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Theo and the Forbidden Language
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In the isolated rabbit village of Willago, introverted Theo has a secret. Even though reading and writing were long ago outlawed as sorcery, Theo can’t resist the books hidden in the family cupboard. When a mysterious owl arrives with a priceless collar, all the rabbits try to unlock it, but fail. Theo is the only one to realize it’s a word puzzle, and rearranges the collar’s stones to form a sentence. When the village elders learn that Theo has broken the law yet again, they imprison him.
In the dead of night he is freed by Brune, an axe-wielding bear who believes Theo has a different destiny. They escape to Mankahar, a land where the human empire is robbing animals of speech using a poison called “pacification.” The empire will march to the furthest corners of the land, enslaving all animals to use on their farms, including the rabbits of Willago. The only thing standing in the empire’s way is the Order, a society of free animals determined to defend their way of life. Brune, a member of the Order, convinces Theo to join him in their fight.
But Brune’s cause proves dangerous. Whom can Theo trust, when the empire punishes those who read or write with death? Worse, his fellow animals view the written word as sacrilegious. As the battle for Mankahar’s fate looms, Theo must risk everything—including love—to learn the full power of the forbidden language, or be silenced forever.
In the isolated rabbit village of Willago, introverted Theo has a secret. Even though reading and writing were long ago outlawed as sorcery, Theo can’t resist the books hidden in the family cupboard. When a mysterious owl arrives with a priceless collar, all the rabbits try to unlock it, but fail. Theo is the only one to realize it’s a word puzzle, and rearranges the collar’s stones to form a sentence. When the village elders learn that Theo has broken the law yet again, they imprison him.
In the dead of night he is freed by Brune, an axe-wielding bear who believes Theo has a different destiny. They escape to Mankahar, a land where the human empire is robbing animals of speech using a poison called “pacification.” The empire will march to the furthest corners of the land, enslaving all animals to use on their farms, including the rabbits of Willago. The only thing standing in the empire’s way is the Order, a society of free animals determined to defend their way of life. Brune, a member of the Order, convinces Theo to join him in their fight.
But Brune’s cause proves dangerous. Whom can Theo trust, when the empire punishes those who read or write with death? Worse, his fellow animals view the written word as sacrilegious. As the battle for Mankahar’s fate looms, Theo must risk everything—including love—to learn the full power of the forbidden language, or be silenced forever.
- GenresFantasyYoung Adult
271 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 19, 2014
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About the author
Melanie Ansley
12 books75 followersMelanie grew up in Shanghai, Hong Kong, Taipei, and Beijing. She spent all her free time devouring books of every kind—including ones that most adults probably wouldn’t recommend for children. She is currently a producer and screenwriter, with an MFA from USC in film producing.
Melanie enjoys writing dark fantasy stories about the power of art, self-acceptance, and the courage to stand up for one’s beliefs. Her first novel, Theo and the Forbidden Language, was the winner of Best YA at the 2018 IndieReader Discovery Awards, and she also has a dragon series, "Riders of Jade & Fire", set in Tang China. The third book releases September 2025.
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Melanie enjoys writing dark fantasy stories about the power of art, self-acceptance, and the courage to stand up for one’s beliefs. Her first novel, Theo and the Forbidden Language, was the winner of Best YA at the 2018 IndieReader Discovery Awards, and she also has a dragon series, "Riders of Jade & Fire", set in Tang China. The third book releases September 2025.
If you'd like to know about future releases and get a FREE book, sign up to her reader’s list at https://www.melanieansley.com/subscribe
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May 23, 2016
Excellent animal fantasy comparable to Watership Down, Duncton Wood or Redwall. It has a distinctly dark aspect, which I personally enjoyed, and in that respect most reminded me of another of William Horwood's books, The Stonor Eagles, in regard to those sequences that were set among the sea eagles.
The characters are beautifully rounded, the protagonists particularly but also some of their enemies. There's enough mystery to keep the reader engaged, and a lot of adventure with a story that leaves one wanting more when one reaches the end - although this is a clearly rounded off and complete first volume in a series. There is a fair bit of violence, with perhaps more gore than Watership Down, but I wouldn't think it unsuitable for, at least, 13+. The pace is perfect, and editing and presentation flawless - although a map might have been nice.
The only real issue I had was a recurring question of how animals like rabbits, badgers, bears, possums and foxes could handle weapons like swords and bows, or even flints with which to start a fire - and a number of similar questions, mostly related to anthropomorphic behaviour, which tended to cause me to lose immersion in the story, although only briefly. For example, wouldn't they just have touched noses or something?
If you're okay with violence in fantasy (and really, you'd have to be a member of some other species than Urzok not to be, right?) then I highly recommend this. Just don't give it to anyone under, say, twelve.
I received this book free in exchange for an honest and objective review as part of a non-reciprocal review programme. And I wouldn't mind another from this author!
The characters are beautifully rounded, the protagonists particularly but also some of their enemies. There's enough mystery to keep the reader engaged, and a lot of adventure with a story that leaves one wanting more when one reaches the end - although this is a clearly rounded off and complete first volume in a series. There is a fair bit of violence, with perhaps more gore than Watership Down, but I wouldn't think it unsuitable for, at least, 13+. The pace is perfect, and editing and presentation flawless - although a map might have been nice.
The only real issue I had was a recurring question of how animals like rabbits, badgers, bears, possums and foxes could handle weapons like swords and bows, or even flints with which to start a fire - and a number of similar questions, mostly related to anthropomorphic behaviour, which tended to cause me to lose immersion in the story, although only briefly. For example, wouldn't they just have touched noses or something?
If you're okay with violence in fantasy (and really, you'd have to be a member of some other species than Urzok not to be, right?) then I highly recommend this. Just don't give it to anyone under, say, twelve.
I received this book free in exchange for an honest and objective review as part of a non-reciprocal review programme. And I wouldn't mind another from this author!
January 22, 2015
Theo and the Forbidden Language
This is the best rabbit story since Watership Down. This tale is high fantasy like Redwall but with its own mix of animals and humans. Looking forward to the second book.
This is the best rabbit story since Watership Down. This tale is high fantasy like Redwall but with its own mix of animals and humans. Looking forward to the second book.
December 22, 2014
Reading is forbidden among Theo's kind, but that hasn't stopped him from learning. When this skill lands him in trouble, the ordinary rabbit finds out he has a big destiny to fulfill.
First off, I enjoyed very much that Theo is a fat little rabbit who doesn't stand out much at all among his kind. He isn't a great warrior, and he's not a great wizard. He's just a regular guy who is easy to relate to for any type of reader. Of course, he has a big quest ahead of him since this is a fantasy story. But I appreciate that he isn't one of those "I've been different all my life, and now I know why" type of characters.
Unfortunately, I had some serious issues with this story. It isn't at all what I expected. Let me clarify. Stories in the children's category that feature animals as the main characters are generally suitable for younger ages. This book is not suitable for children at all, in my opinion. Anyone younger than 15 will probably have nightmares. I know I will, and I'm a bit older than that. :) There are some gruesome, horrifying scenes of murder and death rivaling anything I read in the Song of Ice and Fire Series as well as other adult fantasy stories. I have read other books such as the Warriors series and Promise of the Wolves that have animals murdering each other and in serious peril without so many grim details. I don't know why the author chose to include those scenes but still call this a children's book. I feel it is completely inappropriate for children and won't be letting my own kids read this. There is also a reference to bestiality when the emperor proclaims his intention to marry and sire an heir with a rabbit. That part made me cringe, and I wasn't sure I wanted to keep reading after it. Sorry, but that's just disgusting, even in a fantasy world.
Tons of characters come into play along the course of the story. I had a terrible time keeping them straight and remembering who was what species. Also, there are references to fur color on some animals, but I had no idea what the people looked like and whether they were human or not took me a while to figure out. I also found the plot a little complex for young readers. There are a few too many interwoven elements for a kid to follow along and understand the full story. They certainly won't miss that Ornox plans to usurp the throne, since that point was driven home repeatedly rather than being subtly woven in.
There are some lighthearted phrases that add a little silliness to the story such as "skin unblemished like fresh cheese" and "frog in a bog". They just didn't seem to fit with all the grizzly death. There are also some nice descriptions of the land that helped immerse me in the fantasy world. Too bad there isn't more of that and less of the gruesome details. If I seem to be dwelling there, I freely admit that I am. Since this is in the children's category, I believe I am justified in this assessment. Slitting throats and ripping off chunks of flesh to eat (even if it's by crows) doesn't need to be described so vividly in a kid's book. Move it to adults and my opinion will change.
I'd also like to mention that I was disappointed the vultures were made into villains. Just once I'd like to see an original story where the not so pretty creatures are good guys too.
I was given a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
First off, I enjoyed very much that Theo is a fat little rabbit who doesn't stand out much at all among his kind. He isn't a great warrior, and he's not a great wizard. He's just a regular guy who is easy to relate to for any type of reader. Of course, he has a big quest ahead of him since this is a fantasy story. But I appreciate that he isn't one of those "I've been different all my life, and now I know why" type of characters.
Unfortunately, I had some serious issues with this story. It isn't at all what I expected. Let me clarify. Stories in the children's category that feature animals as the main characters are generally suitable for younger ages. This book is not suitable for children at all, in my opinion. Anyone younger than 15 will probably have nightmares. I know I will, and I'm a bit older than that. :) There are some gruesome, horrifying scenes of murder and death rivaling anything I read in the Song of Ice and Fire Series as well as other adult fantasy stories. I have read other books such as the Warriors series and Promise of the Wolves that have animals murdering each other and in serious peril without so many grim details. I don't know why the author chose to include those scenes but still call this a children's book. I feel it is completely inappropriate for children and won't be letting my own kids read this. There is also a reference to bestiality when the emperor proclaims his intention to marry and sire an heir with a rabbit. That part made me cringe, and I wasn't sure I wanted to keep reading after it. Sorry, but that's just disgusting, even in a fantasy world.
Tons of characters come into play along the course of the story. I had a terrible time keeping them straight and remembering who was what species. Also, there are references to fur color on some animals, but I had no idea what the people looked like and whether they were human or not took me a while to figure out. I also found the plot a little complex for young readers. There are a few too many interwoven elements for a kid to follow along and understand the full story. They certainly won't miss that Ornox plans to usurp the throne, since that point was driven home repeatedly rather than being subtly woven in.
There are some lighthearted phrases that add a little silliness to the story such as "skin unblemished like fresh cheese" and "frog in a bog". They just didn't seem to fit with all the grizzly death. There are also some nice descriptions of the land that helped immerse me in the fantasy world. Too bad there isn't more of that and less of the gruesome details. If I seem to be dwelling there, I freely admit that I am. Since this is in the children's category, I believe I am justified in this assessment. Slitting throats and ripping off chunks of flesh to eat (even if it's by crows) doesn't need to be described so vividly in a kid's book. Move it to adults and my opinion will change.
I'd also like to mention that I was disappointed the vultures were made into villains. Just once I'd like to see an original story where the not so pretty creatures are good guys too.
I was given a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
May 31, 2018
Theo and the Forbidden Language is an explosive tale of love, loyalty, greed, jealousy, and vengeance. But that's not all. This story's hero, Theo, is a meek little rabbit who will never be a warrior. As the story progresses, Theo's talent for healing (even as an apprentice) and his forbidden talent of word catching and releasing more than make up for his lack of fighting abilities. The problem? Theo doesn't realize just how important he is, even after he leaves his village (under dire circumstances, to say the least) and starts on an amazing adventure that will test him and force him to evaluate his self-worth and embrace his forbidden talent, despite the fear of death. He also finds himself navigating the murky waters of love. Oh, Theo!
Melanie Ansley builds a world that is extremely exciting and believable, filled with well-developed characters, including an unlikely hero riddled with self doubt, a fierce warrior princess rabbit compelled by vengeance, a sweet monkey filled to the brim with bravado, and a courageous bear tasked with bringing them all safely to Ralgayan to face their destinies.
Word of Caution: This tale is not without its share of violence, evil characters, and death. And the whole idea of pacification and the reasons behind it will leave you gnashing your teeth in fury. Your heart will break at the injustice and brutality, but it will soar as the good guys dig down deep to find the strength and ingenuity to prevail.
What I love most about Theo and the Forbidden Language is the idea of loving yourself for who you are and not who you wish you could be. While Indigo (the warrior princess) teaches Theo some fighting moves, he will never be that type of fighter. But it takes more than physical prowess to be a warrior, and by the end of this first book, Theo finally accepts that his talents are valuable, discovers the full extent of his brother’s betrayal, and realizes his journey has only just begun.
To gain Indigo’s backstory, I recommend reading the prequel novella (The Queen and the Dagger) first. You won’t be disappointed.
***
Some of my favorite quotes:
“Knowledge is spread through many things, but even I, a military beast down to every last scale, know that it’s spread furthest through words. And caught words, those that can be heard not just by this generation, but the next, and the one after that, have a very long life."
“Sometimes you have to turn things inside out to truly understand them.”
“Accepting one’s power to act is never easy.”
"Sometimes we get what we ask for, but not the way we envisioned.”
Melanie Ansley builds a world that is extremely exciting and believable, filled with well-developed characters, including an unlikely hero riddled with self doubt, a fierce warrior princess rabbit compelled by vengeance, a sweet monkey filled to the brim with bravado, and a courageous bear tasked with bringing them all safely to Ralgayan to face their destinies.
Word of Caution: This tale is not without its share of violence, evil characters, and death. And the whole idea of pacification and the reasons behind it will leave you gnashing your teeth in fury. Your heart will break at the injustice and brutality, but it will soar as the good guys dig down deep to find the strength and ingenuity to prevail.
What I love most about Theo and the Forbidden Language is the idea of loving yourself for who you are and not who you wish you could be. While Indigo (the warrior princess) teaches Theo some fighting moves, he will never be that type of fighter. But it takes more than physical prowess to be a warrior, and by the end of this first book, Theo finally accepts that his talents are valuable, discovers the full extent of his brother’s betrayal, and realizes his journey has only just begun.
To gain Indigo’s backstory, I recommend reading the prequel novella (The Queen and the Dagger) first. You won’t be disappointed.
***
Some of my favorite quotes:
“Knowledge is spread through many things, but even I, a military beast down to every last scale, know that it’s spread furthest through words. And caught words, those that can be heard not just by this generation, but the next, and the one after that, have a very long life."
“Sometimes you have to turn things inside out to truly understand them.”
“Accepting one’s power to act is never easy.”
"Sometimes we get what we ask for, but not the way we envisioned.”
September 10, 2024
You've got Hazel and Fiver and Bigwig and Woundwort,
Flopsy and Mopsy and Peter and that sort,
But do you recall
The most famous rabbit of all?
Theo the average rabbit
Had a very twitchy nose
And if you ever saw him,
You'd say his love of language grows.
Most of the other rabbits
Used to laugh and call him names.
They never let fat Theo
Join in any bunny games.
Then the Urzoks went to war.
The Order came to say,
"Theo, with your sword so bright
Won't you help our army fight?"
Most of the beasts just loved him
(But some were prone to disagree).
Theo the average rabbit,
You'll hop down in hist-oh-ree!
Flopsy and Mopsy and Peter and that sort,
But do you recall
The most famous rabbit of all?
Theo the average rabbit
Had a very twitchy nose
And if you ever saw him,
You'd say his love of language grows.
Most of the other rabbits
Used to laugh and call him names.
They never let fat Theo
Join in any bunny games.
Then the Urzoks went to war.
The Order came to say,
"Theo, with your sword so bright
Won't you help our army fight?"
Most of the beasts just loved him
(But some were prone to disagree).
Theo the average rabbit,
You'll hop down in hist-oh-ree!
March 25, 2017
I received this book from the author for an honest review, and I'm really glad she asked me. I absolutely loved this book, it seriously reminded me of Redwall and Mrs. Frisby and the Rats of Nimh. It also had some tones of the Sword of Truth series as well. It focuses on Theo, who at the beginning seems to be a bit of an outcast. It follows him on his adventure from there. I can't wait for the rest of the books in this series to be released. If you're a fan of books like Tailchaser's Song, Watership Down, and the two listed above, I highly recommend it.
September 22, 2023
This book was awesome! Ansley's creative talent is displayed throughout this well written fantasy! In Theo's world, animals such as himself, are intelligent with emotions and logic and the ability to speak. He lives in a village of rabbits with his family, but feels a bit outcast. He doesn't feel like he fits in, and his older bully brother definitely grinds in that feeling. He finds comfort though in the forbidden act of reading (called word catching) where if caught by the wrong people, death is the result.
A mysterious creature visits their small village bringing an opportunity for Theo's forbidden talent to be used and leading to the villagers to cast him out. Unbeknownst to him, he has a role to play in something much larger and more dangerous. As he's awaiting his exile, he is more or less kidnapped by a warrior bear starting a dangerous escape from his village and thrust into the journey of his life where he'll face new dangers, make new friends, and decide for himself how he will make a difference in their world.
Humans do not want the animals to be intelligent and are doing everything in their power to turn all animals into primitive animals - to "pacify" them. Ruled by a Lord, who wants complete control of Mankahar and may be going slightly mad, his armies are put to this task of pacification by any means necessary. While rooting out the animals for pacification, some of the Lord's devout members are seeking their own road to rule Mankahar and even more! This sets in motion a more devious and urgent hunt for Theo as well.
Theo has to learn to break out of his quiet doubting shell and speak up to keep his new friends and find his footing in their battle for Mankahar.
When I was younger, my most favorite book series was Redwall (let me be real, it still is)! This is like Redwall meets Narnia for adults! Full of action and suspense and creatures you don't expect - you are left needing to know what happens next making it hard to put down. I enjoyed reading Theo's story and watching him grow, and I can't wait to read the next book Ansley has out for Theo!
A mysterious creature visits their small village bringing an opportunity for Theo's forbidden talent to be used and leading to the villagers to cast him out. Unbeknownst to him, he has a role to play in something much larger and more dangerous. As he's awaiting his exile, he is more or less kidnapped by a warrior bear starting a dangerous escape from his village and thrust into the journey of his life where he'll face new dangers, make new friends, and decide for himself how he will make a difference in their world.
Humans do not want the animals to be intelligent and are doing everything in their power to turn all animals into primitive animals - to "pacify" them. Ruled by a Lord, who wants complete control of Mankahar and may be going slightly mad, his armies are put to this task of pacification by any means necessary. While rooting out the animals for pacification, some of the Lord's devout members are seeking their own road to rule Mankahar and even more! This sets in motion a more devious and urgent hunt for Theo as well.
Theo has to learn to break out of his quiet doubting shell and speak up to keep his new friends and find his footing in their battle for Mankahar.
When I was younger, my most favorite book series was Redwall (let me be real, it still is)! This is like Redwall meets Narnia for adults! Full of action and suspense and creatures you don't expect - you are left needing to know what happens next making it hard to put down. I enjoyed reading Theo's story and watching him grow, and I can't wait to read the next book Ansley has out for Theo!
March 2, 2016
This is not your typical rabbit story. Melanie Ansley’s YA fantasy, Theo and the Forbidden Language tells the story of a world where civilized animals can talk and farm and do most of the things humans can do. But of the humans in their world have found a way to ‘pacify’ the animals – causing them to lose their abilities to think and to talk. The remaining civilized animals are engaged in a struggle to defend their lands from these evil humans.
Theo is a rabbit of the village of Willago in the Forgotten Lands – an area outside the country being fought over by the evil humans and the intelligent animals. The human leader of the intelligent animals finds out that Theo can read (‘catch words’) and sends a messenger to bring him to their fortress just as his fellow villagers are about to exile him for that very skill. Theo and the friends he acquires on the journey have many adventures and close calls before they reach the fortress of Ralgayan. And once they are there, Theo has to decide how he will best be able to support his friends as they battle the evil humans and their allies.
This is a fascinating read. The warriors of both sides are described in such detail that you can see them and their activities as if they were right there. The villains are as well drawn as the protagonists, maybe better, and there is never a dull moment.
Other reviews have compared this to Watership Down (not much similarity, in my opinion, except for the rabbits), the Redwall series (a better comparison, due to the fighting animals of all types), and the Song of Ice and Fire series (in some ways the closest comparison). This book is harsher and more graphic than the Redwall books, but not quite as violent or complex as the Song of Ice and Fire books. Several reviewers have commented that this is not a book suitable for very young children, and I agree that is probably true. It does not look away when people or animals get hurt.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Theo is a rabbit of the village of Willago in the Forgotten Lands – an area outside the country being fought over by the evil humans and the intelligent animals. The human leader of the intelligent animals finds out that Theo can read (‘catch words’) and sends a messenger to bring him to their fortress just as his fellow villagers are about to exile him for that very skill. Theo and the friends he acquires on the journey have many adventures and close calls before they reach the fortress of Ralgayan. And once they are there, Theo has to decide how he will best be able to support his friends as they battle the evil humans and their allies.
This is a fascinating read. The warriors of both sides are described in such detail that you can see them and their activities as if they were right there. The villains are as well drawn as the protagonists, maybe better, and there is never a dull moment.
Other reviews have compared this to Watership Down (not much similarity, in my opinion, except for the rabbits), the Redwall series (a better comparison, due to the fighting animals of all types), and the Song of Ice and Fire series (in some ways the closest comparison). This book is harsher and more graphic than the Redwall books, but not quite as violent or complex as the Song of Ice and Fire books. Several reviewers have commented that this is not a book suitable for very young children, and I agree that is probably true. It does not look away when people or animals get hurt.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
March 11, 2016
What a delightful tale! Alvareth is a land where females are taught to be warriors, learning skills in sword and axe while the males cook, clean, manage the home and wards. Its princess Indigo, is next in line to the throne and is on the run from Urzoks - the bad guys. She is aided by bodyguard bear Kuno as they circumvent their way beyond home.
Theo of the Forgotten Lands sees his good-looking brother Harlan marry his crush Keeva. He lives a quiet life in Willago with his grandfather Oak and is learning the art of being a healer which requires skills in herbs, potions, poisons and balms. He is thrown into an otherworldly fight when Ohenko the owl from Mount Mahkah finds that he is the one with an ancient talent - talent of a long-dead race of Omodjte - killed by Urzoks. He not only has to fight a war with Commander Turk but save the Princess and live for another day.
Oh and did I mention that most of the protagonists are rabbits? Urzoks are two-legged (they are human beings). There are wolves, bears and more in Ansley’s surprisingly engaging, highly imaginative, sweet book which brings animals to life and paces the multi-character stories in well-sectioned chapters, though it’s not a fable that has a moral to teach.
This should have been a one-off complete story without impending sequels.
Great book cover.
I received a free pdf of the book in exchange for a fair, unbiased and non-reciprocal review.
Theo of the Forgotten Lands sees his good-looking brother Harlan marry his crush Keeva. He lives a quiet life in Willago with his grandfather Oak and is learning the art of being a healer which requires skills in herbs, potions, poisons and balms. He is thrown into an otherworldly fight when Ohenko the owl from Mount Mahkah finds that he is the one with an ancient talent - talent of a long-dead race of Omodjte - killed by Urzoks. He not only has to fight a war with Commander Turk but save the Princess and live for another day.
Oh and did I mention that most of the protagonists are rabbits? Urzoks are two-legged (they are human beings). There are wolves, bears and more in Ansley’s surprisingly engaging, highly imaginative, sweet book which brings animals to life and paces the multi-character stories in well-sectioned chapters, though it’s not a fable that has a moral to teach.
This should have been a one-off complete story without impending sequels.
Great book cover.
I received a free pdf of the book in exchange for a fair, unbiased and non-reciprocal review.
April 24, 2018
Fun read! This book is a good fantasy, involving anthropomorphic animals and the fight to keep their intelligence and their lands safe. The main character, Theo, is a rabbit who has the gift of being able to read, or “catch words”, which is forbidden. Thus, the Forbidden Language of the title. He’s a smart young rabbit, living in the shadow of his larger, older, and stronger brother, in an isolated village.
But war comes to the village, and Theo flees just in time to avoid being captured by the humans. The rest of the village is however, which leads to the saddest part of the book.
There is a lot of growth in Theo throughout the book, as he goes through the usual “fish out of water becomes a hero” storyline. But it’s told very well, and the story flows nicely.
My only problem, and it’s nitpicky, is in using animals as the characters. While it works well for their war against the humans, and their desire to not be pacified, it confuses me a bit. Size. What is the size of some of these things? The bear character seems to be a normal sized bear, as we would know it. But does that then make the rabbits into giant rabbits, or are they normal rabbit size? The same holds true with the badges, moles, wolves, foxes, etc. I wish the author had clarified that a bit more, but as I said, this is a nitpicky complaint and doesn’t detract from the story at all.
If you enjoy well-written fantasy adventure, check out Theo and the Forbidden Language.
But war comes to the village, and Theo flees just in time to avoid being captured by the humans. The rest of the village is however, which leads to the saddest part of the book.
There is a lot of growth in Theo throughout the book, as he goes through the usual “fish out of water becomes a hero” storyline. But it’s told very well, and the story flows nicely.
My only problem, and it’s nitpicky, is in using animals as the characters. While it works well for their war against the humans, and their desire to not be pacified, it confuses me a bit. Size. What is the size of some of these things? The bear character seems to be a normal sized bear, as we would know it. But does that then make the rabbits into giant rabbits, or are they normal rabbit size? The same holds true with the badges, moles, wolves, foxes, etc. I wish the author had clarified that a bit more, but as I said, this is a nitpicky complaint and doesn’t detract from the story at all.
If you enjoy well-written fantasy adventure, check out Theo and the Forbidden Language.
January 23, 2015
TOP PICK!!
Theo and the Forbidden Language by Melanie Ansley is the tale of a rabbit and the beginning of his quest to save his world and all sentient animals, except he doesn’t quite know it yet. Theo is an ordinary rabbit in his community, even a bit lackluster perhaps, except for his special talent of word catching, which is forbidden and lands him in trouble. Retrieved from the verge of expulsion from his community by a bear named Brune, our hero learns he has been selected to become an apprentice to become an Ihaktu warrior and that his world is on the cusp of war. With Brune, Theo embarks on a grand adventure with all of the requisite narrow escapes, battles, camaraderie, and intrigue.
Described by Ansley as a cross between Watership Down and The Lord of the Rings, Theo and the Forbidden Language is an ambitious undertaking. Making rabbits, bears, monkeys, and vultures into believable heroes, and villains, on the scale of Frodo and Gandalf is no small task, and yet Ansley delivers.
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Theo and the Forbidden Language by Melanie Ansley is the tale of a rabbit and the beginning of his quest to save his world and all sentient animals, except he doesn’t quite know it yet. Theo is an ordinary rabbit in his community, even a bit lackluster perhaps, except for his special talent of word catching, which is forbidden and lands him in trouble. Retrieved from the verge of expulsion from his community by a bear named Brune, our hero learns he has been selected to become an apprentice to become an Ihaktu warrior and that his world is on the cusp of war. With Brune, Theo embarks on a grand adventure with all of the requisite narrow escapes, battles, camaraderie, and intrigue.
Described by Ansley as a cross between Watership Down and The Lord of the Rings, Theo and the Forbidden Language is an ambitious undertaking. Making rabbits, bears, monkeys, and vultures into believable heroes, and villains, on the scale of Frodo and Gandalf is no small task, and yet Ansley delivers.
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March 26, 2018
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. I agree with another reviewer that its language and content are more adult than the targeted audience or the talking animals setup would suggest; but the story and the characters drew me in, the build-up to the climax was steady and inexorable, and the time-honoured theme of the wimp making good really worked for me.
Add to that the looming disaster of 'pacification'—the process whereby the evil Urzoks (humans) reduce intelligent talking animals to dumb beasts of the field—and you have a story where the stakes are at their highest, and all hopes rest on Theo and his forbidden skill of capturing meaning from marks on paper.
Great stuff. I look forward to the sequel.
Add to that the looming disaster of 'pacification'—the process whereby the evil Urzoks (humans) reduce intelligent talking animals to dumb beasts of the field—and you have a story where the stakes are at their highest, and all hopes rest on Theo and his forbidden skill of capturing meaning from marks on paper.
Great stuff. I look forward to the sequel.
March 23, 2015
Prepare to be blown away. Not only is this a riveting storyline, the writing is of the highest quality. Truly one of the best books I have read in a very long time and I cannot wait for more. Fabulous!! Full review on Hall Ways http://tinyurl.com/HallWaysTheo
March 30, 2018
An excellent fantasy that keeps you engrossed until the very end. I can't wait to see what the next book brings.
September 30, 2021
Actual rating 4.5 stars, but I feel it is closer to 5 than to 4 so just noting that the five star rating is a deliberate decision rather than the result of simple rounding up.
Quick disclaimer: I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review. I am also the author's cousin, but I'll do my best to keep my review honest as promised!
Theo and the Forbidden Language is a captivating tale about a rabbit who knows how to 'capture words', a skill that is feared and despised by many, and about how he is swept along on a journey to stop humans ('Urzoks') from stripping the animal kingdom of its freedom of thought and speech. Now come the 'likes' and 'less likes' (even dislike is too strong a word here!):
Likes:
-the characters have such unique voices that I was never confused as to who was who. The characterisation was clever as well, with unique stories and anecdotes inserted into each character's dialogue. I think the author played on the different animals and their cultural symbolisms well to emphasise their voices, but not in a way that it became predictable or cliched
-I liked the storyline. On the surface it feels simple, a homebody rabbit being swept up on an adventure to save animals from evil. But there are also dark elements which I think bring a nuance into the story and suggest that not all animals are good, and not all humans are evil. I didn't even feel that Agata (one of the humans) was evil, but instead merely trying to do what she could to survive a toxic patriarchy. I've seen some suggest that the content in this story is almost too mature for younger audiences, but I think the realism and the grittiness highlight the stakes for each character and makes the story come alive
Less likes (warning, small spoilers in this section!):
-I would have liked to know what became of the villagers of Willago.
-I had some trouble distinguishing whether word catching was a skill or a magical ability at the beginning because of the way word catchers were viewed and treated by the animal community. Later on it becomes clear . Thankfully, there are plenty of reasons why this wasn't an option in the first book, but it is a potential plot hole that the author will need to watch out for.
Overall, Theo is a great story with a world that is easy to immerse oneself in and a cast of colourful characters that you want to see more of. There are some darker themes, but overall I do think that this book is appropriate for a young adult audience. I'm looking forward to the reading the next installment of the series and following the protagonists on their journey!
Quick disclaimer: I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review. I am also the author's cousin, but I'll do my best to keep my review honest as promised!
Theo and the Forbidden Language is a captivating tale about a rabbit who knows how to 'capture words', a skill that is feared and despised by many, and about how he is swept along on a journey to stop humans ('Urzoks') from stripping the animal kingdom of its freedom of thought and speech. Now come the 'likes' and 'less likes' (even dislike is too strong a word here!):
Likes:
-the characters have such unique voices that I was never confused as to who was who. The characterisation was clever as well, with unique stories and anecdotes inserted into each character's dialogue. I think the author played on the different animals and their cultural symbolisms well to emphasise their voices, but not in a way that it became predictable or cliched
-I liked the storyline. On the surface it feels simple, a homebody rabbit being swept up on an adventure to save animals from evil. But there are also dark elements which I think bring a nuance into the story and suggest that not all animals are good, and not all humans are evil. I didn't even feel that Agata (one of the humans) was evil, but instead merely trying to do what she could to survive a toxic patriarchy. I've seen some suggest that the content in this story is almost too mature for younger audiences, but I think the realism and the grittiness highlight the stakes for each character and makes the story come alive
Less likes (warning, small spoilers in this section!):
-I would have liked to know what became of the villagers of Willago.
-I had some trouble distinguishing whether word catching was a skill or a magical ability at the beginning because of the way word catchers were viewed and treated by the animal community. Later on it becomes clear . Thankfully, there are plenty of reasons why this wasn't an option in the first book, but it is a potential plot hole that the author will need to watch out for.
Overall, Theo is a great story with a world that is easy to immerse oneself in and a cast of colourful characters that you want to see more of. There are some darker themes, but overall I do think that this book is appropriate for a young adult audience. I'm looking forward to the reading the next installment of the series and following the protagonists on their journey!
March 24, 2018
I’m a little torn on how to review this story. It is well written, with a terrific sense of place, a clear well-worked out plot, and some charming characters.
Two things threw me a little. One is, the choice of animals as main characters. There is a theme in here of genocide, where the evil Urzoks (humans) are exterminating, eating, “pacifying” all other species – but of course the animal species in this story are sentient. They use language, clothes, tools and weapons. The main character is a rabbit. He wields a sword (not very well) reads – in a world where reading is seen as akin to sorcery and the beginning of the evil Urzok supremacy – and is a healer apprentice. Children’s books, of course, traditionally use animals anthropomorphically, but for some reason it didn’t quite work for me in this story. Mostly because, it didn’t read like a children’s book at all, outside of the fact that many of the characters are animals. The language is sophisticated, the pacing during the journey is often leisurely with detailed descriptions of landscape and place, there is a very large cast of characters, but most of all the violence is gruesome, gratuitous and graphic. That is the second thing that threw me: the violence. It reads more like a dark fantasy for adults than a children’s book. For instance, eating at an inn where the sentient piglets (BABIES) are disemboweled alive, begging for mercy, at the patrons’ tables? I really don’t think this is a book suitable for middle grade.
Plus there is the very odd plot development, of the evil old heir-less Urzok emperor hunting for the rabbit princess to be his bride, because only she can give him a son. I’m baffled as to what this child could look like, or be called. A rabban? A humit? Even if you could get past the vision of an eighty year old man humping a young rabbit doe (burn out my eyes…!!), bringing my boring old scientist brain here: cross-specific progeny are invariably sterile (like the mule). So Urzak dotard’s dynasty would be short-lived even if it were biologically possible.
Anyway, so that’s slightly weird.
But putting that to one side, it’s a well-written story, a quest with a lot of journeying, and the hero Theo the rabbit is an adorable main character, quiet, smart, self-effacing and caring. The journey pacing can be a little slow, and for my money could be tightened, but there are action sequences to enliven events along the way, especially at the end. Theo’s special gift – the idea that knowledge, reading and libraries can be viewed as dangerous – is interesting and well-handled, with great potential for the next in series. Even the anti-genocidal message is solid. For me, I think it might have worked better with maybe paranormal species or made-up animals, rather than familiar animals who can talk and handle tools without opposable thumbs. But, that’s just me: there’s nothing wrong with the story itself, it’s a great read, and others might not find the anthropomorphism odd at all. Watership Down was popular enough…
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Two things threw me a little. One is, the choice of animals as main characters. There is a theme in here of genocide, where the evil Urzoks (humans) are exterminating, eating, “pacifying” all other species – but of course the animal species in this story are sentient. They use language, clothes, tools and weapons. The main character is a rabbit. He wields a sword (not very well) reads – in a world where reading is seen as akin to sorcery and the beginning of the evil Urzok supremacy – and is a healer apprentice. Children’s books, of course, traditionally use animals anthropomorphically, but for some reason it didn’t quite work for me in this story. Mostly because, it didn’t read like a children’s book at all, outside of the fact that many of the characters are animals. The language is sophisticated, the pacing during the journey is often leisurely with detailed descriptions of landscape and place, there is a very large cast of characters, but most of all the violence is gruesome, gratuitous and graphic. That is the second thing that threw me: the violence. It reads more like a dark fantasy for adults than a children’s book. For instance, eating at an inn where the sentient piglets (BABIES) are disemboweled alive, begging for mercy, at the patrons’ tables? I really don’t think this is a book suitable for middle grade.
Plus there is the very odd plot development, of the evil old heir-less Urzok emperor hunting for the rabbit princess to be his bride, because only she can give him a son. I’m baffled as to what this child could look like, or be called. A rabban? A humit? Even if you could get past the vision of an eighty year old man humping a young rabbit doe (burn out my eyes…!!), bringing my boring old scientist brain here: cross-specific progeny are invariably sterile (like the mule). So Urzak dotard’s dynasty would be short-lived even if it were biologically possible.
Anyway, so that’s slightly weird.
But putting that to one side, it’s a well-written story, a quest with a lot of journeying, and the hero Theo the rabbit is an adorable main character, quiet, smart, self-effacing and caring. The journey pacing can be a little slow, and for my money could be tightened, but there are action sequences to enliven events along the way, especially at the end. Theo’s special gift – the idea that knowledge, reading and libraries can be viewed as dangerous – is interesting and well-handled, with great potential for the next in series. Even the anti-genocidal message is solid. For me, I think it might have worked better with maybe paranormal species or made-up animals, rather than familiar animals who can talk and handle tools without opposable thumbs. But, that’s just me: there’s nothing wrong with the story itself, it’s a great read, and others might not find the anthropomorphism odd at all. Watership Down was popular enough…
For more of Brin's reviews, go to: http://www.brinmurray.com/
December 22, 2023
This book is being sold as a children's book. The last passage I read before DNFing it was:
His wife, an equally ill-tempered matron with hair and arms that stank of blood and fish, was gutting a still squealing piglet on the counter for a waiting customer. Several other piglets hung writhing by their hind trotters from a hook behind the bar, their high-pitched screams drowned out by the general hubbub of the inn.
There is rape in this book. Graphic murder and torture. Bestiality.
This was basically Game of Thrones set in a world with talking animals.
The plot was interesting enough: In a world where all animals could talk, humans were at war with them. The humans came up with a magic tool to "pacify" animals (remove their ability to talk and think) so they could enslave them for use on farms.
Not that they didn't eat the thinking version of the animals, that was another horrible thing in this supposed children's book. Apparently the animals tasted better when they could still think and talk...
Along with all that other stuff, the author had a massive issue with characterization/worldbuilding. The animals were animal-shaped, rabbits looked like rabbits, not half-human rabbits. Yet they used swords, tools, cups, teapots. How? About 20% into the book, the animals were suddenly wearing clothing for the first time. The author just had zero consistency about how animals work.
And speaking of that... I almost DNFed at 18% in when the human emperor decided he just simply had to have a baby with a rabbit. He was going to kidnap one and rape her until she got pregnant. I don't even want to try to picture how that would even physically work...
I've been pushing myself to finish books instead of DNFing them, but I really should have DNFed this one sooner. I made it a third of the way in before jumping ship.
His wife, an equally ill-tempered matron with hair and arms that stank of blood and fish, was gutting a still squealing piglet on the counter for a waiting customer. Several other piglets hung writhing by their hind trotters from a hook behind the bar, their high-pitched screams drowned out by the general hubbub of the inn.
There is rape in this book. Graphic murder and torture. Bestiality.
This was basically Game of Thrones set in a world with talking animals.
The plot was interesting enough: In a world where all animals could talk, humans were at war with them. The humans came up with a magic tool to "pacify" animals (remove their ability to talk and think) so they could enslave them for use on farms.
Not that they didn't eat the thinking version of the animals, that was another horrible thing in this supposed children's book. Apparently the animals tasted better when they could still think and talk...
Along with all that other stuff, the author had a massive issue with characterization/worldbuilding. The animals were animal-shaped, rabbits looked like rabbits, not half-human rabbits. Yet they used swords, tools, cups, teapots. How? About 20% into the book, the animals were suddenly wearing clothing for the first time. The author just had zero consistency about how animals work.
And speaking of that... I almost DNFed at 18% in when the human emperor decided he just simply had to have a baby with a rabbit. He was going to kidnap one and rape her until she got pregnant. I don't even want to try to picture how that would even physically work...
I've been pushing myself to finish books instead of DNFing them, but I really should have DNFed this one sooner. I made it a third of the way in before jumping ship.
March 31, 2018
DNF @ 18%
Okay, I really wanted to like this, but I just couldn’t. The writing is mostly well done and the premise is interesting. I had a few major issues with the story.
One: The characters sometimes aren’t described well. There are humans and animals in this world, and most of the animals are described well enough to be distinguished from the rest. However, the humans are not really characterized well — there just ... people! Another character is introduced early on who is a hunter, but is described vaguely. Some of their characteristics are human, some are animalistic. If I can’t figure out which species they are right off the bat, that’s a problem. They prowl and stalk (descriptions that could go either way) and their ears are described as wolf-like, but they can also hold things. So human, right? They’re holding things! Problem solved. Except...
Two: The rabbits can hold things like swords and pints of ale. I mean ... what? How? They don’t have thumbs! It’s fantasy you might say; the animals can talk, so what? It matters. It makes character descriptions either confusing, unbelievable, or just ridiculous.
Two series that did talking animals better: “The Land of Elyon” by Patrick Carmen, and “Warriors” by Erin Hunter. And those were meant for kids!
And finally, three: the tone is hard to pin down. You think that the story is for kids due to the talking animals, but it is incredibly grisly and dark.
Would I recommend this? No, but that’s just because it’s not my cup of tea. The writing overall is not terrible — just a little confusing — and the premise is interesting.
I received a free eBook copy in a goodreads giveaway
Okay, I really wanted to like this, but I just couldn’t. The writing is mostly well done and the premise is interesting. I had a few major issues with the story.
One: The characters sometimes aren’t described well. There are humans and animals in this world, and most of the animals are described well enough to be distinguished from the rest. However, the humans are not really characterized well — there just ... people! Another character is introduced early on who is a hunter, but is described vaguely. Some of their characteristics are human, some are animalistic. If I can’t figure out which species they are right off the bat, that’s a problem. They prowl and stalk (descriptions that could go either way) and their ears are described as wolf-like, but they can also hold things. So human, right? They’re holding things! Problem solved. Except...
Two: The rabbits can hold things like swords and pints of ale. I mean ... what? How? They don’t have thumbs! It’s fantasy you might say; the animals can talk, so what? It matters. It makes character descriptions either confusing, unbelievable, or just ridiculous.
Two series that did talking animals better: “The Land of Elyon” by Patrick Carmen, and “Warriors” by Erin Hunter. And those were meant for kids!
And finally, three: the tone is hard to pin down. You think that the story is for kids due to the talking animals, but it is incredibly grisly and dark.
Would I recommend this? No, but that’s just because it’s not my cup of tea. The writing overall is not terrible — just a little confusing — and the premise is interesting.
I received a free eBook copy in a goodreads giveaway
April 7, 2018
When I started to read Theo and the Forbidden Language I was expecting a children’s book. I was pleasantly surprised when I found it was an excellent drama about cultural imperialism, racism, war, genocide and similar topics. What I just said makes it sound way too “serious” because there are also the themes of love, coming of age and learning about the larger world.
This book reminds me of Animal Farm in that animals are the oppressed and humans are the oppressors. The united animals (who talk and wear clothes) are in a struggle against the evil humans, who want to enslave them and eat them.
I highly recommend Theo and the Forbidden Language
An excellent drama
This book reminds me of Animal Farm in that animals are the oppressed and humans are the oppressors. The united animals (who talk and wear clothes) are in a struggle against the evil humans, who want to enslave them and eat them.
I highly recommend Theo and the Forbidden Language
An excellent drama
March 30, 2018
Note: I received a free copy of the Kindle edition of this book through the Goodreads giveaway program.
While the basic premise of the story is one likely already quite familiar to fantasy readers (unlikely hero is called into action), I like that many elements of the book felt new to me. If you enjoy fantasy novels with animal protagonists, I think you will likely enjoy this book. Be forewarned, though, that this is not a children's fantasy novel as it does contain several violent scenes.
While the basic premise of the story is one likely already quite familiar to fantasy readers (unlikely hero is called into action), I like that many elements of the book felt new to me. If you enjoy fantasy novels with animal protagonists, I think you will likely enjoy this book. Be forewarned, though, that this is not a children's fantasy novel as it does contain several violent scenes.
October 11, 2021
I LOVE THIS SERIES!
I've been lucky enough to read this book and the prequel! The story had me hooked from the beginning till the very last word! Theo, Indigo and Brune are so brave and loyal! The books are amazing! Thank you for writing these!
I've been lucky enough to read this book and the prequel! The story had me hooked from the beginning till the very last word! Theo, Indigo and Brune are so brave and loyal! The books are amazing! Thank you for writing these!
November 2, 2021
If you are wanting a combination of Peter rabbit and Alice and wonderland this is the right book for you lots of action. Really good read. All of the animals talk. The author has a great imagination looks like she had a wonderful time writing it can't wait for the next one
August 27, 2019
The middle grades kid in me that inhaled Watership Downs and the Redwall series loved this! If you (or your kiddo) loves anthropomorphized animals with very human problems, this was a fun read!
April 26, 2022
Great story
I felt drawn into the story from the very beginning and characters well developed. So well written and I'm going right to book number two!
I felt drawn into the story from the very beginning and characters well developed. So well written and I'm going right to book number two!
July 6, 2022
A delightful animal fantasy that had me enjoying the story to the last page.
December 31, 2022
Enjoyed it, quick and easy read.
March 8, 2017
I always appreciate this author's ability to articulate her vivid imagination into a well-written tale. The characters, who happen to be animals, are developed very well. This is a very good book for young readers as well as those who just like a good story.
March 21, 2015
I always enjoy reading fantasy stories that involve talking animals, and this book was no exception. I loved the idea of reading being a forbidden language, as it seemed like the animals had been brainwashed to stop them from making themselves smarter. Stories with an animal protagonist are usually intended for young children, but I loved that even though the majority of the characters were animals, the novel was overall quite dark, with themes of death, imprisonment and starvation. I l thought Theo was a brilliant protagonist, as although he was a fat little rabbit who had lived a peaceful life and had no idea how to use a sword, he took everything in his stride and was willing to step outside of his comfort zone to help the other animals. It also showed that being an efficient fighter is not enough to win a battle, and that knowledge is power.
Indigo was one of my favourite characters as she is a strong female warrior, and teaches Theo that just because they're rabbits doesn't mean that they can't be efficient fighters. As rabbits are usually prey, I loved the idea of a rabbit being able to fight creatures twice their size. Indigo is both fierce and patient, and I loved that although they were tired after travelling all day, she still took the time to teach him how to use a sword.
Although I loved Theo, Brune, Indigo and Manneki, I felt that there were too many characters for me to keep up with, and found myself forgetting the species of certain minor characters. As the books target audience ranged from middleschoolers to teenagers, I feel as if this could be a problem for them also, and think that less minor characters would have made the story easier to understand.
I found the pace of the story to be quite slow in places. The majority of the novel is a journey, and I found that at certain points, little was happening to push the main plot forward. However, there were certain sub-plots that I was eager to find out the reason behind them, such as what the tortoise shell that Theo was given was for. I loved that the story built up to a huge battle, and it was easy to get lost in the story once the action was underway. This last section of the novel was action packed, and it was easy to get lost in the story and feel like I was part of the battle. The author portrayed the feelings of the armies perfectly, which is something that is usually only touched upon briefly in battle sequences. The terror of the army knowing they were going to lose was portrayed perfectly, and I loved that even the pacified horses were too scared to go on the attack.
I recommend this book to fans of Watership Down and Lord of the Rings, and anyone who loves to read fantasy stories.
Indigo was one of my favourite characters as she is a strong female warrior, and teaches Theo that just because they're rabbits doesn't mean that they can't be efficient fighters. As rabbits are usually prey, I loved the idea of a rabbit being able to fight creatures twice their size. Indigo is both fierce and patient, and I loved that although they were tired after travelling all day, she still took the time to teach him how to use a sword.
Although I loved Theo, Brune, Indigo and Manneki, I felt that there were too many characters for me to keep up with, and found myself forgetting the species of certain minor characters. As the books target audience ranged from middleschoolers to teenagers, I feel as if this could be a problem for them also, and think that less minor characters would have made the story easier to understand.
I found the pace of the story to be quite slow in places. The majority of the novel is a journey, and I found that at certain points, little was happening to push the main plot forward. However, there were certain sub-plots that I was eager to find out the reason behind them, such as what the tortoise shell that Theo was given was for. I loved that the story built up to a huge battle, and it was easy to get lost in the story once the action was underway. This last section of the novel was action packed, and it was easy to get lost in the story and feel like I was part of the battle. The author portrayed the feelings of the armies perfectly, which is something that is usually only touched upon briefly in battle sequences. The terror of the army knowing they were going to lose was portrayed perfectly, and I loved that even the pacified horses were too scared to go on the attack.
I recommend this book to fans of Watership Down and Lord of the Rings, and anyone who loves to read fantasy stories.
December 27, 2016
In a fantastical land under the divine guidance of Aktu, vast communities of animal realms are under a vast attack and consolidated conquest by armies of two-legged hairless beasts, whom other animals have called “Urzoks,” but who have labeled themselves after the vast land they have overrun, Mankahar. These beasts have used knowledge gained from the forbidden language of Aktu to “pacify” other animal species into soulless entities under their control. However, the Order, a council of animals guided by Lord Noshi, an “urzok” who has decided to stand with the animals than with his own kind, is searching for twelve apprentices, who will lead the defending armies to push back this evil kingdom. Lord Noshi has convinced the council that one of the apprentices needs to be an “omatje,” an animal who has learned the forbidden language against the law, which leads to young Theo, a rabbit in a free community of Willago, just beyond the current borders of the realm of Mankahar. Theo feels he is an insignificant member of his community, nowhere near as known or popular as his hunky brother, Harlan. However, Theo’s uncle taught him the forbidden language in secret with stories on hidden scrolls. Once the Order discovers Theo’s existence and forbidden knowledge, they send a companion bear to bring Theo back to them, but the powerful leaders of the “Urzoks” find out about Theo, and knowing that knowledge is power, send an army to capture Theo during his journey and enslave him under their control. This strongly structured anthropomorphic fantasy builds its epic odyssey on well-developed characters cloaked within their animal skins. From a small cadre of eager heroes to villainous schemers, rabbits, bears, monkeys, snakes, vultures, and other relatable animals provides moments of thrills, romance, and magic. If one can enjoy a blend of “The Lion King,” “Harry Potter,” and “Star Wars” mythology, then this opening saga would probably fit into this reader’s library.
December 10, 2014
The author, Melanie Ansley, gave me a copy of this book for my review.
I adore “Theo and the Forbidden Language.” There are certain stories that children read that changes the way they see the world and Melanie Ansley has written one of those novels. Composed in a classic style Ansley maintains an elegance that may seem sophisticated for the intended audience but I think will encourage the reader to embrace the depth of character and plot.
Theo, a stout little rabbit, is an uncertain hero. He’s clearly willing to take risks as he defies the law of the land to embrace the magic of knowledge through the written word. He is sweet and charming and leaps from the page. Children will identify with Theo’s feelings of inadequacy next to his brother, Harlan. The message is clear that anyone can be a warrior if only the reach deep inside themselves. Children need for someone to see that special quality inside of them and Brune a fierce bear, is that for Theo. Brune saves Theo initially but he’s confident in Theo’s ability to save them all.
The action in “Theo and the Forbidden Language.” is quick and maintains a dangerous tension but it’s the wonderful characters in the beautifully written world that will keep children reading. The fierce Princess Indigo, the steadfast bear, Brune and the cleverly crafted bad guys will leave young readers wanting more time in this world. There is the feeling of action on a grand scale in “Theo and the Forbidden Language.” There are moments that may be a little edgy for younger readers but I found perfectly appropriate in a world where children read the Harry Potter and Hunger Games novels. “Theo and the Forbidden Language” is a different kind of world and so beautifully three-dimensional.
If you have a middle school aged child or if you enjoy cleverly crafted action stories, pick up “Theo and the Forbidden Language.” today.
I adore “Theo and the Forbidden Language.” There are certain stories that children read that changes the way they see the world and Melanie Ansley has written one of those novels. Composed in a classic style Ansley maintains an elegance that may seem sophisticated for the intended audience but I think will encourage the reader to embrace the depth of character and plot.
Theo, a stout little rabbit, is an uncertain hero. He’s clearly willing to take risks as he defies the law of the land to embrace the magic of knowledge through the written word. He is sweet and charming and leaps from the page. Children will identify with Theo’s feelings of inadequacy next to his brother, Harlan. The message is clear that anyone can be a warrior if only the reach deep inside themselves. Children need for someone to see that special quality inside of them and Brune a fierce bear, is that for Theo. Brune saves Theo initially but he’s confident in Theo’s ability to save them all.
The action in “Theo and the Forbidden Language.” is quick and maintains a dangerous tension but it’s the wonderful characters in the beautifully written world that will keep children reading. The fierce Princess Indigo, the steadfast bear, Brune and the cleverly crafted bad guys will leave young readers wanting more time in this world. There is the feeling of action on a grand scale in “Theo and the Forbidden Language.” There are moments that may be a little edgy for younger readers but I found perfectly appropriate in a world where children read the Harry Potter and Hunger Games novels. “Theo and the Forbidden Language” is a different kind of world and so beautifully three-dimensional.
If you have a middle school aged child or if you enjoy cleverly crafted action stories, pick up “Theo and the Forbidden Language.” today.
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