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Popcorn Love
A prominent figure amongst New York City’s fashion elite, Elena Vega is a successful businesswoman and single mother to an adorable three-year-old son, Lucas. Her love life, however, is lacking, as those closest to her keep pointing out.
At the persistent urging of her closest friend, Elena reluctantly agrees to a string of blind dates if she can find a suitable babysitter for Lucas.
Enter Allison Sawyer, a free-spirited senior at New York University.
Elena is intrigued by Allison’s ability to push her out of her element, and the young woman’s instant and easy connection with a normally shy Lucas quickly earns Allison the job.
After each blind date, Elena returns home to complain to Allison about her lacking suitors. As they bond, Elena begins to realize that the person possessing all the qualities she most desires might just be the woman who has been in front of her the entire time.
The vast difference between the two women’s social statuses, however, may be an obstacle not easily overcome.
Length: approx. 160,000 words
Themes: humor · Lesbian · romantic comedy
At the persistent urging of her closest friend, Elena reluctantly agrees to a string of blind dates if she can find a suitable babysitter for Lucas.
Enter Allison Sawyer, a free-spirited senior at New York University.
Elena is intrigued by Allison’s ability to push her out of her element, and the young woman’s instant and easy connection with a normally shy Lucas quickly earns Allison the job.
After each blind date, Elena returns home to complain to Allison about her lacking suitors. As they bond, Elena begins to realize that the person possessing all the qualities she most desires might just be the woman who has been in front of her the entire time.
The vast difference between the two women’s social statuses, however, may be an obstacle not easily overcome.
Length: approx. 160,000 words
Themes: humor · Lesbian · romantic comedy
368 pages, Paperback
First published September 2, 2015
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K.L. Hughes
9 books482 followersKL Hughes is an American poet and fiction author writing in multiple genres. Growing up in a small town of just over 1500 people, she spent much of her time inventing various ways to entertain herself as well as others. Whether it was through vocal performances of original children’s songs or theatrical re-enactments of books, movies, and actual events, Hughes showcased her extensive imagination and creativity at a very early age.
She began writing poetry at the age of nine, a passion that rapidly grew and expanded to include short stories, novellas, and eventually novels. Throughout elementary school and high school, Hughes won several contests and competitions focused in original poetry and short-story composition.
After graduating valedictorian of her high-school class, Hughes went on to pursue and earn a Bachelor of Liberal Arts degree in Theatre Arts and English Literature. Her collegiate studies allowed her to develop and hone her skills in poetry, playwriting, screenwriting, and fiction prose.
Working as a writer full-time, Hughes lives in the United States with her wife and their Dalmatian. When not writing, she enjoys theatre and film, travel, visits to old cemeteries and haunted houses, putting on one-woman musicals for her wife, long walks and hikes, and family time.
She began writing poetry at the age of nine, a passion that rapidly grew and expanded to include short stories, novellas, and eventually novels. Throughout elementary school and high school, Hughes won several contests and competitions focused in original poetry and short-story composition.
After graduating valedictorian of her high-school class, Hughes went on to pursue and earn a Bachelor of Liberal Arts degree in Theatre Arts and English Literature. Her collegiate studies allowed her to develop and hone her skills in poetry, playwriting, screenwriting, and fiction prose.
Working as a writer full-time, Hughes lives in the United States with her wife and their Dalmatian. When not writing, she enjoys theatre and film, travel, visits to old cemeteries and haunted houses, putting on one-woman musicals for her wife, long walks and hikes, and family time.
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April 5, 2018
'Ylva-Publishing ARC provided in exchange for a honest review'
In this warm and my second winning novel by KL Hughes that is complex,smart,genuinely moving story and a feel-good book that celebrates lots of small emotional moments and small changes that makes one big life. After her(Elena)reactions and choices to begin dating having not done it for years because of her son(Lucas),now she is refresh and her forthright vision has return on what kind of relationship she deems appropriate for her through the eyes of her best friend whether its a man or woman:- before she eventually uncovers her true feelings for__ Allison comes from a long line of people and foster homes who have cut and run so she has dealt with being disappointed more than enough so Elena & Lucas was a breath of fresh air for her and a newness in her life. As the author define them during this storyline,treasured traits are the positive qualities developed within our families and other significant relationships while tarnished,traditions are this adopted from our histories. Tabled trangressional are the obvious and obscure losses we've all experienced but have not considered significant in our present or future. Finally,this tells readers about an extraordinary deft,humane,heartwarming romantic love story between two people from different background that only had hope and lots of feelings on their side going for them but fell in LOVE. Exceptionally written and recommended to everyone!
In this warm and my second winning novel by KL Hughes that is complex,smart,genuinely moving story and a feel-good book that celebrates lots of small emotional moments and small changes that makes one big life. After her(Elena)reactions and choices to begin dating having not done it for years because of her son(Lucas),now she is refresh and her forthright vision has return on what kind of relationship she deems appropriate for her through the eyes of her best friend whether its a man or woman:- before she eventually uncovers her true feelings for__ Allison comes from a long line of people and foster homes who have cut and run so she has dealt with being disappointed more than enough so Elena & Lucas was a breath of fresh air for her and a newness in her life. As the author define them during this storyline,treasured traits are the positive qualities developed within our families and other significant relationships while tarnished,traditions are this adopted from our histories. Tabled trangressional are the obvious and obscure losses we've all experienced but have not considered significant in our present or future. Finally,this tells readers about an extraordinary deft,humane,heartwarming romantic love story between two people from different background that only had hope and lots of feelings on their side going for them but fell in LOVE. Exceptionally written and recommended to everyone!
November 17, 2017
I didn't realize I needed book until I realized I needed this book. I'm not quite sure what held me back from reading it initially. Maybe because I was aware of its fanfic origins and I didn't want to picture the women from a show (not that I watch that one, anyway haha). But, K.L. Hughes illustrates her characters in a way that I can paint my own mental picture.
Back to my need. I NEEDED THIS. Has anyone been on social media lately? Rhetorical question, but HOLY COW, THE WORLD IS A MESS. This book is pure romance and fluff wrapped up in kisses and feels and swoooooonnnn. I forgot one of the reasons I love fanfic so much (for the fandoms I'm into). It's the extra bits of fluff to service the readers. And I mean that in the most complementary way possible. In too many lesfic books, they lack those times for the characters to just sit back, relax, and be a couple. I can see how this would be a turn-off for other readers. Personally, I love it.
There weren't long periods of time where we're away from the main couple. What's up with that, other writers? I'm here for the romance! I don't need a cutaway to random friend #3. Sorry for the tangents, people.
ELENA VEGA. DO YOU HEAR MY MATING CALLS??? She's both icy and hot and proper-talking and ughhhhhh Allison is a lucky duck. My fiction crush started on her immediately, especially when she got all stiff and awkward. Allison is pretty yum herself, too. I loved her straightforwardness. The contrast between these two leapt from my Kindle, omg. THEIR CHEMISTRY, TOO. Well done, Hughes.
Hughes also didn't get stingy with the sex scenes, which was awesome. They were more than smut; in between the passion lay genuine affection. That's so important and too many stories forget about that. It keeps the relationship believable and healthy. Only nitpicks are some (non-sex) parts dragged a bit. Nothing serious.
Falling in love with the babysitter? I LOVE THIS. Are there more themes along these lines in lesfic land? It was a treat for their age gap to not be that big (Elena and Allison are both in their twenties). Elena sometimes acted twice her age, but it was consistent. Even her kid, Lucas, is a joy! He's a constant presence and still manages to disappear enough for the ladies to slip in some lovin'.
If you need a break from angst (and life), dive into this fluff fest. 4.5 stars bumped up because I feel like it.
Back to my need. I NEEDED THIS. Has anyone been on social media lately? Rhetorical question, but HOLY COW, THE WORLD IS A MESS. This book is pure romance and fluff wrapped up in kisses and feels and swoooooonnnn. I forgot one of the reasons I love fanfic so much (for the fandoms I'm into). It's the extra bits of fluff to service the readers. And I mean that in the most complementary way possible. In too many lesfic books, they lack those times for the characters to just sit back, relax, and be a couple. I can see how this would be a turn-off for other readers. Personally, I love it.
There weren't long periods of time where we're away from the main couple. What's up with that, other writers? I'm here for the romance! I don't need a cutaway to random friend #3. Sorry for the tangents, people.
ELENA VEGA. DO YOU HEAR MY MATING CALLS??? She's both icy and hot and proper-talking and ughhhhhh Allison is a lucky duck. My fiction crush started on her immediately, especially when she got all stiff and awkward. Allison is pretty yum herself, too. I loved her straightforwardness. The contrast between these two leapt from my Kindle, omg. THEIR CHEMISTRY, TOO. Well done, Hughes.
Hughes also didn't get stingy with the sex scenes, which was awesome. They were more than smut; in between the passion lay genuine affection. That's so important and too many stories forget about that. It keeps the relationship believable and healthy. Only nitpicks are some (non-sex) parts dragged a bit. Nothing serious.
Falling in love with the babysitter? I LOVE THIS. Are there more themes along these lines in lesfic land? It was a treat for their age gap to not be that big (Elena and Allison are both in their twenties). Elena sometimes acted twice her age, but it was consistent. Even her kid, Lucas, is a joy! He's a constant presence and still manages to disappear enough for the ladies to slip in some lovin'.
If you need a break from angst (and life), dive into this fluff fest. 4.5 stars bumped up because I feel like it.
January 14, 2018
“Popcorn Love” is a sweet, lighthearted romantic comedy that is lots of fun to listen to!
MC Elena’s best friend Vivian decides it’s time, after four years of not dating, for 28yo Elena to find a babysitter and start dating. Vivian and 3yo Lucas quickly decide that MC Allison isn’t only the perfect babysitter, she’s the perfect match for Elena!
The first 40% of the book is very cute as Elena hires 22yo Allison, and they begin a habit of talking about the truly terrible blind dates that Vivian has arranged for Elena. The banter between upperclass Elena and down-to-earth Allison is lots of fun. After the 3rd blind date (with a woman!), lesbian Allison realizes that her attraction to Elena includes being jealous of the gorgeous date. Elena realizes that she’s attracted to Allison, and rushes off to tell Vivian of her revelation.
With more than half the book remaining after they kiss, I was apprehensive that there would be the typical MAB (Misunderstanding Angst and Breakup) moment before our lovebirds got back together. I was so happy this never happened! Both women decide they want more than sex, so they deliberately proceed slowly with exploring their relationship. They flirt, get to know each other, get to know Elena’s parents and each of their best friends (Vivian and Allison’s roommate Maci).
I enjoyed their adventure together very much! The scene with Nora, Elena’s mother, and Vivian quizzing Elena and Allison about their intentions and their sexual histories was cringe-worthy, but also very funny and very touching. Early on, Nora encouraged Elena to explore dating women, and shocked Elena and Vivian by saying matter-of-factly:
Allison is a terrific character; she reminds me of Brooklyn from Melissa Brayden’s “Kiss the Girl”, and Elena has some aspects of Jessica too. Like Brooklyn, Allison grew up in foster homes, but is happy with where her life is now. Like Jessica, Elena is successful and is known for being a hard-ass at work, and being reserved with other people.
We are treated (finally!) to several deliciously explicit scenes, and the book even uses the word “canoodling” which was used in another book I just finished listening to! At 3yo, Lucas plays a different role than the 9yo boys in two books I’ve recently reviewed, but his existence is the very reason for our MCs getting together, and he plays a great role in many scenes.
Like popcorn and candy, our girls finally decide that despite the differences between them, they really do go well together!
The narrator (Kira Riley) did a fantastic job throughout the book, and really brought it to life. Especially for the effervescent Allison and for Lucas. Her voice for Elena was ok, I know the stiffness was intentional, but Elena didn’t sound at all latina. This is Riley’s only narration on Audible; I hope to hear lots more of her in the future! With Riley’s narration, this is definitely a book to listen to instead of reading. I smiled throughout the 11hrs 20minutes, and I strongly recommend “Popcorn Love” with a solid 5* for a lighthearted feel good romance!
MC Elena’s best friend Vivian decides it’s time, after four years of not dating, for 28yo Elena to find a babysitter and start dating. Vivian and 3yo Lucas quickly decide that MC Allison isn’t only the perfect babysitter, she’s the perfect match for Elena!
The first 40% of the book is very cute as Elena hires 22yo Allison, and they begin a habit of talking about the truly terrible blind dates that Vivian has arranged for Elena. The banter between upperclass Elena and down-to-earth Allison is lots of fun. After the 3rd blind date (with a woman!), lesbian Allison realizes that her attraction to Elena includes being jealous of the gorgeous date. Elena realizes that she’s attracted to Allison, and rushes off to tell Vivian of her revelation.
Vivian asks Elena: “Why the hell did you come here looking like you needed me to help you hide a body instead of rushing straight home and having hot lesbian sex with the babysitter?”
With more than half the book remaining after they kiss, I was apprehensive that there would be the typical MAB (Misunderstanding Angst and Breakup) moment before our lovebirds got back together. I was so happy this never happened! Both women decide they want more than sex, so they deliberately proceed slowly with exploring their relationship. They flirt, get to know each other, get to know Elena’s parents and each of their best friends (Vivian and Allison’s roommate Maci).
I enjoyed their adventure together very much! The scene with Nora, Elena’s mother, and Vivian quizzing Elena and Allison about their intentions and their sexual histories was cringe-worthy, but also very funny and very touching. Early on, Nora encouraged Elena to explore dating women, and shocked Elena and Vivian by saying matter-of-factly:
"I was a lesbian once myself. It was the 70s and I was a teenager. Everyone was still hung over from all that free love crap from the 60s. I went through a bit of a lesbian phase with a girl at school. It was before I met your father. Still the best sex I’ve ever had!”
Allison is a terrific character; she reminds me of Brooklyn from Melissa Brayden’s “Kiss the Girl”, and Elena has some aspects of Jessica too. Like Brooklyn, Allison grew up in foster homes, but is happy with where her life is now. Like Jessica, Elena is successful and is known for being a hard-ass at work, and being reserved with other people.
We are treated (finally!) to several deliciously explicit scenes, and the book even uses the word “canoodling” which was used in another book I just finished listening to! At 3yo, Lucas plays a different role than the 9yo boys in two books I’ve recently reviewed, but his existence is the very reason for our MCs getting together, and he plays a great role in many scenes.
Like popcorn and candy, our girls finally decide that despite the differences between them, they really do go well together!
The narrator (Kira Riley) did a fantastic job throughout the book, and really brought it to life. Especially for the effervescent Allison and for Lucas. Her voice for Elena was ok, I know the stiffness was intentional, but Elena didn’t sound at all latina. This is Riley’s only narration on Audible; I hope to hear lots more of her in the future! With Riley’s narration, this is definitely a book to listen to instead of reading. I smiled throughout the 11hrs 20minutes, and I strongly recommend “Popcorn Love” with a solid 5* for a lighthearted feel good romance!
October 24, 2015
Bleh... that's a 2.5.
Sorry for not being more eloquent. But BLEH. This one was too much on the cheesy side for me.
It's an okay story, really, with sweet enough moments. The first third of the book is entertaining enough. But gather together all the cliché things you've read or seen in romantic stories, add to that all the stereotypical illustrations of society you've encountered and you've got yourself a very BLEH love story. Not the most interesting or original representation of reality if you ask me.
Let's see... of course Elena's best friend sets her up on terrible blind dates. Of course Allison, the babysitter, has to zip up Elena's dress before she goes on her date. Of course they have to tease each other getting ice cream all over each other's faces and laugh like school girls. Of course there's an "accident" that involves one hitting the other on the head, leading up to fainting and then cuddling. Of course there's a horror movie.. what kind of lesbian romance doesn't have a horror movie thats scary enough for one of the two ladies to get closer..and closer.. to the other lady?
I'm a bit harsh. And admittedly, it didn't bother me so much. What got on my nerves was the disproportionate representations of social classes.
Why would a graduate from Harvard necessarily be such a stuck-up rich businesswoman who speaks like she's from centuries ago? Who calls everyone "dear", finds it hard to even call a student by her first name, and doesn't eat popcorn? Because, obviously, popcorn is for kids, or the poor, who don't care about eating fattening food.
Why would the poor one of the two necessarily be a foster child who speaks like a stupid college kid at times and who doesn't drink wine? Because, obviously, wine is for the rich and beautiful.
Also? I need sex scenes. There, I've said it. I NEED SEX.
I rushed through the last quarter of the book because I was really bored.
Sorry for not being more eloquent. But BLEH. This one was too much on the cheesy side for me.
It's an okay story, really, with sweet enough moments. The first third of the book is entertaining enough. But gather together all the cliché things you've read or seen in romantic stories, add to that all the stereotypical illustrations of society you've encountered and you've got yourself a very BLEH love story. Not the most interesting or original representation of reality if you ask me.
Let's see... of course Elena's best friend sets her up on terrible blind dates. Of course Allison, the babysitter, has to zip up Elena's dress before she goes on her date. Of course they have to tease each other getting ice cream all over each other's faces and laugh like school girls. Of course there's an "accident" that involves one hitting the other on the head, leading up to fainting and then cuddling. Of course there's a horror movie.. what kind of lesbian romance doesn't have a horror movie thats scary enough for one of the two ladies to get closer..and closer.. to the other lady?
I'm a bit harsh. And admittedly, it didn't bother me so much. What got on my nerves was the disproportionate representations of social classes.
Why would a graduate from Harvard necessarily be such a stuck-up rich businesswoman who speaks like she's from centuries ago? Who calls everyone "dear", finds it hard to even call a student by her first name, and doesn't eat popcorn? Because, obviously, popcorn is for kids, or the poor, who don't care about eating fattening food.
Why would the poor one of the two necessarily be a foster child who speaks like a stupid college kid at times and who doesn't drink wine? Because, obviously, wine is for the rich and beautiful.
Also? I need sex scenes. There, I've said it. I NEED SEX.
I rushed through the last quarter of the book because I was really bored.
March 17, 2019
This is the second book I read by this author, after The Art of Us, which I absolutely loved, and I was wondering whether it would be as fantastic. Though I did not enjoy it as much, it's still a very nice read. It was a bit long for me at times, and I thought Allison was a little obnoxious sometimes but I was nevertheless rooting for her (as if there were any doubt of a HEA) because she and Elena were so different and yet so good for each other. The novel is well-written, with a lightness of heart I really liked, even on tough topics (being a foster kid, an unwanted pregnancy), which only makes the characters stronger. If you're looking for a romance between complex but good people, with wit and a good sense of humor, you've found it.
July 5, 2016
Elena is a 200-year-old vampire and single mom who finds love and passion with her 15-year-old babysitter Allison. Together, they raise Elena's super cute toddler Steven Universe. Okay, then I realized this book wasn't a vampire/Steven Universe fanfic, but instead a SwanQueen fanfic. Either way, it does explained some of the clunky dialogue and awkward character development.
July 26, 2017
For fan fiction, this was very good. As a published book, it's still good, but I don't know why certain aspects weren't cut(?!). This could be so much better with a few more trims here and there.
The writing is definitely strong and the story line is entertaining. There's some good humor and the dialogue is excellent, minus the complaints I'll mention later in this review. The book hit on some of the tropes I've seen in the lesfic genre, namely beautiful leads with one rich and one raised in foster homes, while refreshingly avoiding others. There were no dreaded miscommunication issues or stupid fights just to create conflict. This isn't exactly slow burn but we don't get immediate instalove, either.
There's some diversity with Elena being a Spanish speaking Hispanic/Latina (it didn't say exactly which so I don't know what's more appropriate) and her character is comfortably bisexual while Allison is lesbian. Any conflicts present in the book are more around class differences and grappling with learned defense mechanisms, not about same sex preferences and prejudices.
Our leads do have great chemistry which is just fun to read and we also get an amusing and loving supporting cast that offer some good comedic moments and warm fuzzies.
As for the complaints...
I love Jan's description of "Elena is a 200-year-old vampire and single mom who finds love and passion with her 15-year-old babysitter Allison." because that is exactly how I felt. Allison seemed way younger than her 22 years and Elena needed to be at least 37, not 27.
Elena is an executive of a fashion company, a single mother, and talks and carries herself like an older woman. A simple change would be to bump her age by a decade and have her stop calling people "dear". I read plenty of reviews that note "dear" is due to the original character that inspired it but keeping it in the published version serves no purpose. Other reviewers also complained about how Elena spoke in general, that she was too stiff of a character. I actually didn't mind her character, though, and found her to be believable (when I disregarded her younger age).
There is a touch of melodrama with Allison. And, maybe it's just me, but I found her to be obnoxious sometimes. I understood that her "forthrightness" was meant to show that her character was free, ballsy, unfiltered, strong, a major contrast to Elena, etc. but some of the things she said to Elena with Elena in the role as her employer, even if it's an under the table type thing, was jarring. You just don't talk to a "boss" that way.
And, anyone who says "Did I stutter?" in response to someone when not in the middle of a hate filled, knock out, drag down fight comes across as a jackass even if that other person receiving the question is rude. I don't think it's too farfetched that a building receptionist would be skeptical of a young, scruffy looking 22 year-old to be there to meet with a major executive of the company...even if that assumption sucks, it's not unwarranted. Tone down the attitude.
On the whole, though, "Popcorn Love" is basically a pure feel-good romance with some comedic elements and a lot of "awww" mushy moments. Whatever its shortcomings, I still recommend it and can see why it's so popular.
The writing is definitely strong and the story line is entertaining. There's some good humor and the dialogue is excellent, minus the complaints I'll mention later in this review. The book hit on some of the tropes I've seen in the lesfic genre, namely beautiful leads with one rich and one raised in foster homes, while refreshingly avoiding others. There were no dreaded miscommunication issues or stupid fights just to create conflict. This isn't exactly slow burn but we don't get immediate instalove, either.
There's some diversity with Elena being a Spanish speaking Hispanic/Latina (it didn't say exactly which so I don't know what's more appropriate) and her character is comfortably bisexual while Allison is lesbian. Any conflicts present in the book are more around class differences and grappling with learned defense mechanisms, not about same sex preferences and prejudices.
Our leads do have great chemistry which is just fun to read and we also get an amusing and loving supporting cast that offer some good comedic moments and warm fuzzies.
As for the complaints...
I love Jan's description of "Elena is a 200-year-old vampire and single mom who finds love and passion with her 15-year-old babysitter Allison." because that is exactly how I felt. Allison seemed way younger than her 22 years and Elena needed to be at least 37, not 27.
Elena is an executive of a fashion company, a single mother, and talks and carries herself like an older woman. A simple change would be to bump her age by a decade and have her stop calling people "dear". I read plenty of reviews that note "dear" is due to the original character that inspired it but keeping it in the published version serves no purpose. Other reviewers also complained about how Elena spoke in general, that she was too stiff of a character. I actually didn't mind her character, though, and found her to be believable (when I disregarded her younger age).
There is a touch of melodrama with Allison. And, maybe it's just me, but I found her to be obnoxious sometimes. I understood that her "forthrightness" was meant to show that her character was free, ballsy, unfiltered, strong, a major contrast to Elena, etc. but some of the things she said to Elena with Elena in the role as her employer, even if it's an under the table type thing, was jarring. You just don't talk to a "boss" that way.
And, anyone who says "Did I stutter?" in response to someone when not in the middle of a hate filled, knock out, drag down fight comes across as a jackass even if that other person receiving the question is rude. I don't think it's too farfetched that a building receptionist would be skeptical of a young, scruffy looking 22 year-old to be there to meet with a major executive of the company...even if that assumption sucks, it's not unwarranted. Tone down the attitude.
On the whole, though, "Popcorn Love" is basically a pure feel-good romance with some comedic elements and a lot of "awww" mushy moments. Whatever its shortcomings, I still recommend it and can see why it's so popular.
September 9, 2020
This is my second experience with a KL Hughes novel and I'm completely in. First I listened to The Art of Us, a lengthy, angsty, heart wrenching love story that I was totally smitten by, and now this very enjoyable slow burn romance between two people who appear completely mismatched, but absolutely work.
Elena Vega is a wildly successful New York fashion mogul at the tender age of 27 and has a three year old son Lucas. Her life has focused on her career, son and family with no attention to a personal life. Her best friend Vivian insists that it's time for her to get out and date but Elena only agrees to it if she can find a suitable babysitter for Lucas. Vivian finds one in Allison Sawyer, a senior at NYU who is great with Lucas, so Elena decides she'll give dating a shot. After each disastrous one, she comes home at the end of the night and shares the experience with Allison. Beautiful, fun Allison with stunning green eyes that makes her feel lighter than she has in years. The two of them are from completely different worlds and social classes. Vega is extremely wealthy, with a high-powered job and Allison is someone who can barely scrape money together to make ends meet while living in student housing. Allison also has some demons from her past that make it difficult to truly let people in. But as they get to know one another, Elena begins to wonder if what she's been looking for is right in front of her.
What I liked most about this is that Elena isn't a snob who feels like she's above Allison in any way. She sees the person, not the social class or dollar signs. I also appreciated the length of time taken for them to get to know one another. And as gorgeous as they both are, you never feel like it's just about the sex. There are real feelings involved - as well as beautiful moments between Allison and Lucas. And speaking of the sex, my goodness - it's four-alarm fire hot. I also loved that Elena was Hispanic (which is still relatively rare in lesfic) and that the two of them have great communication. Allison has some demons from her past that make it difficult to truly let people in and that is handled with great sensitivity.
The only issues for me were that Elena was VERY young to be that successful in the New York fashion world, and that she calls people "dear" a lot. What 27 year-old does that?? Even wealthy ones. That said - minor enough. There is so much good in this including several laugh out loud moments. Can't wait for more by this author!
**When I like a book this much, I would also usually invest in the audio but after listening to the sample, the narrator can't pronounce the few words of Spanish that are in this book. So no - I won't be doing that. But the read itself is definitely worth it.
Elena Vega is a wildly successful New York fashion mogul at the tender age of 27 and has a three year old son Lucas. Her life has focused on her career, son and family with no attention to a personal life. Her best friend Vivian insists that it's time for her to get out and date but Elena only agrees to it if she can find a suitable babysitter for Lucas. Vivian finds one in Allison Sawyer, a senior at NYU who is great with Lucas, so Elena decides she'll give dating a shot. After each disastrous one, she comes home at the end of the night and shares the experience with Allison. Beautiful, fun Allison with stunning green eyes that makes her feel lighter than she has in years. The two of them are from completely different worlds and social classes. Vega is extremely wealthy, with a high-powered job and Allison is someone who can barely scrape money together to make ends meet while living in student housing. Allison also has some demons from her past that make it difficult to truly let people in. But as they get to know one another, Elena begins to wonder if what she's been looking for is right in front of her.
What I liked most about this is that Elena isn't a snob who feels like she's above Allison in any way. She sees the person, not the social class or dollar signs. I also appreciated the length of time taken for them to get to know one another. And as gorgeous as they both are, you never feel like it's just about the sex. There are real feelings involved - as well as beautiful moments between Allison and Lucas. And speaking of the sex, my goodness - it's four-alarm fire hot. I also loved that Elena was Hispanic (which is still relatively rare in lesfic) and that the two of them have great communication. Allison has some demons from her past that make it difficult to truly let people in and that is handled with great sensitivity.
The only issues for me were that Elena was VERY young to be that successful in the New York fashion world, and that she calls people "dear" a lot. What 27 year-old does that?? Even wealthy ones. That said - minor enough. There is so much good in this including several laugh out loud moments. Can't wait for more by this author!
**When I like a book this much, I would also usually invest in the audio but after listening to the sample, the narrator can't pronounce the few words of Spanish that are in this book. So no - I won't be doing that. But the read itself is definitely worth it.
January 29, 2019
Kicking off my 2019 reviews with a feel good book full of rainbows, unicorns, fluff and popcorn.
I read this years ago and remembered it as a very lighthearted book that is virtually angst free with some hilarious moments. This time around proved no different. I laughed out loud several times at the clumsiness that is Allison Sawyer and the small group of meddling and entertaining secondary characters.
The one thing that bothered me the most however is Elena's age. 27 seems really young to be the head of such an empire. It's not a huge deal breaker but just something that stuck out to me. Another minor detail was Elena's use of the word 'dear'. Every time she said it, it made her sound older than Stonehenge. Though the use of 'dear' suits the character on the show this book is based on, it doesn't translate well when it comes to a contemporary work of fiction.
Those nitpicks aside this is a great book to read when you need a rom-com sweeter and fluffier than cotton candy. Full 4* rating!
I read this years ago and remembered it as a very lighthearted book that is virtually angst free with some hilarious moments. This time around proved no different. I laughed out loud several times at the clumsiness that is Allison Sawyer and the small group of meddling and entertaining secondary characters.
The one thing that bothered me the most however is Elena's age. 27 seems really young to be the head of such an empire. It's not a huge deal breaker but just something that stuck out to me. Another minor detail was Elena's use of the word 'dear'. Every time she said it, it made her sound older than Stonehenge. Though the use of 'dear' suits the character on the show this book is based on, it doesn't translate well when it comes to a contemporary work of fiction.
Those nitpicks aside this is a great book to read when you need a rom-com sweeter and fluffier than cotton candy. Full 4* rating!
November 26, 2017
I listened to the audio book and I must now proclaim myself a fan of this narrator. The voices, especially Lucas' tiny toddler's voice, were done so distinctive, I found myself absolutely riveted.
Of course there is the awkward "dear" that other reviewers before me have already pointed out and it did age Elena beyond her years. At times she did positively sound grandmotherly. But sometimes when you listen it is good to have very distinct voices and speech patterns, thus it endeared her to me, made her seem more real somehow.
Overall this was another listen that made me feel not just good, but positively beaming.
The beginning was really priceless with Vivian's plot to set Elena up, the clueless behaviour of both Elena and Allison, Nora's unfiltered comments and of course let's not forget the adorable kid.
Of course I did clench up every time some crisis wanted to erupt, but it never evolved into prolonged angst, so I could relax and enjoy very quickly. Right now this is exactly what I needed.
Of course there is the awkward "dear" that other reviewers before me have already pointed out and it did age Elena beyond her years. At times she did positively sound grandmotherly. But sometimes when you listen it is good to have very distinct voices and speech patterns, thus it endeared her to me, made her seem more real somehow.
Overall this was another listen that made me feel not just good, but positively beaming.
The beginning was really priceless with Vivian's plot to set Elena up, the clueless behaviour of both Elena and Allison, Nora's unfiltered comments and of course let's not forget the adorable kid.
Of course I did clench up every time some crisis wanted to erupt, but it never evolved into prolonged angst, so I could relax and enjoy very quickly. Right now this is exactly what I needed.
November 8, 2017
3.5 Stars for a reread. I didn’t give a written review the first time I read it, so I’ll add one now.
I decided to reread this book because I’m looking forward to the author’s newest book The Art of Us which will be available soon.
I’ve upgraded this book 1/2 a star for the re-read. The problems I had with this book prevents me from rounding up to 4 Stars. Still I enjoyed it more this time around. This book is about a 27 year old, wealthy Latino executive, Elena who hires a 22 yr old college student, Allison to babysit her 3yr old son. Overall it is entertaining, the leads have great chemistry, a well written toddler, and a wonderful supporting cast.
So what are the problems? It is an Once Upon Time uber fan fiction. That in itself isn’t the problem. The problem is the choices the author made. As other reviewers mentioned Elena is too young. Her personality and executive position screams that at she is 5-10 years older. So as I read I pictured her as 35 not 27. Elena favorite endearment is “dear” which I understand comes from the tv show’s character. I don’t mind it here and there but it is overused and ages Elena.
Despite the problems, I recommend this book. I wouldn’t be surprised if I reread it again. Obviously I do enjoy visiting with these characters.
I decided to reread this book because I’m looking forward to the author’s newest book The Art of Us which will be available soon.
I’ve upgraded this book 1/2 a star for the re-read. The problems I had with this book prevents me from rounding up to 4 Stars. Still I enjoyed it more this time around. This book is about a 27 year old, wealthy Latino executive, Elena who hires a 22 yr old college student, Allison to babysit her 3yr old son. Overall it is entertaining, the leads have great chemistry, a well written toddler, and a wonderful supporting cast.
So what are the problems? It is an Once Upon Time uber fan fiction. That in itself isn’t the problem. The problem is the choices the author made. As other reviewers mentioned Elena is too young. Her personality and executive position screams that at she is 5-10 years older. So as I read I pictured her as 35 not 27. Elena favorite endearment is “dear” which I understand comes from the tv show’s character. I don’t mind it here and there but it is overused and ages Elena.
Despite the problems, I recommend this book. I wouldn’t be surprised if I reread it again. Obviously I do enjoy visiting with these characters.
July 16, 2019
3.5 stars
This was my first experience reading something by KL Hughes and although this book comes highly rated, it didn’t do much for me. The story didn’t wow or excite me in any way. The forced drama that’s usually thrown in to lesfics was thankfully absent, however the romance by itself wasn’t enough to hold my attention for long. Due to this, it took me a long time to finish the book. I don’t know, it just wasn’t exciting.
The romance was sweet, but just mediocre. My favorite part of the story was not the two main characters, but the son, Henry. He was adorable and ultimately the one that kept me reading.
This was a light feel – good romance full of fluff and silly moments. I can see why people like it. I know my opinion is the unpopular one, but this didn’t live up to the hype for me.
This was my first experience reading something by KL Hughes and although this book comes highly rated, it didn’t do much for me. The story didn’t wow or excite me in any way. The forced drama that’s usually thrown in to lesfics was thankfully absent, however the romance by itself wasn’t enough to hold my attention for long. Due to this, it took me a long time to finish the book. I don’t know, it just wasn’t exciting.
The romance was sweet, but just mediocre. My favorite part of the story was not the two main characters, but the son, Henry. He was adorable and ultimately the one that kept me reading.
This was a light feel – good romance full of fluff and silly moments. I can see why people like it. I know my opinion is the unpopular one, but this didn’t live up to the hype for me.
June 19, 2020
I loved the idea of this book, but the dialogue kept pulling me out of it, specifically all the 'dears.'
I kept picturing a 70 year old woman instead of a 28 year old. One or two 'dears?' Maybe. But there had to be 20+ uses. And Elena not using contractions, ever, was also jarring.
The writing was great though, so I'm definitely going to keep reading this author's books.
This one was just a miss for me.
I kept picturing a 70 year old woman instead of a 28 year old. One or two 'dears?' Maybe. But there had to be 20+ uses. And Elena not using contractions, ever, was also jarring.
The writing was great though, so I'm definitely going to keep reading this author's books.
This one was just a miss for me.
February 9, 2025
Audiobook version is just as wonderful as the ebook.
Loved this book and am hoping for a squeal to see how and where these wonderful characters end up.
Loved this book and am hoping for a squeal to see how and where these wonderful characters end up.
May 5, 2020
Overused phrases: "She cleared her throat." (89 times)
"She scratched the back of her neck" (50 times)
"She scratched the back of her neck" (50 times)
November 28, 2015
Unpopular opinion here: this book was tedious, and I found myself skipping through whole chunks of it. And tellingly, that skipping didn't result in me missing any of the story; there's a lot of mind-numbing "funny banter" that I think is supposed to make us believe in this nonsensical love story.
Elena is a terribly-written character who speaks like a robot, though a robot would probably have more personality. Allison fares better, but it's just too much to ask of a reader to stay in a long story when one of the main characters is so poorly done.
And where exactly was the conflict in this story? Where was the plot? I suppose I should tag this as a spoiler, but the synopsis already tells you the entire story: rich lady and babysitter fall in love, live happily ever after. It's boring, and not even well written to redeem it in that way.
Elena is a terribly-written character who speaks like a robot, though a robot would probably have more personality. Allison fares better, but it's just too much to ask of a reader to stay in a long story when one of the main characters is so poorly done.
And where exactly was the conflict in this story? Where was the plot? I suppose I should tag this as a spoiler, but the synopsis already tells you the entire story: rich lady and babysitter fall in love, live happily ever after. It's boring, and not even well written to redeem it in that way.
December 11, 2021
12/2021
Still love this book. The narrator is fantastic. She does the best little kid voice I have ever heard and just turns little Lucas into the cutest thing ever. I looked for other books read by her but it seems like this is the only book she has narrated? That is a shame. Still a very sweet story with very little angst. A great read for when you want something well written and as cozy as your favorite blanket.
2/2020
This book is a balm to my romantic soul. If you just want a super cute story with great characters, good dialog, funny moments, steamy moments, movie worthy romantic moments than this is the book you need to listen to. Also there is no unnecessary drama for drama's sake. The narration is amazing as well. I will definitely be listening to this again. The only teeny-tiny peeve I have with it is the fact that a 27 year old character used the word "dear" so much. It's such a grandma word it bugged me every time.
Still love this book. The narrator is fantastic. She does the best little kid voice I have ever heard and just turns little Lucas into the cutest thing ever. I looked for other books read by her but it seems like this is the only book she has narrated? That is a shame. Still a very sweet story with very little angst. A great read for when you want something well written and as cozy as your favorite blanket.
2/2020
This book is a balm to my romantic soul. If you just want a super cute story with great characters, good dialog, funny moments, steamy moments, movie worthy romantic moments than this is the book you need to listen to. Also there is no unnecessary drama for drama's sake. The narration is amazing as well. I will definitely be listening to this again. The only teeny-tiny peeve I have with it is the fact that a 27 year old character used the word "dear" so much. It's such a grandma word it bugged me every time.
November 11, 2018
Cheesy romance? Why not?
Why read a romance book and not expect it being a little cheesy? That's a good thing right?
Unoriginal? Well if some of the people writing reviews here have more "original" plot for stories then bring me the book and I'll read it and tell you. Sure, there is a basic idea about the storyline. Mother with a kid not sure of her sexuality? Well I've already read Braydens Heart block, why should I read this? It's because every writer is original in his own way. This isn't some stolen plagiarism.
This book made me honestly laugh many times and that rarely happens. I giggle a lot, but laugh? Rarely.
I sincerely thank the author for actually making it cheesy and original in it's own way. You know what' not original? This plot: f/f book, girls hate each other, fall in love, realize how hard love is, break up, realize how they can't be without each other, get together again and live happily ever after. You think that's romantic? Sure it adds to the book drama and storyline but if someone thinks that's could be a reality they're really wrong and I'm glad I didn't see this in this book and for that I'm giving five stars.
It also reads super easy and I finished it not even realizing that it was longer than the standard is.
I'll surely check out her new books once they come out!
Why read a romance book and not expect it being a little cheesy? That's a good thing right?
Unoriginal? Well if some of the people writing reviews here have more "original" plot for stories then bring me the book and I'll read it and tell you. Sure, there is a basic idea about the storyline. Mother with a kid not sure of her sexuality? Well I've already read Braydens Heart block, why should I read this? It's because every writer is original in his own way. This isn't some stolen plagiarism.
This book made me honestly laugh many times and that rarely happens. I giggle a lot, but laugh? Rarely.
I sincerely thank the author for actually making it cheesy and original in it's own way. You know what' not original? This plot: f/f book, girls hate each other, fall in love, realize how hard love is, break up, realize how they can't be without each other, get together again and live happily ever after. You think that's romantic? Sure it adds to the book drama and storyline but if someone thinks that's could be a reality they're really wrong and I'm glad I didn't see this in this book and for that I'm giving five stars.
It also reads super easy and I finished it not even realizing that it was longer than the standard is.
I'll surely check out her new books once they come out!
September 13, 2015
I really enjoyed Popcorn Love. It's what I'd dub a 'fluffy romance' - perfect for a weekend read :-) Elena and Allison had great chemistry and Lucas (Elena's son) was a little cutie!
My only qualm, Elena's character appeared much older than her reported 27 years. The constant use of "dear" made her seem at least a decade or two older than what she actually was.
All in all, a great way to spend a few hours on the weekend.
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars
My only qualm, Elena's character appeared much older than her reported 27 years. The constant use of "dear" made her seem at least a decade or two older than what she actually was.
All in all, a great way to spend a few hours on the weekend.
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars
November 1, 2015
I really loved this sweet, sweet sugary romance. Sometimes you need stories like this one, and it seems I needed it now. My only issue with this fantastic book was the age of Elena. I don't know why, but I kept thinking she was in her thirties.
May 9, 2021
3 stars. I read this one because I really loved The Art of Us by the author. Unfortunately this one was not quite as good as that one, but still enjoyable.
Opposites attract when Elena hires Allison to babysit her son while she goes on a string of blind dates that her friend sets up. Three cheers for the single mom representation as well as the Latina representation. But. A lot of the language in the book did not feel natural in the slightest (maybe I don't hang out enough around rich people?). And basically every stereotype and cliche that you can imagine was thrown in for the sake of meetings certain themes and tropes. I though there could have been more cleverness in that, especially with the intense emotional impact of The Art of Us.
Still, very sweet moments, and I was glad that unlike other single mom stories, the kid plays a key role in everything and is not simply forgotten by the author while the women do their thing.
Opposites attract when Elena hires Allison to babysit her son while she goes on a string of blind dates that her friend sets up. Three cheers for the single mom representation as well as the Latina representation. But. A lot of the language in the book did not feel natural in the slightest (maybe I don't hang out enough around rich people?). And basically every stereotype and cliche that you can imagine was thrown in for the sake of meetings certain themes and tropes. I though there could have been more cleverness in that, especially with the intense emotional impact of The Art of Us.
Still, very sweet moments, and I was glad that unlike other single mom stories, the kid plays a key role in everything and is not simply forgotten by the author while the women do their thing.
January 16, 2022
Review of Popcorn Love by KL Hughes, Audiobook narrated by Kira Riley
3.5 stars. I think this is the kind of book that gets mixed strong reactions among readers, kind of love or hate. I personally didn't hate it but didn't love it either.
Elena is a typical ice-queen, tough at the workplace, loving with her son. She needs a nanny to watch her 3-year-old son while she tries to go on different dates. After a couple of unsuccessful first dates, she realises that maybe her ideal woman is waiting at home...
This is an opposites-attract romance between a fashion businesswoman and her son's nanny. It looks like it started as fanfic because of the length and its structure. The story has a few ridiculous/humorous scenes but it's mainly a feel-good romance with very little angst. There is no "black moment" (ubiquitous breakup at the 80% mark) and no grand gesture either.
I mentioned that I didn't love it, one reason is that I couldn't warm to Elena. I get that she's a bit socially awkward but I couldn't get used to her way of talking, which is a bit too formal for her age, and also, Elena's term of endearment "dear" stuck like a sore thumb. The other reason is that the book felt a bit long for my tastes, I think the story would have benefited from cutting a few scenes.
I listened to the audiobook narrated by Kira Riley who did a great job with the different voices (Elena and her son were the best) and her Spanish pronunciation was very good. I think that her performance made the story more entertaining for me so I'm glad I got the audiobook version.
Length 11 hours, 20 minutes
3.5 stars. I think this is the kind of book that gets mixed strong reactions among readers, kind of love or hate. I personally didn't hate it but didn't love it either.
Elena is a typical ice-queen, tough at the workplace, loving with her son. She needs a nanny to watch her 3-year-old son while she tries to go on different dates. After a couple of unsuccessful first dates, she realises that maybe her ideal woman is waiting at home...
This is an opposites-attract romance between a fashion businesswoman and her son's nanny. It looks like it started as fanfic because of the length and its structure. The story has a few ridiculous/humorous scenes but it's mainly a feel-good romance with very little angst. There is no "black moment" (ubiquitous breakup at the 80% mark) and no grand gesture either.
I mentioned that I didn't love it, one reason is that I couldn't warm to Elena. I get that she's a bit socially awkward but I couldn't get used to her way of talking, which is a bit too formal for her age, and also, Elena's term of endearment "dear" stuck like a sore thumb. The other reason is that the book felt a bit long for my tastes, I think the story would have benefited from cutting a few scenes.
I listened to the audiobook narrated by Kira Riley who did a great job with the different voices (Elena and her son were the best) and her Spanish pronunciation was very good. I think that her performance made the story more entertaining for me so I'm glad I got the audiobook version.
Length 11 hours, 20 minutes
November 23, 2018
My first question is when is the sequel coming out because this book just begs for more story. I now have to know what happens to Elena and Allison as individuals and as a couple down the road. There is a satisfying ending but not a crumb of information as to what the future holds for them. No usual epilogue which is fine if we get a book two.
Elena, a wealthy powerhouse in the fashion business, is back on the dating scene and so she hires a college student to babysit her son while she’s out on these dates. Young Ms. Allison is beautiful, sweet, and sharply intelligent with an already weary heart from her childhood raised in the foster system.
I really needed a funny book at this time and Popcorn Love was perfect. It had me belly laughing in the beginning and as the two women found each other, had me oohing and ahhing. There was some steam but it was mixed in nicely with affectionate moments. As for 3 year old Lucas, the cuteness factor then zoomed into overload whenever he entered the picture.
This is a happy pill romance with just the tiniest bit of angst. Great mc’s and distinct supporting characters. I’m looking forward to reading book 2 (hopefully) and The Art of Us which I also have in my library.
Elena, a wealthy powerhouse in the fashion business, is back on the dating scene and so she hires a college student to babysit her son while she’s out on these dates. Young Ms. Allison is beautiful, sweet, and sharply intelligent with an already weary heart from her childhood raised in the foster system.
I really needed a funny book at this time and Popcorn Love was perfect. It had me belly laughing in the beginning and as the two women found each other, had me oohing and ahhing. There was some steam but it was mixed in nicely with affectionate moments. As for 3 year old Lucas, the cuteness factor then zoomed into overload whenever he entered the picture.
This is a happy pill romance with just the tiniest bit of angst. Great mc’s and distinct supporting characters. I’m looking forward to reading book 2 (hopefully) and The Art of Us which I also have in my library.
November 4, 2018
I kept meaning to read Popcorn Love by K.L. Hughes, but for some reason, I didn’t get the book until now. I am really glad I finally got this story to read and review.
Popcorn Love is an absolute joy to read; a sweet and very satisfying love story that is well written and engaging. K.L. Hughes is an excellent author, and it shows in this book. The characters are well drawn, both the main characters and the secondary ones. In fact, the story is so much better because of her secondary characters. I love how the two main characters grow together and the sweet romance that just flows through the tale.
If you haven’t read Popcorn Love yet, don’t wait any longer. This is too good a book to miss.
I received an ARC from Ylva Publishing for an honest review.
Popcorn Love is an absolute joy to read; a sweet and very satisfying love story that is well written and engaging. K.L. Hughes is an excellent author, and it shows in this book. The characters are well drawn, both the main characters and the secondary ones. In fact, the story is so much better because of her secondary characters. I love how the two main characters grow together and the sweet romance that just flows through the tale.
If you haven’t read Popcorn Love yet, don’t wait any longer. This is too good a book to miss.
I received an ARC from Ylva Publishing for an honest review.
August 11, 2019
Loved it!
Despite differences, love is always capable of finding a way to bloom. In this story they seem to have nothing in common. One born in a loving family and the other grew up lonely. When these two opposites meet, the immediate attraction is quite passionate and breathtaking. I loved following their budding relationship and I liked how they show their vulnerability and their love. Both main characters are easy to love and rooting for. A beautiful and sweet romance with plenty of humor and a great supporting cast. Lucas was adorable and he made me smile a lot. I highly recommend this captivating read.
Despite differences, love is always capable of finding a way to bloom. In this story they seem to have nothing in common. One born in a loving family and the other grew up lonely. When these two opposites meet, the immediate attraction is quite passionate and breathtaking. I loved following their budding relationship and I liked how they show their vulnerability and their love. Both main characters are easy to love and rooting for. A beautiful and sweet romance with plenty of humor and a great supporting cast. Lucas was adorable and he made me smile a lot. I highly recommend this captivating read.
September 17, 2021
I was really looking forward to this as I thought the premise was interesting, but unfortunately it wasn't for me.
It actually reads like a Once Upon A Time Regina/Emma fanfiction, was it originally that? I only watched a couple of seasons of that show but I picked up on it immediately. Allison is the name of another character Jennifer Morrison has played too (I used to love House). Tbh the whole OUAT thing kept jarring me out of the story. I pictured Emma and Regina practically the whole time, and I haven't even seen the show for years!
Lucas was super cute though.
But yeah, a shame. I'll still check out other works by the author.
It actually reads like a Once Upon A Time Regina/Emma fanfiction, was it originally that? I only watched a couple of seasons of that show but I picked up on it immediately. Allison is the name of another character Jennifer Morrison has played too (I used to love House). Tbh the whole OUAT thing kept jarring me out of the story. I pictured Emma and Regina practically the whole time, and I haven't even seen the show for years!
Lucas was super cute though.
But yeah, a shame. I'll still check out other works by the author.
December 3, 2017
I read this book in 2015 and loved it. I recently purchased the audiobook on Audible and enjoyed it just as much. I typically only buy audiobooks of books I have read and could read over and over again. I think both the ebook and the audiobook are worth purchasing.
September 8, 2015
I haven't read anything by this author before, but the blurb drew me in so I gave it a try, and I'm glad I did. It's a lovely story that's pretty much a straight through romance, there's no real conflict (which also means the blessed absence of the usual contrived break up and make up that's standard in lesfic). The leads spend a lot of time together and get to know each other, and the supporting characters are fun.
The only quibble I had was Elena's character, she's written far older than she's supposed to be, I'm not sure how believable it is that she's a CEO of a fashion house at 27, and she talks like she's sixty, I don't know a lot of 27 year olds who call other people 'dear'. Her own mother speaks less formally than she does, and it was just weird. There's an instance where she's referred to by another name, which is an error that appears to be left over from this story originally being fanfiction. Given that knowledge her speech makes more sense, but otherwise, it's just weird, and kind off-putting.
That aside, I enjoyed this for what it is, a nice, sweet romance, and a good way to spend a few hours.
The only quibble I had was Elena's character, she's written far older than she's supposed to be, I'm not sure how believable it is that she's a CEO of a fashion house at 27, and she talks like she's sixty, I don't know a lot of 27 year olds who call other people 'dear'. Her own mother speaks less formally than she does, and it was just weird. There's an instance where she's referred to by another name, which is an error that appears to be left over from this story originally being fanfiction. Given that knowledge her speech makes more sense, but otherwise, it's just weird, and kind off-putting.
That aside, I enjoyed this for what it is, a nice, sweet romance, and a good way to spend a few hours.
January 4, 2016
I liked it, but wouldn't say I loved it. Elena's mannerisms and way of speaking were so stilted and awkward and yet also precise that I had a hard time seeing her as a character. Thankfully someone pointed out in the comments of another review that this started out as a fanfic, so that makes a lot more sense, but this needed another editorial pass to even that out. I liked the premise and every other character worked so well for me, but Elena was too major a character for me to be able to ignore how oddly she spoke, even if I did have to start ignoring the way she said "dear" all the time.
I would give this author another try in the future, but I'd rather not pay $9.99 for a book that still reads like fanfic.
I would give this author another try in the future, but I'd rather not pay $9.99 for a book that still reads like fanfic.
December 3, 2016
I really liked the start of this book, but at some point it just started to drag.
I would say it is about twice the length of the average lesfic novel, and I can't figure out why because the actual plot is really thin.
In addition, I had issues with the dialogue (who talks like this?), and some character-specific things. For example, I'm sure Elena's mother was supposed to be funny, but I really found her kind of unbearable.
I guess the fanfic element comes into play here. Turning fanfic into novels is always tricky. In fanfic, you can assume that people know the characters and you can leave a lot of stuff out. When turning it into a novel, that means a lot of stuff in regard to character development is missing. I wasn't aware that this was originally SwanQueen fic, so to me while reading it there were gaping wholes. With the added knowledge some things make more sense, but really, that shouldn't be the case.
I don't as a rule have anything against slow books in which nothing much happens, but here it just dragged on for too long.
I would say it is about twice the length of the average lesfic novel, and I can't figure out why because the actual plot is really thin.
In addition, I had issues with the dialogue (who talks like this?), and some character-specific things. For example, I'm sure Elena's mother was supposed to be funny, but I really found her kind of unbearable.
I guess the fanfic element comes into play here. Turning fanfic into novels is always tricky. In fanfic, you can assume that people know the characters and you can leave a lot of stuff out. When turning it into a novel, that means a lot of stuff in regard to character development is missing. I wasn't aware that this was originally SwanQueen fic, so to me while reading it there were gaping wholes. With the added knowledge some things make more sense, but really, that shouldn't be the case.
I don't as a rule have anything against slow books in which nothing much happens, but here it just dragged on for too long.
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