I'm not normally an avid reader of historical fiction, but when i saw this book was a fictitious recollection of Perry's first arrival to Japan in 1853, I decided to give it a try. And not only was it a historical fiction, it was a double whammy as it was also a "Doorstop" (aka 670 pages, which i consider pretty long) and while i've read a few, i'm not normally a reader of books that long with some exceptions such as Stephen King.
But, i love the subject matter and the writing style was very easy to read. However, Sorry to say, this book got worse and worse as it went on.
To start, this book is about the arrival of Commodore perry to Japan in 1853 and opening trade with Japan. The main characters are An american dude named Eden and a Prince named Tanaka. As the background situation of the Japanese not wanting foreigners around and perry trying to deliver the letter of trading intent, Eden is off wanting to do his own thing.
Normally, i like to keep my reviews spoiler free, but i find it impossible with this one in order to fully explain my displeasure.
So Eden gets a dream on the ship which basically says "hey, you should go climb mt fuji" to which his japanese buddy (a fisherman who got shipwrecked in america) tells him "no, that's a stupid idea. it's a very delicate political situation and fuji is sacred. if you're caught you will be killed." he's like "naw it'll be fine." and sneaks off the ship after his superior tells him not to go.
So yes. our main character is endangering the entirety of relations with Japan because a dream told him to go climb a mountain. wonderful.
Meanwhile, a geisha girl decides she wants to go on an adventure and not just sit around all day listening to stories of what's going on with the Americans. She escapes, she meets Eden, they bang, she gets recaptured and after that, we see her one more time stating she's pregnant and that's it. that's all we ever see of her again. No character arc, no growth, no nothing. She shows up, gets pregnant, and that's it.
I was EXTREMELY disappointed with the handling of this character. they set her up in a way you thought that there would be this adventure with Eden and her, learning about each other, slowly falling in love, overcoming prejudices, etc. Nope. They just meet, bang, and she's essentially written out of the story. Awesome. This guy can't write women. there's only 2 in the entire novel of 670 pages and one's a maid. He essentially uses the Geisha as a walking womb as well as every time she's on screen he dis-proportionally talks about her body. Look, i don't mind some fanservice in my books, but at least give her some agency other than "gets captured and is pregnant" like hot damn.
Eden also is kind of a lame character. His whole character is "i need to climb this mountain because a dream told me to." no matter the danger he puts anyone in. It's his desire to go climb that mountain. It even gets his best buddy killed. And he never says "i shouldn't have left" he justifies it to the end. His motivations make no sense and is hardheaded and frustrating.
The other character, the prince, definitely has more development than either the Geisha (Tokiwa) or Eden. in the end he ends up HELPING Eden several times and works to prevent fighting from the two sides. not for all true altruistic ends mind you, but he still tries to prevent violence.
The rest of the book is just historical politics about the Japanese saying "we don't want your letter leave" and Perry going "no take our letter to the emperor!"
Like rinse and repeat that 20 more times and that's your novel.
It started out with an interesting premise. I was looking forward to a story about a guy and geisha going on an adventure of peace together, but sadly that's not what it boiled down to. It became very schloggy and boring towards the end. Eden was unconscious, Tokiwa was out of the story, so in the final 1/4 of the book, it was either Tanaka or random people we didn't really care about.
I was super excited in the first 15% of this book and was all ready to give it a 4.5-5/5 but MAN did it go downhill.
That being said, i can't justify more than a 3. And that's sad. Because i really wanted to like it more than i did.
Even 3 out of 5.