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Murder at the Kinnen Hotel

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Special Detective Constable Adamat may be the most capable young investigator in all of Adopest. He's sharp, thoughtful, and his particular sorcery gives him a flawless memory. A transfer to the First Precinct seems like the perfect opportunity to showcase his abilities and advance his career.

But things work differently in the First Precinct. The murder of a businessman's mistress quickly pulls Adamat into an unexpected world of conspiracy and politics where he's forced to use all his wits to stay one step ahead of unseen enemies and keep his friends—and himself—from the guillotine.

Occurs twenty-two years before the events in Promise of Blood.

74 pages, Kindle Edition

First published November 24, 2014

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Brian McClellan

39 books8,822 followers
Brian McClellan is an American epic fantasy author from Cleveland, Ohio. He is known for his acclaimed Powder Mage Universe and essays on the life and business of being a writer.

Brian now lives on the side of a mountain in Utah with his wife, Michele, where he writes books and nurses a crippling video game addiction.

Brian's novels include the Powder Mage Trilogy (Promise of Blood, The Crimson Campaign, and The Autumn Republic), Gods of Blood and Powder (Sins of Empire, Wrath of Empire, and Blood of Empire), and Valkyrie Collections (Uncanny Collateral)

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Profile Image for Choko.
1,513 reviews2,682 followers
May 27, 2017
This short story was all about young Detective Adamat solving a murder which could save a friend's of his life. It was a good look at the basis of their friendship and another look into the everyday lives of regular people before the civil revolution.... I enjoyed it:-)
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700 reviews1,191 followers
March 20, 2017
Originally reviewed at Bookwraiths.

I have a confession to make: I wasn’t too excited when I began this novella. Why? The main character. Adamat was an okay guy in Promise of Blood; his plot line a nice addition to the other, more important events swirling around Field Marshal Tamas and Taniel; and, of course, the information the good detective uncovered in his investigation was vitally important. However, for me, Adamat just wasn’t as exciting to follow along behind as the other characters, so as I began Murder at the Kinnen Hotel and discovered it was focusing on an episode from our good detectives early career, I was certain it wasn’t going to be for me. Imagine my surprise when this one pulled me in and held my attention to the end. Yet another amazing Powder Mage novella!

Here we find Special Detective Constable Adamat as a new member of the First Precinct of Adopest, having followed along behind his superior, Captain Hewi, to this new post with the belief that it would help his advancement up the ranks. But things are not rosy, as our young “knack” finds that his shrewd investigation skills and minor magical ability to recall information are not nearly as important as his social pedigree and political connections. The proverbial crap hitting the fan when Adamant and a Lieutenant Dorry (Commissioner Aleksandre’s relative) clash over a murder investigation: Dorry more than happy to pin the crime on a cook when Adamat clearly sees the signs that a powder mage has committed the killing. The backlash from this internal brouhaha landing our young detective in trouble: his career and his very life in jeopardy from parties unknown and unseen!

At this point, I wrongly assumed the ongoing narrative would revolve around Adamat attempting to clear his name. Brian McClellan does something unexpected however, introducing an agent from the Royal Cabal. This steely woman taking on Adamat as her partner, firmly compelling him to focus his skills on unraveling the identity of the powder mage assassin and who employed him. The rousing adventure which follows not only mesmerizingly entertaining but also informative, as it provides amazing details about the world of Adopest including a glimpse inside the Royal Cabal, turning these magicians into an even more ominous group to be dealt with.

What did I enjoy most about Murder at the Hotel Kinnen, though?

First and foremost, I continued to love the thorough but organic worldbuilding Mr. McClellan is displaying with these novellas. Each story a snapshot of the Powder Mage world. Each revealing more details of prominent characters and groups from the trilogy. The bits of insight gained from Murder and its sibling stories deliciously addictive, as they add layer upon layer to this vibrant place, slowly building a living, breathing world.

Especially entertaining was Mr. McClellan’s subtle look at the Royal Cabal. The idea to use one of their agents as Adamat “partner” was brilliant. This method allowed flashes of the Royal Cabal and their world to be seen, but never reveal all of it. Or, to put it another way, these magical individuals are still mysterious figures of great power who stand just outside of the light, but Murder has begun to reveal them more clearly.

As for the character of Detective Adamat, I really have to apologize to him and his creator for doubting his vitality as a lead character. No, he isn’t on par with Field Marshal Tamas, but where before he was merely a lackluster supporting character, he is now a man I understand and admire. This novella going a long way in making Adamat a character I want to read about again and again.

The only criticism I have of the story is the ending. It was a fitting one which tied up all the loose ends, but it felt too neat and too convenient. Not saying that it was unrealistic, because it was not, but it was just not messy enough for my tastes. But that small bit of consternation at the conclusion may be merely my personal tastes rearing their heads rather than an indictment of Mr. McClellan’s closing.

All in all, Murder at the Kinnen Hotel is another amazing Powder Mage novella. Whether you’ve enjoyed the trilogy already or this is your first taste, this short story will be enjoyable, entertaining, and informative, a great introduction to Brian McClellan’s fabulous world of magic, muskets, and mages or a welcome return. So do go pick it up and enjoy a rousing, murder mystery in a world where gunpowder does more than make things go boom!
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442 reviews465 followers
October 29, 2015
I actually helped beta read for this short story, though my notes and commentary I'm sure was less than useless. In my defense, at the stage I was "brought in" (read *volunteered on Twitter*), it was pretty much finalized.

And maybe I'm wrong, but I feel like a genuine fan's reaction to a book, with reveals and introductions of characters you already know and love, would be valuable. To the ego at least if not in the narrative itself.

Murder at the Kinnen Hotel is one of the series of prequel novellas that Brian McClellan has been releasing set in his Powder Mage universe. It's a great mystery with Adamat as the primary character and some others we know and love pop in as well.

I don't want to say too much, it's not long, but it's worth the price of admission. Highly recommended.
Profile Image for Mr. Matt.
288 reviews104 followers
February 19, 2015
There is a sharp snap in a locked hotel room. A man wakes up next to his dead mistress and a gun in his hand. Everyone thinks it is an open and shut case. Everyone except for a young Special Detective Constable Adamat. Despite pressure, Adamat can't let go. The weapon in the suspect's hand hadn't been fired. And the window was cracked just enough to let a bullet slip in. Was a powder mage involved?

With dogged persistence Adamat pursues the case, digging for truth even if it means running afoul of powerful and well connected people. The case ultimately draws in powerful factions - the Royal Cabal, noble houses, and more - as it spirals forward to an unfortunately predictable resolution.

Three stars out of five. A must read for fans of the Powder Mage stories. Much like the other McClellan novelettes this story explores the events prior to the explosion of blood and magic in the excellent Powder Mage trilogy. It might not quite hold your interest if you aren't familiar with the arc of the larger story-line.
Profile Image for Allen Walker.
277 reviews1,665 followers
December 9, 2021
This is more a 1.5 because *sigh* it just isn't good.

I love the Powder Mage world and aesthetic, the France-at-the-time-of-the-Revolution and flintlock tech, but it's just not a good story.

First off, Adamat is indistinguishable from Tamas in 'Servant of the Crown' in this one. Both men anger their superiors through no fault of their own and then have to brave great danger with the help of a powerful sidekick in order to restore their reputations. Literally. They're the same plot. I knew this one was going to be a mystery so I thought it might be a little more engaging.

It is not.

Have you seen a cop show? ANY cop show? You have read this novella. Dialogue is ripped straight out of any cop story. There is no actual mystery to speak of. Adamat gets a piece of information--info he did NOT intuit, I might add, despite in PoB us being told of his brilliance--which leads him to the next piece of info and on and on. There is no mystery for us to solve, no pieces interspersed we can pick up on, just info that could EASILY be connected to the crime by ANYONE, let alone an investigator with Adamat's talents. Even that fails him; Adamat is supposed to have the Knack of remembering everything, yet I counted FOUR separate occasions in this novella where he forgot or should have remembered etc.

The final piece of the puzzle is given by a lieutenant shouting the name of the cook who is about to be guillotined even though he has no reason to do so, has only called her 'the cook' the entire novella, and would not care about her name even if he knew it. He only does this only so Adamat can hear the name and make the connection.

I really don't set out to dislike these; I read them because the setting and the magic are just so freaking cool that I continue to place my faith in the fact that eventually, I will become inured to some of these things and just be able to enjoy the ride. I want to, I so badly want to.
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Profile Image for Stefan.
321 reviews285 followers
November 21, 2017

I don’t like murder mysteries.
I really, really don’t like murder mysteries.
So, what’s wrong with this book?
It’s a bloody damn murder mystery.

Granted, I think I’m one of rare who gives Adamat some slack when it comes to main Powder Mage trilogy. I’m prone to develop a certain affiliation to a character who could do his biddings quietly and show to a certain lesser extent jaw-dropping and breath taking amount of bad-assery.
And fair amount of just that we have in this book. I still love this man.
Sooo…?
It’s booooring! Main plot is simply boring.
It consists of… well… of solving a murder mystery.
We follow Adamat, as a young detective, who’s solving a murder case(s), alongside agent of a Royal Cabal, battling upstream currents of corrupted system, and he’s trying to save his friends life, while rogue powder mage assassin - who could shoot and hit his target from miles away and set gunpowder on fire with his thought - is on the loose.
Well… when I say it like that!
All in all – I didn’t need this book to realize that Adamat was great. I knew that already.
I needed him in more challenging story and plot.
Profile Image for Eon Windrunner.
468 reviews531 followers
August 31, 2017
This story followes Adamat as he tries to solve a murder mystery. Being my least favourite character from the Powder Mage trilogy, a story about him did not generate much excitement on my part, but I was pleasantly surprised and enjoyed it way more than I thought I would. Another solid short story by BM.
Profile Image for Petros Triantafyllou.
Author 1 book380 followers
May 21, 2016
This short story is about that time Adamat saved Ricard Tumblar, 22 years prior the events of Promise of Blood.
If you enjoy reading Adamat and his chapters then you will also enjoy this. If you think Adamat is boring & indifferent as i do, you may as well skip this story.

Ps. I do not rate short stories.
Profile Image for Jody .
216 reviews183 followers
March 14, 2017
Murder at the Kinnen Hotel takes place 22 years before the events of The Powder Mage trilogy. Special Detective Constable Adamat has recently transferred to a new precinct, and one of his first assignments is a murder case that involves his friend Ricard Tumbler.

The investigation gets off to a rocky start, and Adamat's unusual methods lands himself with an unlikely partner. Plus, the more he discovers the more dangerous the situation becomes.

It was interesting getting to read about Adamat in his early years on the police force of Adro. It is mentioned several times in the trilogy, but not at great length. I enjoy a good murder mystery from time to time, and this really hit the spot.

This novella seemed to stand apart from the first two, so this would probably be good as a standalone if you want a quick murder mystery getaway and have read the trilogy. My only grip would be it seemed to end to abruptly. Everything else was right on point with McClellan's other works.

4 stars ****



68 reviews28 followers
May 30, 2017
I had low expectations for this one, but surprisingly the story was very captivating and easy to read
Profile Image for Michael Mayer III.
131 reviews12 followers
July 3, 2023
So far, I've enjoyed this novella the most. It follows a young Adamat working his way up to Detective. Of course, he runs into political red tape as he tries to solve cases and ends up having to investigate on behalf of an old friend. I found the mystery and investigation to be intriguing and had a hard time putting it down. It's truly fun to read a lot of character origin stories from the first trilogy that we spent so much time with. Especially since it's their younger, less refined selves that clash with authority. As seems to be Brian McClellan's MO though, he wraps things up so abruptly it steals some of the satisfying payoff and you are left wondering what happened. Still, recommend this novella the most of the four I've read to this point.

Note: I will be reading all of the Powder Mage short stories and novellas before I begin the follow up trilogy set roughly 12 years after the events of The Autumn Republic. I've found a chronological order that I will be following in case any are interested, although all of these works are set before Promise of Blood in the Timeline.

Note: I will be reading all of the Powder Mage short stories and novellas before I begin the follow up trilogy set roughly 12 years after the events of The Autumn Republic. I've found a chronological order that I will be following in case any are interested, although all of these works are set before Promise of Blood in the Timeline.

Powder Mage Short Stories and Novellas
The Siege of Tilpur - 7/10
Forsworn - 7.5/10
Servant of the Crown - 8/10
Murder at the Kinnen Hotel - 9/10
In the Field Marshal's Shadow - 8.5/10
Ghosts of the Tristan Basin - 9/10
The Mad Lancers - 9/10
Profile Image for Matthew.
381 reviews165 followers
November 26, 2014
Disclaimer - I received a copy of this novella from Brian McClellan in exchange for an open and honest review. I would like to thank Brian for that opportunity.

I am the first to admit that I am a Brian McClellan fan. I was blown away by his debut Promise of Blood, and I adored his follow up the Crimson Campaign. I will also admit that I have only recently started to explore his novellas (becoming a father took a lot of my reading time!). My first experience of the Powder Mage novellas (Forsworn) left me a bit flat. I sadly found I couldn't relate to the characters, and a lot of the excitement and tension that McClellan usually excelled at was absent.

Murder at the Kinnen Hotel is the exact opposite. Focusing on Adamat, this novella is a fascinating insight into his former career as a police investigator in Adra. McClellan has weaved an intriguing tale of murder, politics, and sorcery into a small space. I was hooked from the initial pages, and couldn't put it down until I had read how the story unfolded. The main protagonist, Adamat, has always been a strange character for me. At times I have loved him and his journey amidst the upheavals occurring around him, and at other times I have found his parts in the novels to be lacking.

I am happy to report that his novella has fleshed out his character more, and I can now look forward to rereading those parts in a new light. We are gifted a greater understanding of Adamat and his motivations, and are also shown an insight into his past (and at the same time future) relationship with Ricard and others. Adamat, despite his knack, is not perfect. He can be rash, pigheaded and prone to bouts of anger. He can also be hated amongst his peers, and even resented greatly despite his obvious prowess at police work. This made him seem so much more accessible to me.

I loved the subtle 'crime-noir' feel of this novella, and how Adamat (the 'perfect detective' with his knack) was paired with White (Adran Royal Cabal operative) to hunt down a rogue powder mage amidst a great murder mystery. The action was explosive, and the conspiracy behind the murders taking place top notch. The story was really well paced and structured, and I found the conclusion very satisfying in how it linked up with the timeline of McClellan's Powder Mage universe.

All in all this novella deserves its five star rating. It will please all of those fans of McClellan's previous work, and will draw new fans in due to its accessibility to readers. Highly recommended!

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663 reviews102 followers
January 5, 2018
There were times, he decided as he drained the last of his tea, that discretion wouldn’t get the job done.
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1,654 reviews242 followers
December 11, 2016
Twenty-three-year-old Special Detective Constable Adamat transferred with his captain to the First Precinct. Even though he is well aware of how things work in general (nothing much is expected from the police), he can't toe the line.
An old friend of his is accused of murder of his mistress. All the evidence point to an unknown powder mage. It's not that nobody believes him. It's just that 'investigative police work was not common practice in any force that he’d heard of. It was considered right and proper to take everything at face value.' And the face value in this case is facts be damned, let's execute this man.
It is expected of him to 'bury his powder mage theory and quietly follow orders.' He gets help from the most unexpected place.
A well-plotted short mystery.
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330 reviews54 followers
August 24, 2016
This was a nice trip back into a universe created by Brian McClellan. It takes place 20 years before the events of the trilogy, so we are talking real backstory here.

I don't think you have need to have read anything prior to this. It's a nice short story that gives you a feel for McClellen's style. Which I really enjoy, BTW.

Profile Image for Jarek "the Mistborn" Dąbrowski.
200 reviews66 followers
August 20, 2018
I was pleasantly surprised with this one. The detective was not one of my fav characters in the trilogy but i really loved him in this short story. Great look into how he was in his younger age. Fast and action packed. 5 stars from me:)
Profile Image for Daniel.
812 reviews74 followers
January 6, 2015
Odlična pričica koja opet pokazuje kolko neko društvo ume da bude pokvareno i korumpirano itd, i kolko je teško nekome ko radi posao za prave stvari da dođe do traženih rezultata.

Ako volite detektivske romane slobodno probajte, jedini problem (barem meni) što je jako kratko. Al dobro bolje da žalim što nema više nego da se pitam kolko ima do kraja :)
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51 reviews5 followers
July 26, 2025
Surprisingly good especially considering that the main character was my least favourite in The Powder Mage trilogy. Murder at the Kinnen Hotel proves how much tighter and more compelling a story can be in novella form. A brisk, atmospheric read for fans of flintlock fantasy with a touch of mystery.
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192 reviews102 followers
October 11, 2016
[3.5 stars]
I really like Adamat, just not enough to be excited about his novella. However, I was pleasantly surprised by this one, it was very reminiscent of Agatha Christie's books and Adamat was as intelligent as Hercule Poirot which made me love his character a tiny bit more. Again Brian McClellan does a wonderful job in expanding his world and making it more vivid.
Profile Image for Aram Brazilian.
144 reviews6 followers
October 26, 2021
I love these short stories... in fact if all McClellan did was pump these out I would be fine...

This was a top-of-the-line murder mystery - you'd think this was McClellan's specialty.

Detective/Inspector Adamat is one of the main characters in Powder Mage, and his friendship w/ union boss Ricard Tumblar goes way back - this story explains why Ricard is in Adamat's debt....

This is a fast page turner - I did not want to put it down. I would say this is the case with all of the short stories - big bang for your buck.
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237 reviews
January 21, 2015
Actual Rating: 3.5 stars
Not my favorite Powder Mage novella, but it is still a fine addition to the Powder Mage universe. It was nice to become better acquainted with Adamat; to see how far he's willing to go in order to make sure justice is given to those who deserve it. Now that I've finished this, I must try my best to wait patiently for his next book. I can't wait to see what Brian McClellan has cooked up!
Profile Image for Nimrod Daniel.
184 reviews308 followers
December 27, 2016
Murder at the Kinnen Hotel is an interesting fast paced detective story set in the the world of The Powder Mage series. Special detective constable Adamant is the main character, he's a smart guy with phenomenal memory (actually he remembers everything) who's willing to risk a lot just for the sake of justice, even if he needs to go up against great powers, which made me like this character.

A very good detective short story by McClellan, highly recommended!
4.25-4.5/5
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2,091 reviews37 followers
March 26, 2018
Another character driven tale that really builds...well character.

These little novella has been great because they offer so much more to the depth of character that I found sometimes was lacking in the main series. This one focuses on Adamat and it's pretty great, we never get to see him be an inspector and this one is just that, add to that the political machinations and it's a fun interesting tale.

Onward to the next book!
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253 reviews89 followers
December 7, 2019
Good fun mystery and a good exploration of two characters that show up in the trilogy. Explains why they have such a connection.
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112 reviews38 followers
November 20, 2019
A short story with Adamat the best detective I ever know
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558 reviews22 followers
October 24, 2021
5 / 5 ✪

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Special Detective Adamat may be best detective in all of Adopest. His Knack grants him a photographic memory, one that he utilizes to the extreme, always focused on the bigger picture. The foremost detective of the Twelfth, he’s recently been transferred over to the First Division on the request of Hewi, his previous Captain, when she herself was promoted.

But things work differently in the First, and Adamat has always had issues repressing his gift. Why bother, when you’ve the most impressive crime-solving mind alive? As his world becomes obfuscated by politics rather than facts, Adamat is assigned to a murder at the Kinnen Hotel. It seems an up-and-coming businessman has derailed his promising career by murdering his mistress. But as Adamat digs into the case he uncovers a web of conspiracy, extortion and deceit. It may well be the case that makes his career—if it doesn’t kill him first.

A pleasant, if somewhat bloody introduction to the Powder Mage Universe, the novella provides a glimpse into Brian McClellan’s fantasy world—one that has spawned six full-length novels with over twice as many shorter works to go along with them. After all, what’s better than a good old fashioned murder mystery, albeit one with a few variables and eccentricities thrown in?

My second time through, and this novella delivers yet again. It does exactly what it’s intended to do—entertain, stoke interest in the Powder Mage series, and leave the reader thirsty for more. Although it’s fairly short (only about 75 pages), Murder at the Kinnen tells a complete, contained, finished story that is well thought out and engrossing.

While I’m not a huge fan of paying full-price for any book (while understanding that it’s important to support authors by actually, like, PAYING for their work), Murder at the Kinnen Hotel is worth it in my book. It’s around $3 US if you buy it straight up, but is also one of those you can pick up on sale for a buck or two. Even though it’s only 75 pages, the story’s good, interesting, unique, and it serves as a good intro to the universe—or, instead, some backstory into one its premier characters. Alternatively, you could spring for the novella collection, which again McClellan himself often puts up for sale, but retails at ~$10. I can guarantee you that this will not be the last you hear of this collection from me.
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