Fair warning: I get a bit ranty and a bit longwinded in this review. I also get spoilery. But this book deserves it without the protection of any actual spoiler tabs.
I knew going into this that Edith Layton was an old school author whose books were slowly being reissued on Kindle. If I hadn’t known that before I started reading, however, I would have guessed as much. We have here the two hallmarks of an old school author:
Good writing.
Tehhhrible everything else.
Let’s start with (1).
Deep, layered and sometimes complex descriptions of characters and moments between them are present throughout this book. Layton isn’t detailing the intracies of attending the opera in the Regency. It’s heavily focused on character and their interactions but it’s very well done and achieves the purpose of painting a complete picture of the (awful, terrible) main players in this novel.
”He stood in the outer hallway, tall and immaculate in his evening wear, his broad shoulders encased in a close-fitting jacket, his slender waist tapering down to muscular legs, his black hair swept back and cut expertly to accentuate the fine high planes of his face, every visible carefully designed part of him signaling the epitome of the man of wealth and fashion. He stood at the top of his world, by birth, by sex, by fortune and education. And his world was the only world that he cared about.” (loc 117)
I mean, as descriptions of (in this case the secondary) hero goes, that’s pretty dang on the money and finishes with a summation of his character that absolutely holds true. He cares only about his world and about himself.
These potted characterizations carry on throughout and very well. Miss Beskins, our heroine Regina’s governess, who never appears on page is described thus, ”For the family, unknowingly, had hired a serpent to lie in its bosom. The plain faced, sensible looking woman had been a bluestocking and a woman of radical opinion”. Serpent to lie in the bosom - so excellent and it gives you an immediate impression of the woman who has educated our heroine Regina which you would hope (vainly, as it turns out) informs her character in due course. Where is Miss Beskins book, I ask? Is she busy educating some starchy widower with a brood of young charges on her radical approach to enlightened children’s education? That’s the book I want.
Some of the moments between our H/h are a little charming and revealing, ”He regaled her with stories about the society he traveled in, till tears stood in her eyes and she gasped with laughter. He entertained her with anecdotes, he charmed her with rumors, he quoted poetry and when she capped his verse with the next line, he capped her quotation once again. He showed her a glittering treasure-house of a mind, by he showed her not one glimpse of the shadows within.” (loc 1728)
Now for (2).
Everyone and everything in this book is awful.
How the women are treated is awful. The men are awful. The woman are awful. Everyone is stupid. Everyone is a stereotype.
I have spent the better part of the day since I finished this trying to work out why on earth people read books like this on a regular basis for pleasure. To an extent, I think people didn’t know better. There was no Courtney Milan in 1983. Hell, there was no Lord of Scoundrels in 1983. There is still ten years until Lord of Scoundrels: we are through the looking glass here, people. Perhaps everyone and everything needed to be awful to make the HEA seem more magical or more earned. Maybe men in the 80s were even bigger assholes than men in 2019 and so authors felt the need to show, through romance that even those total 80s assholes could be tamed by the love of a good, perfect woman? I really have no idea, but boy am I glad they don’t write ‘em like this anymore.
Let’s start with our ‘hero’. Duke, notorious rake and all round horrendous human being, Jason (bloody awful name which I shall cease using from here on out).
Let’s examine what The Duke does to out heroine Regina:
a.) Approaches her at an opera at which she clearly should not be in attendance (it’s an opera for London’s more ‘experienced’ women) and says something horribly inappropriate to her (off screen but presumably about sex).
b.) Had her followed after the opera.
Stations his man outside her house as if to abduct her so she cannot go out.
c.) After her uncle dies unexpectedly and her sole protector is gone and she is left with distant relations, he visits her at home. She tells him repeatedly to leave. He doesn’t leave. She tells him she is probably to be married to her cousin. He doesn’t care and he still doesn’t leave.
d.) When he hears her aunt coming, he draws her into a kiss which is then witnessed. Bad enough?! Nope! Then he directly states she is already pregnant with his baby and that she had called him to the house but that he declines to take her back but ”Your cousin looks like a good enough chap. Take care not to damage your future any further my girl. For I will not acknowledge the child.”
e.) Her family throw her out. The only family she has left (although they, like everyone in this novel, are literal shit). He abducts her outside the house.
f.) Regina baffles him by apparently saying clever things about human nature and he agrees to let her go and to try and ‘make it on her own’ betting that she won’t make it . He does this thinking that she is penniless and hopeless and that wits alone rarely sustain a woman in this time period. So he leaves her. On the street. With nothing.
g.) When she does manage to get help (from the secondary hero - long story, the plot’s not bad). He follows her and constinues to insinuate himself in her life despite the fact that she’s winning the wager at that point.
h.) When she is forced to flee Sinjin’s house he follows her and watches her humiliating attempts to pay her way to her governesses new school. One night he actually lets her sleep outside, alone in the cold. He does all this knowing that he has already paid the governess to leave the county.
She is so wrought out by these experiences that she basically conceded the wager - she will become his mistress. But then we get out surprise ‘happy’ ever after. Because don’t worry Regina, the Duke has come to love you and will marry you. So, I guess ~ yay?
I mean, the man is a ~villain. This is ~abusive. And if the Duke is to be redeemed it’s going to take some serious writing to achieve it. Don’t get me wrong, we are supposed to perceive that the Duke is changing. He goes back to his Estates for the first time in years and spends time with his daughter. He hires his old governess. He spends time in some puzzled thought. His life is ~different but in a somewhat nondescript woolly way that the reader has to puzzle out.
When he hears Regina has picked Sinjin over him he’s obviously distraught, “No one in the room, no, no one I the world, could have guessed at the cold fear that gripped him, or the sick dread anticipation of failure, and some other emotion that he dared not name, which caused him to sit awake the unblinking hours in the Squire’s finest guest room, while the whole house, save for the steadily working serenata, slept peacefully through the last hours of the remaining night.”
These are some snippets of redemption but that’s all they are, and perhaps worst of all they happen entirely absent Regina. His redemption should come from the heroine so she can see and (even better) definitively shape the redemption. There’s none of that here. She’s just a paragon of perfect virtue around which his slight character changes take place.
I was unconvinced. He’s a villain. A cheating, awful villain. And if Regina has sense she would run very, very far away from him.
Then there’s Sinjin, the plot foil. The rival for dear Regina’s affection. He’s an Earl. He’s awful. He treats Regina abominably. Burns her letters to her Governess. Only takes her in with a view to making her his mistress. He’s horrible to her Uncle whose only sin is being in trade and helping him to remake his fortune (through, amongst other pursuits, the slave trade - which, I suppose has the merit of being at least realistic for the time period if pretty unedifying for a future romance hero). Every woman (except Regina, dear special flower Regina) is reduced to her looks:
For now he thought, she was well enough, but a slight plumpness clung to her outline, and he was almost sure that in a few years she would balloon as alarmingly as her so charming mother had.”
”[He] now watched only with amusement as he saw how her father elongated breasts moved independently of each other as she paced towards him. Too much, he thought to himself eyeing her rounded abdomen and the deeply defined bulge of her pubis… All the mystery of her, he found, was gone. He could only feel a certain small sorrow for the confused looking woman who surely was running to a premature stoutness, and who fading dark good looks would soon take her to other sorts of establishments, far from this fashionable street.” (Loc 2820) I don’t even understand the point of this paragraph. It makes Sinjin seem awful. It’s grotesquely worded (by which I mean it’s well written, but grim to read). Plus, it just seems to ignore the fact that there is a person behind all this - the woman Sinjin had made his mistress only weeks before. What does this description achieve?!
Even on his friend Amelia who is the woman he has always felt close to and able to talk to he says, “it was unfortunate, he mused, as he invariably did when seeing her, that her fine brown eyes should be the seat of the trouble. For Lady Amelia had, since early childhood, been afflicted with a peculiar physical characteristic where one eye was perfect, brown and deep and intelligent, while the other was won’t to wander slightly out to the side… For the question of dalliance had never arisen in his mind. He knew that he could never be attracted any female with any physical defect, and had, over the years, developed an easy, sexless amiability with her.” (Loc 519)
Honestly. I hate this guy.
In modern romance Sinjin and Amelia would be the H/h of the next book. He’d see the error of his ways when Amelia got herself engaged to a handsome young soldier who saw all her brilliance. Sinjin would be reformed and we’d all forget that he used to be The Literal Worst. But from what I gather looking through the rest of the series on GR we don’t get any such book. Poor Amelia is just left on the heroine shelf, probably still pining after Sinjin.
Sinjin also treats Regina dreadfully. He burns her letters to her former Governess. He keeps her around only hoping to make her his mistress. He makes her lie to his close acquaintances. Even when he realises he loves her he revelation comes about because he decides he can’t treat her like all those other awful mistresses and sluts because she’s ~special. So we have a realization of love that is (a) completely absent Regina and (b) manages to shit on other women.
The characterisation of our male leads is typical of the entirety of this book. Men are rich rakes. Or money grabbing tradesmen. These are the two types of men.
Women are either sluts or working class (i.e. slovenly, rude, sluttish) or our heroine, Regina.
Regina is billed as the only good woman amongst the bunch. She’s terribly naive and stupid and speaks like a paragon of perfection and virtue and she has no discernible character to speak of and I wanted to slap her but we are definitely meant to think she’s the perfect woman. I mean, by the end of the book she has two rakes willing to renounce their rakedom forever and marry her and she’s only a tradesman’s daughter, so she must be perfect, right?
We are told Regina is clever and wonderful and ~unique amongst woman kind~. We’re told (as set out above) that she is raised by a bluestocking. But she never shows it. She’s never actually clever or unique. She trusts Sinjin and keeps being drawn back to the Duke despite all the awful things he has done ^^^^ when all the signs ^^^^ are that she should run far away from both.
Instead, she is ping ponged between the Duke and Sinjin like a mere plot device. She forgives them their terrible sins and thinks they might change and learns nothing. If she had any good sense at the end of the book she’d have told the Duke to shove his offer of marriage taken his money and tried to find a normal man who didn’t act like an entitled prick. Alas, poor Regina doesn’t have any good sense.
So, yeh. This book. Not a winner for me. 1 star is all I can reasonably give here, but I do want to be clear - I finished this book, although I was more hate reading by the end. And I wasn’t bored. So perhaps by rights this should get two stars. I just can’t bring myself to do it though.
This was a trashfire of characters and events and, unless you’re studying the development of the romance genre I cannot recommend it.