“I want people to be nice to you.” - Chapter 3
This is the second 831 Stories novella that I have gotten to read, and I had a good time with this one! There is always something so deeply melancholic in reading about the passage of time, characters reconciling with who they once were and who they are now, and having to navigate that individually, but also with one another. Found Time sets out to do this with Reid and Lili, and it accomplishes it well enough.
There’s a lot to love about this novella. It works for the length, albeit of course some parts could have been spread out in a novel length instead. I liked getting the few chapters in the past, then moving forward to the present, though I will say Lili’s narration did not feel as though I was reading from a woman of her age’s point of view. The chapters when she was younger felt it, but I had a hard time fully connecting with the narration. Still, I found Lili to be interesting, and the novella gives you just enough information about her to understand the way she is and why she would act the way she acts. You could say a choice of hers is a little immature for her age, and I am still grappling with how I felt about it, but it worked fine in the end.
I liked Reid, too. The way he felt so visceral in the text really reflects how visceral Lili feels for him, which is a great thing. I do think their connection felt a lot more lust-focused than falling in love. I don’t think it’s impossible to fall in love in the time they originally spent together, or at least be on the road to it, especially at the ages they were, but there was little in the text to make me believe this was true, and not just lust-based. This probably could have been adjusted better in a full-length novel. The only issue I had with Reid’s character was the background we get on his wife, and I don’t think his actions after it is mentioned are fully understood. Again, this was hindered by the length.
Their relationship to their daughters was definitely a highlight of the present-day chapters, and I loved the overall message of the novella.
Thank you to Netgalley & 831 Stories for the ARC!!! Book publishes March 31, 2026!