Review Part 1--- 28/11/2014 16:03 UK time.
I've got about half way through this book and I swear, what is this author thinking. Comments like "Monday, you're going on the pill" (Not exact words) from her mother just made me cringe! I get that the author is trying to convey a friend rather than a mother, but that is just too casual, if you wanted to make that obvious, crude and immature language like that just doesn't set the scene correctly. To me it should be a dark sort of atmosphere with this loving relationship, it just doesn't gel. Everyone is so clued up yet clueless...
The heroine, I want to like, at moments the author's character is spot on shes funny kind of quirky. Then it is as if the author was having a bad day while writing that chapter and she starts acting like a toddler...
It is also SO SO SO SO unclear what the heck Aidan, and this dreamy Ben Lankin is. I also take offence to why both guys are so drop dead gorgeous, like really? Your creativeness is lacking here. The actions and personalities are so bipolar of each character of this book I am not certain if I'll be carrying it on...
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Review part 2 -- Same Day, 17:28
Not going to sugar coat it too much, but I really have No idea what the heck this book is. I can't even make a sentence, it is just so bad I actually want to just delete it from the kindle.
Putting the star rating down to 2, though its really a 1.5, it just bounces around from one hot rock to another making very little headway, then BAM books over because the author's realized shes pushing x number of papers. Not certain why this series is going ahead to be quite frank.. It is a little strange.
Can firmly say I will not be rereading, or buying the second part. I only had this one because it is free. Other than that I wouldn't bother.