Operation Make Naomi a Boss is a sweet, small-town friends-to-lovers story with fake dating, baked goods, and a heroine learning to take up space...and I genuinely rooted for her the whole way through.
Naomi Tillman is stuck working IT at her dad’s car dealership, constantly downplaying her own dreams, and absorbing criticism from the people closest to her. Enter Robbie: her old high school friend turned professional bassist who breezes back into town just in time to pretend-date her when her dad starts in on his usual negativity. The fake relationship sets off a slow shift, and it’s heartwarming to watch Naomi begin to advocate for herself and take steps toward opening her dream bakery.
The dynamic between Naomi and Robbie is the heart of the book. Their friendship is the kind where someone just gets you, and the dual POV really works here. It’s lovely to see both of their perspectives and how deeply they care for each other (even before they realize it). That said, some of the character growth felt a little fast for me—I wasn’t always sure what exactly sparked Naomi’s decision to finally make changes in her life, and I found myself wanting more of that internal turning point.
Writing-wise, there’s a lot of potential here, but I did struggle with some of the execution. The prose leans heavy on telling over showing, and I often wished the story would let readers connect the dots instead of spelling things out. For example, we’re told multiple times early on how Naomi is aware of how people take advantage of her—I would’ve loved to see that unfold more subtly. There are also some dialogue and internal thought choices that pulled me out of the moment (a guy thinking about someone’s “strappy nude sandals” made me laugh a bit). But still, the heart of the story—the friendship, the romantic build, Naomi’s desire to change—shines through.
I also had mixed feelings about how neatly everything wrapped up. While I love a hopeful ending, it did feel like everyone had a major change of heart—Naomi’s dad, Robbie’s estranged family, even her friend Gabby. It’s sweet, but a bit too tidy to be entirely believable. Granted, one can argue that we don't need rom-coms to be entirely believable!
That said, this is a super cute story without being overly saccharine, and I genuinely enjoyed watching Naomi step into her power. If you love cozy, small-town romances with fake dating, personal growth, and a friendship that grows into something more, this one might be for you. Megan Reinking is one of the best indie romance/rom-com writers out there, and I will continue to read and recommend her work!
Thank you to the author for the advanced copy of this book. All opinions and views are entirely my own.