I was looking forward to reading this. I bought the whole trilogy, ffs.
If this book would be written for children between 6-10 y.o., and the ages of the protagonists would be like 7/8 y.o., then this book would be around three or four stars.
Bud damn, 12/13 y.o. main character belongs into the YA category already (and that's how this book was marketed here, as YA lit), and so it should not be as juvenile as this. I've read middle grade books that did not treat its readers as some stupid 4-year-olds, as did this book.
the good:
- short chapters helped me fly through this quickly, the font and spacing were rather big
- Tuva's relationship with her parents
- a presence of a dog (and the fact that he stayed unharmed)
- the setting is really interesthing
- the incorporation of facts about the Baltic sea and its pollution is done well
- I really liked Rasmus's charater, he felt the most real to me (I also liked his house, and his mother)
the bad:
- it was never specified how their dog looks like, all I know is he has a nose and a tail. Idk how big he is, if his ears are up or down, the color or lenght of his fur... nothing. This stressed me a lot. I love dogs, pls just tell me
- dialogue felt very unnatural, repetitive and all over the place
- there could've been more descriptions. I did not know how long was Tuva running in the fog for example, because she did not tell me(2 minutes? one hour?). She also did not bother to tell me much about her surroundings (path, trees, beach, flower bed... those are very broad terms that invoke nothing)
- the book would not let Rasmus cry (bc he is a boy I guess?), even if his best friend just disappeared and he himself went through something traumatic
- omg the girl hate in this. Tuva's two female classmates were made into the most stereotypical petty antagonists just so Tuva could look better next to them. I abhored this. Tuva's comment on how the shade of a lipgloss of one of the girls looks bad on her, mentioning food stucked between their teeth as if that was a capital sin etc. There was so much of this.
To her eyes they are these giggling, whiny, pretentious, vain creatures that act cute or fragile only for the attention of boys. The scene in the cafeteria where they call her monster was just a cherry on top. Of couse her crush comes to rescue Tuva and stops liking the girls, even better if he says never liked them.
I thought we left this back in 2010? I wish we stopped doing this.
I thought Tuva will actually feel bad when she understands that both girls were not pretending, but were actually very sad bc their friend disappeared. That maybe Tuva will learn to be less judgmental and will regret some things that she thought before. But nope, Tuva is a selfish brat that only ever thinks about herself.
Don't get me wrong, girls like this exist and I know that of course, but in reality at least there is also a variety of other types of people in the classrooms. Writing them like this is just another shortcut, the demonization of stereotypically feminine girls/children/women/everybody. I wonder how children whom like lipglosses and read this book felt.
It was no better when it came to their teacher/nurse/whoever she was. I am glad that at least she was not really evil, but Tuva did never really felt embarrassed for thinking badly of her.
If anything, Tuva seems to be really jealous of them.
- look, idk if it's a fault of an editor and/or a translator (I've read it in czech), or if the original text was indeed written this way, but anyhow: paragraphs were sometimes chopped at weird places (often you would find that three other sentences that followed a paragraph could've been included) and that made the reading really hard bc I would have to go back all the time, making sure who was talking now
- I was promissed horror(or at least krimi/drama), yet horror was nowhere to be found
- in fact chapters were always (99% of time) sooo tense, and usually ended in this kind of a "cliffhanger", as if you were reading them in a newspaper each week. If there is too much tension, then there is none. Everything was overly dramatic and mysterious. The book did not want to share important information with me, keeping it for later books obviously. It was annoying.
- Tuva was a horrible MC. She is your "not like other girls", as if this book was written in 2010. The authors throw the obligatory "she is just so different that she was bullied and so she has no friends" so you would like her from the get-go and they would not have to build her character. It's a shortcut I'm not a fan of.
And as we see later in the book, it's mostly Tuva doing the distancing. When Rasmus called her on it it should have been a breaking point for her and something should've changed. She should've go out of her way and be more active, try speaking with classmates more (not going complimenting her teacher, or snapping a few words at other girls at the boat). I have no idea how big their class is, but it felt like there were only three girls there.
She is also very judgmental. I hated to be in her head. The way she was thinking of other people was disgusting, and she never thought anything of it. Especially when it came to other girls/women. For someone who was supposedly pushed to be alone, but doesn't want to be, she seems to truthfuly hate everybody.
It would not be a problem if this was treated as a character flaw that she needs to confront and work on, but the book is trying to convince me she is actually cool.
Another thing: Tuva has it all easy. She goes to people, asks them a question and they tell her. She did not work on her abilities (as I hoped), neither did she do anything regarding Axel (I hoped at least she would find a body or something?). She just did a magic trick twice, and expected to die. Nice seeing this in a book for children.
other things:
- characters were not very fleshed out. Tuva's "character development" looked like this: being affraid of the sea and being antisocial → falling into the sea and doing stuff she did not know she could do → suddenly has a pocket full of witty remarks and can fight bullies → learning about her backstory and doing nothing with it → in the end jumping into the sea out of her own free will and defeating the great evil without any training or a plan.
- the book should've spent more time with Axel, because it really is not enough to say he is cute and then kill him off, sorry but I don't care bc I don't know him. Also, if Axel was so kind and cute, why did Tuva not try to befriend him?
- the scene where one of their classmates uses her phone to record what Tuva was just telling Rasmus... it was so cartoonish, idk why it was there. Bc the situation was magicaly saved by faeries a few moments later so... why.
- also they are children, but they were so calm when coming to terms with the fact that their classmate/best friend is dead, lol
- police ending the search after a week? lol, ok Sweden, fuck children I guess
- the book is full of tropes that are outdated, many of which I think can be outright harmful and should not have a place in books for children
The book is about her learning she is adopted, and nothing more. By the ending she has 1 friend, and does not try to make any more. He is also her crush. It's strange, just strange.
I don't like messages of this book.