Description
In Shatter, Nicholas Wolfe’s first book in a new series, we follow Luca, the sheltered son of an
extremely powerful ruler (both his father, X'avion, with his raw power, Potentia, and his mother,
Yuna, with her precision-based abilities, Certus) and an extraordinary force (both his father, and
a being of infinite power); on the eve of his 18th birthday, Luca is violently ripped away from his
home, hidden by his mother for reasons unknown, and through an impossible journey will be
transformed from naive and spoiled prince to ruthless survivor trained by a long lost grandfather
and to finally discover dark truths about both his kingdom and his family.
Good Points:
Wolfe's use of a dual magic system adds depth and complexity to a very complex and nuanced
world. The differences between the two types of magic are well defined, and Wolfe's
philosophical exploration of this idea makes for a very interesting read. The magic system isn’t
provided 'ready made' - we as readers get to 'learn along with Luca' about how both Potentia (raw
elemental) and Certus (precision-based, or the ability to affect the fabric of reality) work;
therefore we get to experience through Luca's eyes the nuanced way these two types of magic
work together.
Luca undergoes an extraordinary transformation throughout this entire novel, from being
arrogant and inexperienced to humble and strong. Luca’s great-grandfather played a tremendous
role in his growth, however, both in terms of how he treated him and how he felt about him. The
overwhelming sorrow of having lost (in a manner of death) his mother and being thrown away
from his father put so much emotional pressure on me and made me emotional for the storyline
itself and everything about it. The relationship between Luca and his grandfather was one of
being judgmental, terse and ruthless but at the same time having a lot of impact on the
progression of the storyline.
The pacing of the entire story was great with the prologue Introducing all of the mystery
elements and their importance to the storyline. Transitioning from castle life to training in the
forest to being a resident of Last Stop was a very seamless transition and well done. The pacing for revealing the tyrannical regime of the kingdom and Luca’s individual stake in it was very
well done without having so much information dumped at one time.
Other key characters, such as Luca’s friend, Shari, who is a complex and fierce character, the
kind innkeeper, Latrice, the wonderful and loyal blacksmith named Bron all add depth and heart
to the storyline as a whole. Each of these characters support Luca and bring him closer to the
realization of who he was as a person and what he was going to become as a person.
Thematic elements of Control vs. Power, Truth vs. Deceit and Identity vs. Duty run through out.
In addition, Luca's struggle between the concept of his father as a King and tyrant, adds a level
of moral ambiguity to his character. In addition, the loss of those chased away or broken under
the King's rule (the "lost"), ties all of the characters together.
Areas of Improvement:
While the Prose is functional, it can seem sporadically jarring, between lyrical scenes and
simple, utilitarian Prose. Additionally, in early chapters, some of the Dialogues seem to be more
Exposition and stereotypical Fantasy Banter. Furthermore, There is first of all, Luca's internal
voice, whereas, his External Prince Voice tend to contradict one another, maybe this was
intentional, but it does create a feeling of inconsistency with the reader.
The majority of the story is written in a very close POV to Luca, which works very well when
capturing his travels. However, there are some instances where emotional aspects of other
characters, can be expanded upon outside of how Luca experiences them.
The Magical System is good, but not much has been done with the kingdoms, histories and
religions. Some examples are, the "Precursor" terminology has not yet been explored but there
are readers who will want to know what that means.
While the pacing of the previous chapters has been swift and intense due to Luca's rigorous
training regimen, the pacing of town life and the intrigue surrounding him has slowed down
significantly after the end of these sequences. While the inclusion of romantic tension towards
Latrice has been handled well, there are concerns that this may have taken away from the
primary focus of the book: that of the assassin and Luca's hunt to find him.Exceptional Features:
Grandfather — A scene-stealer who shows up in almost every scene and adds significant depth to
it through his no-nonsense style of parenting, tough love, and wisdom.
Action Scenes: The quarter-staff martial arts training and combat scenes are very vivid and
kinetic, making them feel real and as though you are right there. The water dragon approaches of
martial arts are also very well conceived and imaginative.
Emotional Impact:
Luca's discovery regarding his mother's seemingly tragic fate and the
tyrannical reign of his father create a powerful emotional payoff for the reader, offering excellent
incentive for a sequel.
Final Thoughts:
Nicholas Wolfe's The Precursors: Shatter is an excellent first book in what will clearly be an epic
fantasy series that fuses traditional fantasy themes with innovative concepts and immense
emotional power. Additionally, Nicholas Wolf's ability to create character-driven storytelling,
coupled with his talent for developing systemic magical systems, gives me great confidence in
his ability to deliver a compelling and powerful story.
Though it is not yet 100% polished, the narrative drive, interesting world-building and a
protagonist readers will root for will keep the reader interested. Readers who enjoy authors such
as Brandon Sanderson (for magic systems) and Robin Hobb (for rich characters) will likely enjoy
this book.
The book is rated 4 out of 5 stars and is highly recommended for fans of epic fantasy, including
those who like political intrigue, magic systems with philosophical depth and training arcs. The
book is a great start to a series with tremendous potential to continue, and the excerpt indicates it
is just the beginning phases of development.
I am very excited about the sequel, as Luca's impending confrontation, revelation and probable
revolution have been set up by the story. Additionally, unanswered questions regarding the
Precursors, the assassin, and the sheer corruption of the king will provide for an exciting and
long-running series to come.