I was highly disappointed with Long Hill Home. I honestly tried to enjoy it, but it felt so wrong.
First off, it was totally rushed. It takes a long time for victims of sexual abuse to recover - even the bravest ones struggle. In Long Hill Home, it took such victim - Kelly - two weeks to go back to more or less where she started. Also, I find it hard to believe that victims realize the seriousness of their mental health problems five days after the attack! Add to that the "suffering" of her family. Yes, it's all a big shock, but it takes time to sink in.
Kathryn, as a former lawyer should have also realized that the arrest and trial don't happen as quickly as described in the book. Also, very rushed. She also could've done a better job in shattering rape myths rather than simply ignoring their existence, added some suspense (I swear I was waiting for an unexpected plot twist - e g falsification or disappearance of DNA) and created a stronger and more consistent rapist (have you seen SVU? good example at how crinimals don't just give up).
Then there's an issue with Kelly's social support. I can see how her children would be of little help and I can see how their behaviour can be altered by their mother's distress (though not at this pace, but from now on I'll ignore the speed of the book). After all, I know what it feels like, though I had different circumstances and I actually witnessed it rather than hear about it, like Anna and Grace did. Dan, Kelly's husband, and Sam, her friend and I'm-in-love-with-Kelly-yet-I-never-admitted-it-to-her-type-of-men, were two jealous-type of angry men, typical for abuse survivor. I didn't like them both so much because of their behaviour. Dan, though, was the worst with his controlling behaviour and supposed innocence. His behaviour either should have been addressed better or changed entirely to show how social support providers need to react to the disclosure of the abuse and survivor's cooperation with it. Instead, the author showed Kelly as a wife guilty of basically being raped and, in turn, being so fucked up. He is a typical I-m-a-nice-guy-and-shit-but-as-long-as-everything-is-ok-and-you-r-the-same-person-I-married. Yet, as soon as there's a problem - he doesn't understand his wife and seem to not want to be married to her. W T F?
Thanks to this book, I think I'll never be able to look at the phrase "I miss you" the same way... Because the "I miss you" they both give each other is, apparently, not the kind you'd expect but purely sexual. So, basically, as soon as two people don't have sex, they can be in the same room, sleep in the same bed and breathe the same air, and they'll still "miss" each other? I honestly snorted at this.
Long Hill Home is about finding home, right? So, when Dan and Kelly finally have "normal" sex, they both feel home. So, all goes back to sex and sexual intercourse between a man and a woman with the man having his penis in the woman's vagina. That's home. Ugh.
Now to a slight review of the other two characters.
Let's start with Chad. An 18-year-old who knows what he's supposed to do when he finds Kelly and he even thinks of the right thing to do, yet fails completely. And he's not smart enough to understand that his airplane ticket he buys right after he supposedly saves Kelly will make him look guilty af. In addition, he doesn't even mention the ticket. I understand that he may not have Inet (or even computer as a matter of fact), TV, credit card or anything... He has a driver's license and a high school diploma, and he was even able to figure out what happened to his mother, so he should be smart, right? Well, apparently he's not. Instead, he makes many mistakes, ends up in prison, almost gets raped - and suddenly he's changed! Also, why does he have to meet a girl-he-falls-in-love-with-immediately on a plane to his mother's new home? Can't it be a boy, who will become his friend? Because, obviously, the author planned Chad and the girl to be together happily ever after. She is very clear with that. But: 1) love doesn't come so fast, 2) HE NEVER HAD ANY FRIENDS/DATES AND NOW HE'S CHANGED AND IN LOVE? 3) how does he meet attractive fully abled straight girl on a plane who, obviously, sits next to him and decides to talk to him and then help him? This nonsense just makes me feel uncomfortable.
Maria... First off, her comment about her being uncomfortable with her huge belly makes me feel uncomfortable. She's on the last week of her pregnancy, with the guy who loves her regardless of how she looks or feels, but she still feels shame for her "ugly" body. Pregnancy should be more than just about being fat. It IS more than just about being fat. Oh, wait - it ISN'T even about being fat. Such statements only bring out sexism and "perfect body" notions. While we at it, let me just say that her boyfriend's behaviour is so controlling! Run, Maria, run!
I'm too lazy and uninterested in addressing other issues I had with the book - and they're minor and caused less confusion in my mind. The last thing I want to look at is the narration. It was super weird, with one character being a narrator, yet less relevant one narrating as well. For example, here you have Kelly - the narrator - talking to Sam over the phone, yet you know when he scratches his head or sth and what he feels. Or, you have Maria as narrator, yet she's not even in the same room when the author describes the actions or feelings of a detective or Maria's boyfriend. Timing of the book also inconsistent: here you have 9:15 am, and the next chapter it's back to 8:30 or sth.