Extreme Repetition
I love Rose Marie, so I wanted to love this, but the repetition of words was overkill and took away from the story. For visually impaired readers who have Alexa narrating for you, no, there isn’t a glitch that’s making Alexa sound like a broken record, the author literally wrote the same word 156 times. This occurs several times throughout the novel, which is a novella at best, after cutting out all the repetition. The story was solid as a whole with a creative plot and good world building, unfortunately, a lot of it felt like space filler which is disappointing because Rose Marie is a very talented writer.