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381 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 6, 2015
Aw man. Author's heart is in *all* the right places, but the skill level here just… isn't up to the task. We're talking solidly D grade. The writing is just… artless. The short declarative sentences, the telling (and telling) instead of showing, etc. It just feels sooo amateur, and the story— such as it is— is already dragging due to repetition. It's *been* dragging, tbh. At this point I'm thinking the arson-mystery side plot (and massive page count!) is hopelessly overambitious. This needed an editor, and frankly, some workshopping.
I'm super bummed, because unless SOMETHING improves soonish, I'm not sure I'll be able to finish this. :(