It feels as though the author sat down with a list of every trending BookTok tag and refused to hit "publish" until every single one was checked off.
The result is what can only be described as a Paranormal Buffet. The narrative is cluttered with vampires, dragons, nebulous magic systems, and the inevitable "shadow-weavers." When an author introduces one of these elements, it usually requires careful integration into the lore. When they introduce all of them, the world feels less like a cohesive universe and more like a high-budget costume party where nobody knows why they’re there.
Also it is impossible to care about the stakes when the goalposts are constantly being moved.
This approach extends to the relationship dynamics, which are a chaotic slurry of:
* Fated Mates: The ultimate shortcut for actual character development.
* Thrall and Reverse Harem: To ensure the protagonist is never without a constant stream of validation.
* Questionable Power Dynamics: Including a student-teacher relationship that feels more predatory than provocative.
The fundamental issue is that when you use every trope, none of them matter. The "enemies-to-lovers" tension—the very engine that drives the genre—is completely DOA. Why bother with the delicious, slow-burn agony of two people overcoming their differences when a magical "mate" bond does all the heavy lifting?
The mark of a great romance is that you would want to see the characters talk even if they weren't allowed to touch. In this series, if you took away the physical contact, the characters would have nothing to say to one another.
The leads are not people; they are cardboard cutouts designed to react to the FMC. There is zero genuine connection or chemistry between them because they lack distinct personalities. Instead of building a relationship through dialogue, shared trauma, or intellectual compatibility, the author relies on two crutches:
1. Endless, Unskilled Smut
The "spice" in this series is plentiful, but it is also repetitive. We are subjected to chapters upon chapters of sexual encounters where the FMC possesses what can only be described as a biological superpower to reach climax every two minutes, and every male character's sole personality trait is an all-consuming desire to sleep with her or protect her! By the middle of Book Two, these scenes lose all impact and become "skip-ahead" material.
2. Problematic Behavior Framed as Romance
Perhaps the most jarring element is the reliance on toxic power dynamics. Controlling behavior, stalking and harassment are never properly addressed or critiqued. Instead, they are framed as "hot."
World-Building (or Lack Thereof)---
In Firestone Academy series, we are forced to wait until this installment just to understand some basic mechanics of how the world functions,still not enough. The first two books are spent wandering through a haze of vague descriptions and generic settings that feel like they were pulled from a "Fantasy 101" screensaver.
The "Copy-Paste" Feel---
Reading this series is an exercise in literary déjà vu. Every scene feels like a diluted, "Great Value" version of a more famous, better-written fantasy series.
* The shadow-weaving is a direct, less-interesting lift from A Court of Thorns and Roses or Fourth Wing
* The dragon lore feels like a simplified echo of Fourth Wing
*The academy setting and the trials could be any of the "dark academia" novels,would dare to say even Harry Potter
* The political court intrigue reads like a spark-notes version of The Cruel Prince.
The lack of originality is more than just a minor annoyance; it’s a distraction. It’s a patchwork quilt of other authors' ideas without a single unique thread of its own. When you can see the seams where one author's idea ends and another's begins, the "immersion" of the story is shattered.
One Book Stretched Into Three---
If there is one phrase that defines this series, it is "This could have been an email." Or, more accurately, "This could have been a standalone novel."
This series is the definition of filler. The entire 1,000+ page saga could have been condensed into one tight, 350-page novel without losing a single relevant plot point. Instead, the reader is subjected to:
* Repetitive Inner Monologues
* Circular Arguments
* Unskillful smut
The bloat serves no purpose other than to fulfill a publishing contract or to capitalize on the trend of "chonky" fantasy books.
Final Verdict---
I’ll admit it: I love to hate this series. There is a certain guilty pleasure in seeing how far a story can lean into its own absurdity. However, I’d love it significantly more if I hadn't wasted the dozen or so hours.
If you are looking for a fantasy romance that offers a unique world to get lost in, keep looking. Go find the books this one is trying to copy; you’ll have a much better time. This series isn't a story; it's a product, and unfortunately, it's one that has been past its expiration date since page one.
If you are looking though for something free in your Kobo plus account to play in the background,go for it, you might even enjoy it!