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384 pages, Kindle Edition
Published August 19, 2025
This book is more on the dark comedy side, and if it was meant to be only a parody, then it is actually a pretty good one at that. However, some scenes and events are meant to be serious, which makes me wonder whether the reader should take this story seriously or just regard it as a parody. If we should take it seriously, then an otherwise well-written parody becomes a mediocre story.
The author uses all the tropes of a typical transmigration danmei, where the MC gets transmigrated into a novel with an ancient setting, there's a system giving him tasks to make the ML change for the better, and thus inadvertently making the ML fall in love with him. The unique aspect of this story, however, is that we get to see our MC, Wang Xiaomie, and the ML, Wen Fengjin, after the transmigration took place, and instead of living happily ever after like the heroes of any such stories, the MC dies gruesomely in the end, only to wake up in the modern day as a zombie. Well, sort of.
The negative aspect of this story lies in the characterisation and the backstories. Wang Xiaomie is an innocent guy who, most of the time, feels younger than his actual age. And then there's Wen Fengjin, who acts just like the ML of a dark romance novel, manipulating, drugging the MC, and lying to him about everything that happened because he is aware that Wang Xiaomie cannot remember anything, and he wants him to remain this way. We even get glimpses into Wen Fengjin's thoughts, where he clearly wants to make Wang Xiaomie stay with him forever, almost like a prisoner. We even get hints that in the past, Wang Xiaomie didn't even want to let him touch him, and now he will make Wang Xiaomie so dependent on him that he will be unable to leave him. While insisting that he is not Wang Xiaomie but the previous owner of the body, Mian Deng, whom he loves greatly. I can't tell how much I hated this total red flag of a ML, only to turn out that he isn't such a bastard after all. Since, of course, everything he did, he did it for Wang Xiaomie; it was all in his interest. As their past is finally revealed, it turns out that Wen Fengjin really did everything in his power to save Wang Xiaomie, and really did love him. And he still does, that's why he is trying to figure out a way to keep him alive. Their love was actually mutual; he knew that he transmigrated and loved him, not the original owner of the body, so their story is not so dark; everything is happy, let's rejoice. I don't like dark romances, so I'm actually happy with the outcome. However, the delivery is somewhat lacking, as this turn of events is too sudden; the pacing of the plot is off, there's barely any foreshadowing, and the characters don't have enough time to grow.
As a result, the characters seem too flat, one-dimensional. Their backstories are thrown in too quickly, too briefly to truly feel and experience the devastation of their past and the depth of their love. The only two characters, who I believe were actually portrayed well, are Xiao Luo and Zhen Bei. They are also one-dimensional, Xiao Luo being the simple, naive youth, while Zhen Bei is the evil antagonist, but at least their characters are believable. Even though Zhen Bei appeared harmless at first, there was something about him that made me feel aversion towards him; I couldn't like him at all. So that was well-portrayed because he turned out to be much worse than at first glance. While Xiao Luo remained a naive youth from start to finish. But I imagined Lei-jie to be much older than her actual age.
I know that the backstory's only purpose was to explain how the MCs got to the present situation, but it wasn't well executed, the pacing was too rushed; we didn't get to feel the weight of all the things that happened in the past. This is especially true of Yan Chun, who appears with his unrequited love out of the blue, and tells us how wronged he feels, just like anyone would in his shoes, only to be discarded and killed too suddenly for the reader to actually feel his pain, and try to understand the reasoning behind his cruel actions. As a result, he becomes a pathetic, laughable pseudo-villain before the actual antagonist arrives to take his place.
Near the end of the book, Lei-jie gives a good summary of the actions of many characters in this novel when talking about herself: "It's not good to get too greedy, or I'll end up losing myself."
The novel as a whole is okay for its unique premise, but the characters are too one-dimensional and flat, and the pacing is rushed. There are some parodically funny scenes in it, and the story is definitely not boring. However, the delivery of the plot is not that good. Not to mention how annoying it could get when there's a characteristic that just keeps being mentioned about a character every damn time he is described, so it gets repetitive and annoying extremely quickly. Also, it would have been better if more was shown instead of told to the reader. The story wasn't boring, but it would have been better as a standalone novel. I will read the second volume, hoping to get some answers and more info about their past. This wasn't that bad, not to read the rest, but not so good either to read it again.