Being an Arcane witch should come with a rulebook. Or at least hazard pay.
My magic is changing, again, and not in the fun, “look what I can do now” way. More like the “hope you enjoy staring into the void” kind of way. The Morven curse is awake under my skin, whispering, waiting, and I’m doing my best not to unravel in public.
Then a boy drops into a magical coma at the Carnival of Masks, and everything goes to hell. The magic clinging to him isn’t witch, fae, demon, or anything else I’ve ever seen. It’s something older. Wrong. Hungry.
To find whoever, or whatever, did this, I’ll have to chase shadows through Gallows Gate, play nice with people I don’t trust, and deal with the very inconvenient fact that a certain dragonborne warrior keeps getting under my skin.
And through it all, the curse inside me is shifting. Growing.
Kim Richardson is the award-winning author of the bestselling SOUL GUARDIANS series. She lives in the eastern part of Canada with her husband, two dogs and a very old cat. She is the author of the SOUL GUARDIANS series, the MYSTICS series, and the DIVIDED REALMS series. Kim's books are available in print editions, and translations are available in over 7 languages.
Repetitive Formula Wears Thin. Promising Premise, Little Growth
By the third entry in the Merlin Mysteries series, the formula has become impossible to ignore. Each book is a short novella, and unfortunately, each one follows almost exactly the same narrative beats — to the point where any sense of tension or mystery has worn thin.
Once again, Rhea stumbles into a magical crime, is immediately suspected by the townspeople, and finds herself distrusted and ostracised. Despite being warned repeatedly to stay out of it, she ignores all advice, blunders forward, and somehow arrives at the solution largely by accident. Once the truth comes out, she’s instantly forgiven, and the town resets for the next instalment.
The supporting cast remains unchanged and underutilised: Eric the Dragonborn, Selene the Vampire, and Marla the Witch are present and loyal, but rarely contribute in meaningful or surprising ways. They feel more like fixtures than characters with agency.
A particularly tiring pattern is that yet again the victim is a child. While high stakes are important, repeatedly returning to the same emotional trigger starts to feel manipulative rather than impactful.
What’s most frustrating is the continued lack of actual investigative work. Rhea is positioned as someone trained by the Merlins, yet there’s no evidence of detective skills, spellcraft, research, or historical knowledge. Solutions don’t come from deduction, magic, or learning — they come from coincidence and stumbling into the right place at the right time. After three books, the question becomes unavoidable: what exactly did the Merlins train her to do?
For a series centred on magical mysteries, there’s surprisingly little mystery-solving happening. The absence of growth, variation, or increasing competence makes the stories feel static, and by Book 3, that repetition has tipped into outright frustration.
Ultimately, while the premise had potential and the world hints at something richer, Magical Misconducts confirms that this series isn’t evolving. After three books, I’m stepping away.
I always enjoy books by Kim Richardson and when I get caught up on one series, I check the author pages for new books of hers to read! She’s fast becoming an automatic buy for me! This series is about a witch who comes from a cursed family. Every single family member has succumbed to the magic curse and died, either young or crazy or both. Rhea Morven wants to make a difference in the world, even if she’s only going to be around for a short time, so she trains and qualifies to be a Merlin- a magical police officer. None of the ranking members of the organization want to assign a cursed witch anywhere, but they have to send her someplace. Reluctantly, they assign her as a probationary Merlin to a possibly cursed town on the edge of nowhere. When Rhea proves to be a good investigator, thanks to help from her ghostly former Merlin investigator sidekick, local witch friends and helpful vampire, her career is stabilized, although her magic isn’t. I really loved the personal journey Rhea took through these first 3 books- magically, friend-wise, and in her budding love story. The prose and dialogue are sharp, humorous, and snarky. The mystery cases are interesting, and the characters are a lot of fun. There are more books coming into this series and I am looking forward to reading them. For those who like to know these things, there is some violence ( fighting bad guys), some kissing and off screen sex scenes, but no graphic smexy stuff or profanity.
From the moment the Morven curse starts whispering and shifting under the FMC’s skin, the tension never lets up. Her magic is changing in unsettling ways, and the internal struggle adds such depth to an already strong, smart, and refreshingly sarcastic heroine. The mystery surrounding the magical coma at the Carnival of Masks is dark, eerie, and completely gripping. The investigation had plenty of surprises that kept me hooked.
The humor is perfectly timed, balancing the darker themes without undercutting the stakes. And the slow-burn romance? Chef’s kiss. The sexual tension with the dragonborne finally peaks, and I loved that it stayed fade-to-black/closed door while still feeling emotionally satisfying and earned.
The ending is ominous in the best way—unsettling, intriguing, and absolutely designed to make you grab the next book immediately.
The world building and over all plot is great. The mystery always keeps you on the edge of your seat. There are just many inconsistencies to the series in one book something is super secret in an another book it’s suddenly not and everyone knows and there is no explanation. There are just a lot of little things that don’t line up and it’s frustrating. It’s not enough to make me stop reading the series but enough where I am not very invested in it
Love the book, soty great, l9ve, l9ve the characters. One question did the book company require so many pages? I was like there are so many fill paragraphs . Too much back story were on book three, we no longer need the back story or a recount of the last book it feels like your just filling pages, no get to the story. I love her assignments. I didnt know till now there is actually a thing about being too independent, she has people....
The overall story was still good in this installment but the distracting repetition in too many parts bogged down the story. The story was still compelling but the same phrases, usually descriptive, kept repeating, often in the very next paragraph. Off putting but not so much that I don’t plan to finish the series.
If you love paranormal books with strong heroine, lots of sarcasm and dry humor with a very well written story with enjoyable characters then you'll love this. From Rhea to Eryck , Morty , Selena, Yula and Marla I loved all of them and their interactions. And I can't wait to see what's next is waiting for Rhea.
Reah's power goes berserk, and she's afraid to use it. What's worse is that there's someone else out there trying to get her to join their group, or else people will get hurt. And he has power similar to hers. It gets personal when one of her three friends in this town gets targeted. Powers collide, and she might lose everything in this episode. Deeply engaging. I couldn't put this book down.
Not a big fan of some of the repetitive dialogue even if it is supposed to be thoughts. Main character can appear as a cross between arrogant and stupid at times. If you didn't succeed against lesser odds, seems a bit foolish to be all 'I am going to make them pay when you couldn't even win a skirmish'. Still have enjoyed for the most part.
I have been enjoying the story. It is not predictable. There are always some new twists. The supporting characters really add to the story. I’m looking forward to the next one.
Ok books but far too many strange similes for me and the series starts to feel a bit repetitive. I don’t feel strongly about any of the characters, though the ghost is a little fun. I’m jumping out here. Maybe I’ll read the next book in the series eventually, but I feel no urge to at the moment.
Book three continues the storyline but the curse is finally revilled sort of or better understood anyway when are leading lady has to fight the hollow her magic reacts with a twist. ( I keep thinking she will turn into a shifter Dragon) not yet A interesting series.
Wow! Rhea just keeps adapting. I love the transformations. And that crazy typewriter, whew. Eryk and Rhea's dynamic is off the charts sexy. I need more!
Interesting twists across multiple fronts advancing the overarching storyline and keeping this lover of the fantasy genre totally ready for the new book!
This book starts in a flashback but it’s not clear for a bit that it’s a flashback and the segue between then and now is poorly done. There are immediately time inconsistencies in the first couple chapters too.
I actually kind of loathed this book. The MMC is a controlling douche nozzle. The FMC is a moron like 95% of the time and the supporting characters are either a-holes, or useless in the extreme.
There was pretty much nothing redeeming about this book. I gave up when it got to the house arrest BS. I’m so disappointed in this author because I used to really like her.