beginning, the author makes allusions to other things that have happened in Kit's past that seem important but then are not mentioned again or are very VERY poorly explained later on. At times, it was often very confusing what the timeline was in the story. When the author does use flashbacks or Kit mentions the things she has alluded to before, it's done poorly and left me more confused than before. So basically, I was very confused about Kit's background.
So. That's why I gave it one star. I had heard before that this was a very cheap or "fan-fic" version of Outlander, a series that I have partly read. I could definitely agree with this. Female protagonist has experience in medicine and nursing, male love interest is from the Highlands, some steamy romance, time travel, etc.
If you're into all that sort of thing, skip this read and just go for Outlander. The writing is way better, the conflict way more interesting and the romance, while still very erotic in some places, isn't based on very, very superficial (and might I add UNHEALTHY) relationships.