Busted Out is the story of three months of the lives of five Canadian high schoolers in the autumn and early winter. There's Nick, the responsible big brother of his baby sisters, struggling to hold home and family together with an absent father and an alcoholic mother; there's Jay, the reluctant ice skater, resentfully desperate to please his authoritarian father; there's Kim, whose mother recently died of cancer, trying to escape her abusive father; there's car fanatic Mike, staunchly loyal to his Italian family; and younger sister, Katy, a pretty popular girl who's main interest is running and sports.
The book starts with a dramatic finding in the woods, when Katie discovers a frozen body. The rest of the book tells the events leading up to this discovery. As the story unfolds, all their lives become more closely connected: the common factor being poker. Although it affects them in very different ways, no character is left unscathed.
Marjorie DeLuca is a confident writer, who holds her readers in suspense; her writing gets gradually more compelling, leading to the dramatic conclusion. Pace is well maintained. Characterisation is mostly clear and believable, and her characters are sympathetic. Dialogue, similarly, is clear and well written, and each character has their own distinctive 'voice.'
The main problem with this book was it is in need of a good edit! There were a number of minor inconsistencies, as well as some formatting errors that meant random words or characters were put in bold for no apparent reason. Mostly, though, it was the general language that just needed a good fine tuning. Slightly awkward phrases, or repeated words were relatively common.
As well as that, there were some practical inconsistencies with events which I presume DeLuca wasn't familiar with. There is a scene towards the end with a crashed car; if the gasoline was over the road as she described, then the car wouldn't have gone up in flames slowly, it would have exploded straight away with no time for Jay acting the hero. Along similar lines, Nick's sisters were particularly unbelievable, and I wonder if DeLuca has had much experience with small children.
Overall, it was an enjoyable and pacey, although I was a little disappointed (and felt a bit cheated!) with the ending.
Thank you Marjorie - I won this in a Good reads giveaway - and keep on writing!