Nomura

by haironmylip

When their eyes meet, there is a brief moment of oppressive silence, as if they are under pressure. Hermione isn't sure if he's looking directly into her eyes since her vision tragically fails her at the most critical moment. She lowers her gaze to his shoulder, to the ripped fabric of his shirt, splattered with blood and something else...

Something inside Hermione starts to crumble, whether it's a corset made of ribs or a dried-up heart drained of blood, she's not sure.

She pays little attention to the blood on his shoulder, casting a foggy glance at the elongated head of the tattooed dragon.

558 pages, ebook

Published October 24, 2022

Reviews

[Dulce María · Rating 3 out of 5]

Empezó muy bien pero no soporte el arco final no hubo arrastre ni ruegos de perdón Draco le mintió y después fingió su muerte mi niña merecía mucho más.

[Abbie Williams · Rating 3 out of 5]

I want to start this review off same as I do always when reviewing Fan Fiction on Goodreads by saying that I understand the controversy around reviewing fanfic on good reads but it’s the only place I log my reading, so this is for personal looking back only.

Because of that I wanted to add a disclaimer:
It is illegal to purchase fan fiction and is a breach of copyright laws to make money from other peoples characters. If you want a physical copy of this book please download and bind yourself.


This fic is well written in my opinion. The idea and the creativity behind it is great.

I’ve seen a few reviews talking about how the LGBT aspects don’t make sense but I disagree, most fics I read have at least one of them gay and I also think it’s really prevalent to validate the feelings of people who don’t class themselves as gay/lesbian but there is one person who individually could change that - they don’t find same sex attractive as such but one individual who happens to be the same sex. This is a valid feeling

And that initial scene between Leon and Blaise (that we get in 2 perspectives had me giddy at the seams).

I do think we could have delved a little deeper into dramione, the build up and the tension was great and then the world around them came crashing down and felt like they got put to the side.

Overall, great fic, it should be more hyped.

[Karina Gabriela · Rating 2 out of 5]

The good part is that I feel it's well written. The bad part is long for the historia , there are si many unresolved issues and situations without context that I can't understand and feel aren't justified. I like it when there are LGBT scenes in books, but in this case, they appear without any logic and without matching what we've been told about the characters so far, and with any weird, shady details so cringe... They seemed like forced chapters that add nothing to the story. On the other hand, at no point is it clear how the characters even like each other. She's ovulating because she likes them all! In his case, the character lacked depth; the emotional aspect simply didn't convince me. If they had spent less time on pointless smut scenes and more on developing their chemistry, it would have been 5 stars. The first few chapters are good; you have to skip the next six, and the last few are very good. I would have avoided the prologue since it was about a topic that no one is interested in knowing...

[Abby Warner · Rating 3 out of 5]

really liked the creativity that went into this story

[jules • romantasyworld · Rating 4 out of 5]

nothing little dramione fanfic can’t fix😽

[Annie · Rating 3 out of 5]

I really loved the idea, the concept of the story but my gosh - it didn't have to be this long! At some point I started wishing it would end... Still liked it though!

[Massie Blakeley Scheidter · Rating 3 out of 5]

The beginning was good but the last 20% or so it started kind of losing me.