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395 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 19, 2021
"It seemed every word she had to say, even her presence there was irritating his boss, and he wondered why. Was it her youthful appearance? She was twenty-nine, and by that age she'd accomplished a lot. Maybe the seasoned sheriff disliked that, maybe it made him feel insecure. That had to be it, because Elliot hadn't noticed a gender bias in his boss in the five years he'd worked for him."I read that thing and only one question came to mind:
"Um....hello? It's because Kay is no longer an active FBI agent and is essentially a civilian , which your boss explained to you pretty damn clearly, Elliot. Don't be an ignoramus spouting off accusations that your boss can't handle young, successful women. How utterly lame is this?"I mean come on! Was he really that dense? Did this dude have the memory of a goldfish? Furthermore, why am I, the reader, being forced to assume the same? I've read stuff like this happen in books before, where a character has a sudden shift in personality or revelation or the like, and it makes zero sense for it to be there. So I think the true culprit of this is the author herself. She either straight-up forgot what she had her characters do and say as she continued her story (perhaps got lost in a few drafts), or she purposely opted to use this moment to instill nonsensical methods of elevating her heroine into something of a "Mary-Sue" category, a female who can do no wrong, who knows everything, who must prove the horridness of the evil men who think she's either too attractive or too successful to be worth a damn. This in turn will inevitably spark some sort of flimsy romantic interest between two characters, because the man of the two will surpass all the other evil men for being the only one capable of being able to "get her." Which, whatever, that's not surprising. But don't dare just write one thing for me to read, then completely turn the tables as if the first thing you said didn't exist. I legit rolled my eyes. Yeah, let's just introduce some bogus moment to have a man look down at her for being a woman so said woman can be even MORE a top-notch perfect person. Gag me.