I loved the action in this book. Unfortunately, it was hard to follow, detailless, and at times, void of emotion. A part of the problem and a personal pet peeve to me is that there was a lot of head hopping. Another problem is the shortness of chapters. With so many reading breaks, I found it hard to continue reading.
One thing that did make it easy to continue reading were the characters. The Danforths and Radkos were naive and I found that refreshing. Unfortunately, I found them to also have unrealistic emotions at one point and then be emotionless zombies the next. Also, other minor characters would come and go so quickly, I really wondered what was the point of them. Plus, with the head hopping, we would be in these minor characters point of view. In one case, we were in their view for a single paragraph. Again, what was the point?
I'm not completely sold on the plot. Really, this is 4 short stories based on the same people. I doubt you would ever see this complete plot in real life. I can believe the 4 parts as separate plots happening to separate families, just not all together.
Last thing I want to say is that the grammar and spelling were pretty good. There were a few minor mistakes, but I've seen worse in professionally edited novels. I can see why people rated this book so high with it's action. I guess we live in an ADD world that finds head hopping acceptable. I really want to give this book a 1 star, but I think that is unfair to the action.