Just listing out the notes I took and adding to them. I'm too lazy to write out A whole review.
‼️ Spoilers probably
This author literally forgot that she added dates to the beginning of her chapters. The characters have been saying they've spent weeks together and I thought it was a typo or something until the FMC said "it's been eight weeks," about a break-in that happened 11 days earlier according to the very clear dates at the start of every chapter. And that break-in was 4 whole days after any of them even met her in person when she went for the job interview. So they've known each other for 15 days total at this point, but are saying and acting like it's been weeks. You could say that the weeks happened off page and ignore the dates at the start of each chapter if it weren't for the fact that most of these things happened on consecutive days, so we're literally following along with the days in real time with the story. And now, at like 15 days of knowing each other they're all deeply in love already, the FMC is already about to make declarations about how well she knows them, and they keep saying they've had weeks together. Bro which timeline are we actually in???
Oh wow, at the end of the story it's been like 2 months, but these guys already know her friends (who live in another state) and their packs well enough to talk as if they've met multiple times and connected deeply and joke around as if they're all close...
This is one of those "and everyone clapped" books. She does things a few times to the villain in public and all the bystanders laugh and cheer her on like this is some fantasy reality where she's the coolest person in the room. *eye roll*
The OW are present to create drama then they both conveniently fade into the background and are never heard from again and apparently don't want the alphas anymore even though one was literally stalking one of the alphas for years. *eye roll*
The villain kidnapped her because of course...then he dropped a pin for the alphas to come find her lmao. The villain was taken out so easily because he apparently forgot there were four members in her pack instead of three when they've been living in this small town together for years. *eye roll*
Lots of lines delivered like they're supposed to be funny but the humor is just not there.
Everything is surface level. They have this deep connection, or so they TELL us, but but we don't see them connecting at all in the literal days they've known each other.
These chapters switch too often. We barely get to see one character's POV for a quick conversation then we switch to another character's POV. Or we start a new chapter in the same character's POV, seconds after the last one ended, but the only thing that's changed is the time stamp under the date in the chapter header. WHYYYYY? Why is this necessary?
Also, we keep switching POVs to see the FMC's interactions with other pack members from a different pack member's eyes, making this read as third person POV while being written in first person POV and I cannot explain the rage that creates inside me. Why go from the pack member or FMC currently having the interaction to having someone she's not interacting with describe it to up us???
This FMC is supposedly traumatized, and so are the pack members, but none of that is addressed beyond a few of them telling their stories. None of them work through anything, the FMC has one instance of not trusting the MMCs in the middle of the book and that's it. The blurb makes it seem like they have a lot to work through, the characters say they do too, but they're all trusting and happily together from the beginning, despite the one time the story tried to make it interesting.