JD Says...
Reverie is a nice story, but it needs a lot of work.
I’ll focus on the plus side of my review. The story is sweet and would be categorized as Christian fiction. The era is appealing to faith-based readers.
Unfortunately, there is nothing fresh about this story line, it’s all been done before. The characters are not fleshed out and even get out of the “character” Yother was attempting to build for them. The author takes some liberties with historical dialogue, using terminology which had not yet been coined during the time frame of her story—a pet peeve that will always remove me from the story. Head hopping also takes me out of a scene and there was plenty of that to go around. Hetty and Lottie are a couple of the character’s names, which is fine until you get them in the same scene together. I will stop there.
I am providing 2.5 stars because I believe the author has talent and can only get better.
If there were less repetitive narrations, less head hopping, less swearing, tighter dialogue and story lines, I might have enjoyed where the author was trying to take me. I will give Christina Yother another book or two and see how far she’s come with her writing style before I check her out again. Who knows, I may become a fan someday, just not with Reverie.
Jan Says...
I love historical fiction, especially one with a Christian world view.
For me, the whole point of writing historical fiction is to put the reader in the time and place – making the reader feel they are immersed in it. As a reader I love reading about other times and the people that lived in the past.
Although Reverie is a sweet story with some good characters and plot line, I felt let down by the lack of some important elements, the first being I never got that sense of where the story was taking place or the time frame. At no time did I feel connected to the era, and I lacked anchoring through the setting.
I had great difficulty involving myself in the characters because of the ever changing points of view. One phrase was seen through the eyes of one character, and then all of a sudden I was in the head of another character. There are rules about “head hopping” in a scene, for good reason.
Hetty, the main character is a likable woman, with a noble dream and solid character.
That came through very clear, and I liked her. But I never got to know her as I wished I could. The same for all the other characters that seemed to come and go through the story with no feelings (other than those that were told to us by the narrator) or solid interaction. I will say, the author did a good job of adding conflict and created a welcomed change of heart for the love interest I rooted for.
The dialogue was a bit trite, and the action explained, not shown through revealing character emotions and motives. I would have appreciated the story more if more attention would have been paid to flow and depth of character believability.
I wanted to like the story more than I did, but two stars is all I can give Reverie.