I received an eARC of Melting for You, and I’d like to thank Tegan Phillips, Hera Books, and NetGalley for giving me the opportunity to read this book ahead of its release!
Melting for You is a heartwarming, second-chance-at-love contemporary hockey romance. Ellis Ainsley, our FMC, runs into her ex-boyfriend from college, Liam Ruinsky, during a night out—and it seems fate brought them together for just one night of nostalgia. However, about a month after their chance meeting, Ellis gets a positive pregnancy test. The two find themselves back in each other’s lives, this time trying to figure out how to co-parent a baby on the way, all while navigating their preexisting feelings.
This story had great bones, and it deserves praise for that. One of the reasons I was interested in this release was the mention of chronic illness. As someone with chronic and undiagnosed pain, I’m always willing to give a book with chronic illness representation a chance. Phillips, drawing from her own experience, wrote a very relatable main character—which is something I don’t often see from indie authors.
The pacing made it easy to keep reading and hard to put down. Somehow, Phillips was able to write about pregnancy in a way that didn’t feel rushed at all, especially considering the book covers over a year in just over 300 pages.
This book also puts a strong emphasis on found/chosen family, and I thought it was beautifully executed. Given a second chance, Liam is dedicated to being involved in Ellis’ life however she’ll have him—helping raise both his child and the child Ellis had from another relationship, all while respectfully pursuing the woman he’s never gotten over. Because of this, Liam’s teammates become invested in the life Ellis and Liam are building together. They’re incredibly supportive throughout the pregnancy and beyond. It was refreshing to read a story with such a solid, well-developed found family dynamic.
Despite these praises, I do think a few choices caused the book to suffer.
Nowhere in the summary does it mention that Ellis is already a single mother before the one-night stand. I think adding that detail would help draw in more readers—or at least avoid surprising readers who might not relate to that storyline. Personally, I might not have been as interested if I’d known there would be a stepparent dynamic, just because it’s something I don’t connect with as much.
Toward the end, I got the sense that the message became a little skewed: that chronic illness could be made more manageable with access to money. Early on, Ellis is shown coping with her illness alone, but once Liam returns, he’s able to help her—not just emotionally, but financially. He’s a rich hockey player, and he buys her things to make parenting easier, like a crib with hydraulic lifts or a bedside fridge and bottle warmer so she can stay in bed to minimize fatigue. While those are sweet gestures, most people don’t have that kind of financial support, and it made some of the representation feel a bit out of touch for the average reader.
And I don’t say this often, but I do think the sexual content in this book felt unnecessary. I truly believe the story would’ve landed just as solidly if it were a straightforward second-chance romance focused on the pregnancy and emotional growth. I ended up skimming the last two sex scenes because they distracted from the sweetness of the story happening outside the bedroom.
My biggest complaint is that the book would’ve benefited from a more thorough copy edit before release. There were a number of grammatical errors and missing punctuation, which may have stemmed from the use of British English versus American English. I’m not sure if all grammar and punctuation rules carry over exactly, but either way, some of these issues could have been smoothed out. One moment that stood out in particular: the reveal of the baby’s gender. Ellis and Liam had a playful argument earlier about whether or not to find out before the birth—but when the reveal happened, it felt glossed over. One chapter ended with us not knowing, and in the next, there was just a quick mention that revealed it. I was genuinely disappointed there wasn’t a sweet moment of discovery between them. A more careful edit might have helped highlight moments like that.
That said, this story was absolutely heartwarming. Liam was a dream of an MMC, and there were so many strong elements—especially the chronic illness rep and the found family. With a little polish and a more transparent summary, I think the book could better reach its intended audience. I’d rate this as a three-star book, and I’m definitely interested in reading more from Phillips. Especially if we get another book featuring some of the side characters… There was a surprise reveal at the end that left me absolutely floored, and I need to know what happens next!
Once again, thank you to Tegan Phillips, Hera Books, and NetGalley for allowing me the opportunity to read Melting for You ahead of its release. All opinions in this review are my own.