There were so many things this book could have been but never was. So many accidental pursuits of virtue and so many predilections of self-doubt. THE RISE OF AURORA WEST is a fun and entertaining graphic novel, but it's nowhere close to being as fun or as entertaining as it could have been.
Aurora West, the only child of the eponymous city-hero Haggard West, is coming into her own at age fourteen: she's learning to drive, her schedule is full of school work and martial arts instruction, and her father has finally decided to begin her integration into the family business -- "I'm going to train you to fight monsters," Haggard says, but only after grieving the death of his wife and blaming himself for her death for several years.
Paul Pope's Battling Boy was a clever but empty attempt at monster-smashing fun; it gave no real indication as to who/what mattered and why, and ultimately ran out of energy pumping up the action, apparently too busy give any of the characters any real purpose. From Battling Boy we get the character Aurora West, whom, oddly enough, was perhaps one of the best characters from that particular book.
In THE RISE OF AURORA WEST, readers get more Aurora West, which is good. However, where depth of character and a more nuanced spectrum of emotion are welcome additions, other areas of the storytelling completely fall flat. Specifically, the story's multiple subplots get in each other's way: Aurora learning to be a hero from her father; Aurora learning tough love from her tutor, Ms. Grately; Aurora's relationship with an anonymous boy from class; Aurora's detective skills; Haggard's parenting skills; the death of Rosetta West; the origin of monsters; and so on. All interesting. All worthy of ink. But the narration is woefully inconsistent, and this book has only 150 pages.
At best, this graphic novel glimpses part of a much larger world, where humans and monsters are fighting each other for reasons lost to time. Haggard West is blinded by his ambition, and the question remains as to whether his daughter will fall to the same trap as well. Interestingly, THE RISE OF AURORA WEST doesn't capitalize on this angle. Instead, the book continuously introduces conditional side stories, which although related to the greater narrative, haven't much place in a book this short. These side stories may breed their own intrigue of sorts, but their presence is a distraction, splintering the story and never picking up the pieces. This is a graphic novel that jumps around and regularly dismisses occasional and flavorful bits of curiousness without much care.
For example, there's talk in the book about the origin of the monsters. It's never discussed where the monsters come from or how they got into the City of Arcopolis, but there's a flame of intrigue as to how they germinate and why. Even better, one character even presumes they are the manifestation people's fears, nightmares even (and to go one step further, one might suppose they are the fears of Haggard West himself). But as is the case with THE RISE OF AURORA WEST, the book brushes through these little mysteries with feigning interest -- "I guess I never really thought about it," Aurora says, and the subject is dropped.
Ms. Grately, a pivotal figure in the West household, is another example. She's their cook, tutor, medic, mechanic, and instructor. But she's cautious with her affection and the reader is never enlightened as to why this is the case. She has no history and no primary function other than as a super housekeeper. The story clearly implies she has motive but she remains two-dimensional. She simply exists.
Or what about Coil, the monster baddy at the focus of the story? Coil is assumed responsible for certain heinous acts that propel much of the story's clever detective work. But Coil's motives are never revealed. Readers don't have a single clue as to who he is, why he does what he does, or why he plots to do more of what he does. It's presumptuous on the part of the creative team to believe that details such as these can be glossed over (or completely missing) from the final draft and not impact how the book is to be read.
THE RISE OF AURORA WEST doesn't fill one with confidence as to how this franchise is evolving. And as for presentation, the book's undersized canvas squeezes too much art and too many word balloons into too little space. THE RISE OF AURORA WEST is another fun but messy frolic in urban fantasy.