Mixed feelings
Forbidden Heart, the ninth and final book in Ivy Layne’s The Hearts of Swayers Bend series, finally reveals who killed Prentice Sawyer. Having read all the previous books, I was eager for the climax this series deserved. While many questions were answered and the epilogue carried a bittersweet note, this installment was unfortunately not the strongest in the series.
Ford Sawyer spent a year in jail for a murder he didn’t commit. Cleared of the crime a couple of books ago, he rejoins his siblings and their partners in the family mansion. Yet Ford remains withdrawn, weighed down by guilt over his past actions and uncertain of how his family views him. Paige McKenna, nanny to Griffen and Hope’s daughter Stella, is wary of Ford, believing he killed his father. Sharing guest quarters, they frequently cross paths when the house’s faulty plumbing and electricity act up. One such encounter leads to a kiss which sparks attraction. Ford, however, is still haunted by the shadow of his father’s murder and makes it his mission to uncover the truth. Meanwhile, Paige has her own quest: finding the father who abandoned her before she was born.
The series has always been hit-or-miss for me, with Wild Heart (Hawk and Quinn’s story) standing out as my favorite. Sadly, Forbidden Heart didn’t rise to the occasion as the finale.
Throughout the series, I was worried that I would not like Ford’s character if or when he gets his own book. His past actions toward Griffen and especially Finn were appalling, and his aloofness, both in jail and afterward, made it difficult to connect with him. Well, his book is finally here, and it saddens me to say it, but I didn’t like him. He came across as self-pitying and passive, constantly relying on Griffen or Hawk to protect him. He flinched, stammered, and squirmed with fear in tough situations. All of this made it look like he lacked confidence and self-esteem. His indecision about running Sawyer Enterprises—wanting it, then not, then wavering—only reinforced the impression of weakness. Unfortunately, he simply didn’t embody the alpha-type MMCs I enjoy, and that’s a me thing, I know. Without going into too much detail, let’s just say I really didn’t care for him.
Paige started out promising. Her motivation to track down her father gave her depth, and her initial avoidance of Ford made sense. But one kiss transformed her into the kind of lust-driven FMC I dislike. She repeatedly threw herself at Ford, excusing her behavior with lines like “before I could second-guess myself/talk myself out of it.” It felt disingenuous, as though she was pretending it wasn’t in her nature to chase a man, when the fact that she did it so easily said differently. I’m sorry, and again, this is a me problem, but I cannot stand FMCs written as ‘easy,’ throwing themselves at the hero without challenge. Give the guy some challenge, make him do the chasing sometimes, for heaven’s sake. Paige was also TSTL, refusing to leave Ford’s side as if she would be able to do something once the bullets started flying.
Their relationship didn’t work for me at all. From the sounds of it, they’d been living in the same house for months, mostly ignoring each other, barely speaking beyond a polite greeting. Then suddenly, one kiss, and they were all in. Within two interactions, Paige was already claiming Ford as “mine” and vowing to fight for him. After two nights of waking up together, she missed sleeping next to him when they had to keep their distance to minimize the risk to her. By the thirty-percent mark, they were declaring their love. It just wasn’t believable. The subplot about Vanessa and why Ford married her was barely touched. We knew he envied Griffen, took his inheritance and fiancée, but was it love or simply spite? For me, that lack of exploration left a hole in the story. The romance itself fell flat, with no real chemistry between Ford and Paige.
The suspense side wasn’t much better. Things happened, but I felt nothing. No pulse racing, no heart hammering. Nada. Early in the book, Ford was attacked outside Avery’s brewery, and while he fought the attacker off, Finn hid behind a car. Now, Finn is a grown man, so why didn’t he help instead of cowering?
The mansion’s plumbing and electrical issues were never explained. Ford’s door mysteriously opened—handle turning and all—with no one behind it. Later, this was vaguely alluded to as paranormal once the truth came out. Sorry, but no. Another incident had Ford and Paige nearly freezing to death when someone locked them in her room. And guess what? On death’s door, their minds wandered to sex. The next morning, the door miraculously opened, and that was that. Again, no explanation, who, or why. If it was paranormal as alluded to, what was the motivation? Ford’s decision to isolate himself for fear of endangering others also felt absurd. They were in an access-controlled mansion, hardly a place where random intruders could just waltz in…
I think my issue with the suspense element came down to how it was described while it was happening, like someone trying to break into your house is an everyday occurrence. There was no angst; not in the romance, and certainly not in the suspense. Cole Haywood’s issue with Ford also didn’t make sense. It wasn’t Ford who had the affair with his wife, nor did Ford kill her. Then, in the final scene, Cole and Ford’s exchange seemed illogical. There was also no explanation for how Cole got on the property. If they let him in, then surely, given how smart he was, he would have smelled the trap. Also, the final reveal of Prentice’s killer wasn’t surprising, nor was the discovery in the garage. Still, given Prentice’s cruelty, I agreed with how the family handled the truth once it came out.
For the above reasons, this final book in the series left me with mixed feelings. On the positive side, the murderer was unmasked, and the epilogue detailing Prentice’s Will and the family’s future was satisfying. But the romance lacked believability, the suspense was weak, and too many plot points didn’t add up. The book wasn’t terrible, but as the conclusion to a nine-book series, it could have been stronger. My rating for this one is therefore 2.5 rounded off to 3.