Revised Second EditionJake took a deep breath and paused for a second. What was happening to him and Cassie?
A few weeks ago, Cassie hated giving head. Now here she was, on her knees, with a big black cock in her mouth while Jake watched on, frustrated, desperate, and unable to touch himself.
And the worst part wasn't watching his girlfriend sucking a huge black cock. No, and the worst part wasn't watching how turned on she got from sucking it.
The worst part was knowing she was only getting turned on because Brandon, the black guy whose massive cock was in Cassie's mouth, was able to give her something Jake knew he never could. And no, it wasn't the size. Well, not just the size.
It was the power, the control, the way he dominated her. Jake couldn't do that. It just wasn't him. As Cassie once drunkenly told her best friend, "I hate sucking cock, unless I'm made to. Then I f@#ing love it!"
Grab This One, If You Like Reading About A Woman Humiliating And Taking Control Of Her Man
I really liked this one at least for as far as it went.
She starts out with no ideas of hotwifing, but she learns more and more about it and they play a lot of make believe, allowing her to learn more about his kink.
Eventually she gets really turned on by the idea of her being able to have sex with any number of other men. And especially when she learns what it’s like to hold power over her boyfriend.
The build up to this point is exciting to me in many different ways, all of them, good.
Then she picks a bull and loves to submit to him. And then her bull helps her to learn how to take complete control over her boyfriend, so much so that she’s ecstatic.
This all takes up the first 2/3s of the book. Final third is her getting and taking all that she can from her bull, while all the time he’s showing her how to take control over her boyfriend.
That single episode is extravagant to a fault, in my opinion. Over and over it talks about how excited she is about doing this. All the time she’s edging him until she gives him the most wonderful ruined orgasm.
All of this is exciting, but I would have loved a little less on this one occasion and more on subsequent events. I think this would easily become a 2 book series, as reading about how she continues this and how far could she take him. How low would he go for her? Would he perform homosexual acts to excite her or would he just do further degrading things to her satisfaction.
Yes this is one time that I wouldn’t mind if the author adds a late edition to the story.
Good work to the author, but you could add a lot more to the story of this couple and keep us excited all the time.
A pretty good read, not the best in this sort of stuff, nor the worst. The sex scenes run a bit long and repeat a bit, which is mildly irksome. But that's a small gripe.